OS: Marking You As My Own - Page 3

Originally posted by: RoshniSingh

Whoa!! See who is here???

What a pleasant surprise!!!

Seriously... I like suprises and it's among one of the best. 😃

Thanks for this amazing anniversary gift 😳

It was just beautiful..so awesome that I couldn't find the words to explain the overwhelming feeling I'm feeling after reading this OS. It reminded me of old times and all the memories came floating all of a sudden. It's well said that "Some feelings never change no matter how long time has passed and it feels like it has happened just yesterday"

Thanks for PM

LM.. Do continue writing one shots and giving surprises like this. It will be more than welcome🤗

Loads of love

Take care❤️

Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so glad that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ And hehe, I'm seeing you here after a long time too so it's a surprise for me as well. 😳😳 I hope you're doing good. 😃😃


Coming to the review, oh yes, it was a rather special experience writing this too since it was my first work after US. And yes, that's so true that some feelings do stay on with you no matter what. 😛😛


Thank you so much once again, and I hope to give surprises like these in the future as well. ❤️❤️


Loads of love,
LM

Originally posted by: PrinceAsif

An Unexpected comeback didu...the OS is very beautiful... It's been 2 years since MATSH ended...we're still missing it terribly... Pls write another FF didu...be safe & stay healthy

Thank you so much, dear! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ And hopefully, I will be continuing this as a series of one-shots so I hope that you do like it. 😳😳 Stay safe and take care too! 😃😃

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Drunken ranveer n ishani managing him made me nostalgic.i liked a few things about this OS.Ishani saying that tho he is a closed one it does'nt mean that she understands him was lovely.Ranveer's thumb drawing raw print on her wrist n though she doesn't understand it thoroughly she assuming it to be him marking his right on her was very sweet.whatever it is ishani cant escape from d fact that ranveer has lasting impact on her.i loved it very much

Thank you so much, sweetheart! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️


Coming to the review, a drunk Ranveer is always nostalgia galore for me to pen as well. 😳😳 As to Ishaani, atleast in the first six months of the show till he got shot, she did understand him like that but she ended up misreading him more often than not just because she was oblivious. As to her assumption, oh yes, it was certainly a very interesting approach for me to write along the path of as well. 😛😛


Thank you so much once again! ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Mayashelly

Wow.. what a surprise LM. 😃
Loved it a lot..
Really a beautiful OS which terribly gets back to the old times, though we miss them now.
Ranveer's impact on ishani can never be dried, that'sabout their lifetime friendship for 15 years.
And the impact the story gives us also can never ever lost. 😉
Waiting for more OS from you dr. Such an awesome piece.
Keep smiling and take care 😃

Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so glad that you enjoyed it so much! ⭐️⭐️ And how true is it that their 15 year friendship did leave an impact for life on both of them. 😳😳 I'm humbled that you do feel that this story did leave one on you as well. 😃😃



Thank you so much once again! ❤️❤️ Take care and keep smiling too!


Love,
LM

Originally posted by: .Fragrance.

Its a Lovely OS, LM.. 😛 ❤️
Friendship phase and Office track memories combined.. 😛

Great update..

Thank You dear.. 😎

Take care...

Thank you so much, dearie! 🤗🤗 I'm so, so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️

Originally posted by: anaptiras

Wonderful update. Got lots of pleasure while reading it.

😉

Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm glad that you enjoyed it! ⭐️⭐️

Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer

This os was beautiful written LM Just loved it yaar and hats of too you yaar for always finding great title for your FF/OS😆😃👍🏼 Would love to read more if you continue with this😃😃 Tnx for pm😊😊

Thank you so much, cherie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ And I hope to continue this too, if time permits. 😳😳

Originally posted by: NidsJ

Hey LM.. 😊 how are u girl.. An OS after a long time.. ❤️ ❤️ a perfect potion for our sinking hearts on this dreadful day..

now coming to this.. beginning was so cute with their friendly banter.. ranveer caught drinking by her & his antics was ❤️ .. but this Ishani so involved in herself, par bechari kya kare, she needed revenge & since it was against chirkut we are also supporting her .. but pyaar se bhi to she could've handled ranveer but kahan..😆 😆 we are dreaming too much.. 😆 baby is crying now, see Ishani u always do this.. lekin one good news and he is cheered up.. kitni khushi vali moment.. 😆 & their samosa party .. but here Ishani surprised me.. how come she turned so brainy.. 😲 how perfectly she read his soul 👏 , amazing & the way u summarized his fear through her words in that one para is amazing.. it is so real.. 👏 👏 & at end her one line again, haa.. how much I wish to see this Ishani in real.. but in this entire part, some lines caught my fancy & I mixed them, see how it turned out.. "He'd barely been in his senses that time, when she had dragged him to the car and forced him into the passenger seat he was on the verge of tears".. see again many interpretations can happen 😈 😈 .. pata nahi why I always become mad after reading ur work, kuch na kuch mil hi jata hai.. 🤣 🤣

ok.. where was I, coming back to present times with everything changed & she all alone, poor girl.. 😔 nothing is there for her & she is holding on a false hope, she don't admit this but deep down she knows.. & then a ray of light is back for her but past storms are so heavy to bechari kaise kuch samjhe , & here comes back hamari pagal Ishani .. but the way u described her inner turmoil is so good.. 👍🏼 she knows she can't hate him but also can't fall week & therefore trying to break him again but very late she realized that he have nothing left now to loose, how wonderfully realization of his fear dawned upon her.. last part is very well written.. 👍🏼 👍🏼 this realization will increase either her guilt or anger.. But hats off for this brainy version of Ishani.. & in between those hints of undercover passion from her side was 😳 😳

& now the main thing, the new lookout u gave to his wrist lock & thumb impression was really really shocking.. it is him marking her as his own 😲 😲 .. aise to kabhi door door tak bhi nahi socha 🤣 but this is more than welcome.. 😃
U know when I read the heading, I thought it may be something funny or naughty but it turned out entirely different & I loved it but now can you give us something from her side, I mean ranveer did what max he can, now it's sunny's turn.. ab bhai jab he can show his authority on her then she also must settle the scores na 😉 😉 .. do give a thought to it.. 😉
and now we all want continuation.. this u have to do, any random thought will suffice but we want more from you.. 🤗 🤗

Thank you so much, darling! 🤗🤗 I'm thrilled that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ And I'm seeing you after ages! 😆😆 How have you been? 😳😳


Coming to the review, writing their friendly banters is always like a breath of fresh air. 😉😉 Yep, poor fellow got caught drinking plus Ishaani's dadagiri, but abhi he's hopeless against her so he's always used to it. 🤣🤣 And yeah, he does find his khushi waali moments like this only warna bechaare ki kismat mein aisa kahaan... 😕😕


As to Ishaani, oh yeah, she surprised me too here with her brains because like Dv said, the show one was more interested in samosa and chutney only. And I'm happy that you liked the last statement even though the one you highlighted was 🤪🤪. Kahaan kahaan se you people remove all these interpretations, and such amazing ones at that! 😈😈


Moving to the present part, you've explained her whole inner turmoil astutely well. 👍🏼👍🏼 As to the whole thumb lock concept in general, mujhe bhi idea aa jaate hai kabhi kabhi where my innocence lets me get carried away. 😎😎 As to your request, hopefully you're not going to be disappointed in the near future. ☢️☢️


Thank you so much once again and I do hope to continue the series of one-shots! ❤️❤️


Loads of love,
LM

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

"He'd barely been in his senses that time, when she had dragged him to the car and forced him into the passenger seat he was on the verge of tears".. see again many interpretations can happen 😈 😈 .. pata nahi why I always become mad after reading ur work, kuch na kuch mil hi jata hai.. 🤣 🤣

exactly my thoughts after reading what was she doing to him but i controlled of writing it in reviews because i thought LM will come running with chappals for finding something always in all love filled innocent moments.

U know when I read the heading, I thought it may be something funny or naughty but it turned out entirely different

ditto i thought this was something on the lines of the ice trick of ranveer from the US but it was all sober and simple nothing naughty so i controlled my urge otherwise LM would say how much demanding i have become but see LM now don't blame me i have supporters for these demand and its not at all our fault your writing takes us into an overdrive of imagination where we explore all the possibilities.😆😆 so a marking from her side is definitely pending.


this brought back the nostalgia of US and nids i really missed reading your comments and also the fact that only you are my true companion in these imaginatory overdrive.😳😳

Hehe, let the summers set in properly for the ice to melt. ☺️❤️


And you know I can never run behind you with chappals. 😆😆 But when it comes to IshVeer, haven't we all always been greedy? 😉😉 So I don't blame you entirely because imagination overdrive is what makes your reviews even more interesting and fun to ready. 😛😛 As to Ishaani and her marking, that'll be one fun thing to explore when the time comes for it. 😳😳


And yes, I second you on reading Nids comments. 🤣