#4 ~FF: Untold Stories~ - Page 71

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

Dv and Roshni, I've unreserved my posts on Page 91. 😳😳 I'll get to the rest of the comments for this chapter by tonight or tomorrow at the most. 😛😛

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

That's something very high achievement for me. And elvish did told me about the review that she was waiting for specially for the yesterday's chapter of soulmate and i love you both for that.🤗❤️

the criminal should be punished 😆😆😆 and you know the punishment already.😉

just a question you haven't written any caskett fiction

Originally posted by: RoshniSingh

Good to know that you are fine now. Take care 😊

And like you said, this chapter was the best remedy for your fever😉⭐️ It's not just you who feel this way. You know what I lost count, how many times I logged in India forums just to check if LM has updated the chapter or not. I was desperately waiting for it. 😳😳 I had an exam on Tuesday and it wasn't in my town and you won't believe after my exam when I was on my way back to home I was checking my phn if LM has updated or not😆😆

And when I started reading i t, everything and everyone disappeared. I was so lost into it. 😃

Originally posted by: RoshniSingh

LM.. You deserve all the praises, reviews and responses like this😳😳 Your writing is that powerful and beautiful at the same time. <3 🤗

Originally posted by: matsh

Haila LMmm... Two chapters back to back!!

Oh my... Such sweet hottt naughty touching surprises mix...
Res Res..
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Hi Dearie !!

A biggg sorry for not writing any reviews after that long one, though I have been reading each and every chapter as soon as I get time.. ! So be prepared, this is a long one !! 😉😉

The whole London trip seems to be serving them rather well 😃😃, I loved the confrontation with Sherman and so nicely our girl did the job of defending our man, she is so protective really, makes up for all the times he was being protective of her ! 👍🏼and Sherman is a big bitch. I really wonder if he was sorry enough when he finally apologized. 😡😡
But anyway I will ignore the bas***d..

I loved the way they are learning to smile like their original selves and the beautiful conversation they had in chapter 15, 😳😳😳 (alongwith my request my head massage 🤗 🤗** feels important** ) and the way they are getting comfortable with each other .

When she brought the kadha though, I started ROFLing very much thinking of what is to follow !! So innocently and keenly she made him drink it, in all earnest and dekho where it landed them !
😆😆😆

But I am going ahead of myself .. so let me properly review..

First the "Chapter 16: The Intoxicating Dance of Love"

Oh, you had me at hello ! i.e. the title of the chapter itself !! Could not wait to read it and it was let us say just exceeded the expectations superbly !! 😳

Drunk Ranveer and drunk Ishani are so adorable always, they way you made him like a goofball made my heart warm really, he is cuteness overload when drunk and little uninhibited, though not completely (as we would not have minded, you know, and Ishani too !) 😛

Damn, why he has to be so conscious to the depth of his heart ! and the way he said "I am enough for both of us".. made my heart skip a bit, no wonder Ishani was spellbound..

and when she learnt it was her kadha that was the jadd of matter, this is what she thought - "Knowing that there was nothing that she could do about the situation anyway, she decided to take her mind away from upon it and get him to cheer up a little more and contend herself with watching him be innocently happy like this, if he wasn't capable of letting himself be so when in his senses"

ROFL! our girl, so cunning !! Ab ho hi chuka hai to, dekhte hai aur kya hota hai !!😆

IshVeer dancing !! Ooo.. my my .. , that too on that beautiful song, how apt the lyrics are for them, hats off to your selection of the song as well as the poems. Their essence comes out so strongly when they talk about their pain and their most hidden insecurities, it is difficult not to fall in love with them again and again in your FF. '

Their such moments always makes us so teary eyed, no ? They have had such few moments of absolute bliss with each other without any angst or worries or constraints that such scenes are most cherished..⭐️
Really, the whole thing made me absolutely mushy with their cute nok jhok, his drunk puppy antics, his lovely speech about her love making him so happy and how broken he was when he thought he deserved her rejection because he had supposedly betrayed her ... Ishani was devastated to feel his pain once again thinking of that fateful night and how he was a living dead all these years because of her.. She begged him to allow her to heal him but he is still afraid to accept her love, his happiness and trust the future, isnt he. 😭😭😭

But dear, is he ever going to be happy without her ? never, right, so whats taking him so long to get that into his, otherwise-perfectly-sharp but somehow-thick-on-this-point, head ? 😕😕😕

Anyway, as I was grinning reading about the cute kiss and then her effort to take him to bed and the shower scene, bamm ! before I could say whattt, the air around me turned hooottt ! 😳

Ah, the deadly combination of kadha and water !! Makes wonderful memories !! 😉😉😉 So beautifully you have mixed memories from the valentine epi, the drunk ranveer and the drunk ishani one, in this, kudos to you for that. ⭐️

Our man, finally started taking initiative, never mind the instigation required and boy, he was blazing.. ☺️ making our girl perfectly happy and ecstatic, in spite of being a novice really ..

Well, love teaches everything they say and he certainly knows what makes her happy. 😆Ok, I shut up. But this was one hell of an amazing, passionate read, in the best way, of course, and I just my stars that I dont have to read your chapters sneakingly in office any more .. you know, difficult to hide the blushes !! 😛😛😛

Seriously, LM, you have upped your game so much in this department that you are undoubtedly the most sizzling writer on this forum of such scenes, mixing the emotional and physical aspects of intimacy, without a trace of vulgarity or impure language. Kudos to you again for that !
👏

And my regret is only I wish Ishani had little bit of kadha herself too, what chaos would have then descended !! 😉http://www.india-forums.com/edit_post_form.asp?PID=137669519&PN=93

I was really wishing that you will make him remember the night and not make him forget it like the flower con.. and also he did not sleep in wet clothes.. ahem ahem..😳 where are my ice packs when I need them...😆😆

and then we go to the next chapter (Ha, you thought I wasn't going to write about that ? wait , girl 😃😃)

The morning after surprises !! I could not stop ROFLing, the way she was trying to keep all quiet about she being the judd of all nautanki, giving him statements like 'you might have gotten wet'! 😆
like seriously ! 😃😃😃

That kadha must have been really powerful, what with 6 times the prescribed amount of bhaang leaves !! But the surprise of she having changed his clothes was able to get him out of any hangover I suppose !! 😉
I remembered their first SR and the controversial night after she drinking kadha, both ! You have reversed the scene beautifully though ! Made me chuckle to no end !! 😛😛😛 and he feeling contentment, observing the glow on her face and having no clue what kaand he did earlier night !! Oh god, I almost died laughing. It was just too naughtily written !😳😳😳

Well, finally she accepted her mistake in making of the kadha with those err.. controversial ingredient! Their conversation about the old bhaang episode finally came out, I was so waiting for it !!

Idiot Ishani, only if she had realized things earlier.. but anyway we wouldnt have had this lovely FF then !! And Oh, they laughed heartily after ages..

Poor fellow got a fright seeing those love bites and not knowing what happened.. ahem ahem.. 😳😳😳reminds me of that stupid episode when Ishani could not tell 'something' had happened ! and I love that confession he made that he would never want it to happen when he was out of his senses. Now only if our CVs had thought the same too, we would not have got that stupid morning after the flower con, where Ranveer's memory was completely erased about the most important night of his life ! and I am totally agreeing with Ishani about what will happen when he does not restrain himself ! What fireworks will we get to see then.. 😉
But I digress (u know it is always a fav topic!),

Coming back, did your Ranveer remember finally or he just realized that he probably went more ahead than kissing ? I am was not clear about that.. and How nice he is to give her that cute kiss, just like one of my fav scenes during that valentine cute episodes.😳😳

Disha made a surprise appearance and what a girl she has become ! I actually enjoyed the way she embarrassed Ishani/Ranveer and spoke her mind ! 👏👏 The cousins breakup is really sad but the bright side of it is she got closer to Ishani now. So much smarter sister to openly drool on Ranveer and calling him 'hot goods'. 😃😃😃
Ishani would have definitely given her death stares had she not cleared that Ranveer was out of limits for her ! Only if our dumb girl had learnt something earlier from her ! But yeah, now she is smart and more than compensating for it. and the parting shot was well !! very unsafe ! 😆

But our man had the last revenge, making such fake impressions to give her heart attack of losing the contract till she cried ! 😉😉😉 How mean of him but all is forgotten quickly in love ! isnt it ! The king and queen finally are tasting the fruits of their success !! Haye Haye, nazar na lag jaye.. !!

Such such enjoyable chapters LM, God bless you for such wonderful and loving chapters !

I think I crossed my earlier limit of long reviews with this one, but what can I do, you write too fast and I have been busy !!

Lots of love and best wishes for Muharamm, do take care of your health.⭐️

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

thank you dear.

and i can totally understand your condition dear because i myself lost the count of how many times i logged in just to see whether there was any update. Hi fi on that desperation. and it was same oblivion feeling the moment i start reading any of her chapter and this chapter has more than one reason to feel like that.

Originally posted by: Mayashelly

Hy LM
The chapter is out of words
Loved it dr
Ishani teased him and made fun of his hangover 😃
Its lovely dr
Disha she is the one who cannot accept her cousins now and she admire ranveer even now in infront of ishani 😛
Superb dr.
Their london journey was really something beyond
Waiting for your next dr
Keep smiling 😉
Take care 😳