#4 ~FF: Untold Stories~ - Page 70

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

😆now this made me even more happier now feel like dancing 😆😆😆
but i am literally thrilled that my review got so much attention though i tried to keep subtle and less dramatic😉

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

Hehe, I look forward to all of your reviews the same way so this is pretty common for me now. 😆😆 Infact I think both Elvish and I do the same thing when it comes to your reviews. 🤣🤣

That's something very high achievement for me. And elvish did told me about the review that she was waiting for specially for the yesterday's chapter of soulmate and i love you both for that.🤗❤️

the criminal should be punished 😆😆😆 and you know the punishment already.😉

just a question you haven't written any caskett fiction

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hey hi roshni😊
i am fine now was having bad time with fever and study load though but now all fit and fine and after reading LM's chapter a little more fine.😉

thank you dear you think so high of my reviews and read them😳. honestly even your reviews are just as awesome as you say they point very interesting thing.😳
hugs to you also dear🤗

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

I couldn't have been more thrilled and humbled at the same time that you managed to feel so much when reading the chapter and that it managed to keep you that engaged. 😳😳

Haila LMmm... Two chapters back to back!!

Oh my... Such sweet hottt naughty touching surprises mix...
Res Res..
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Hi Dearie !!

A biggg sorry for not writing any reviews after that long one, though I have been reading each and every chapter as soon as I get time.. ! So be prepared, this is a long one !! 😉😉

The whole London trip seems to be serving them rather well 😃😃, I loved the confrontation with Sherman and so nicely our girl did the job of defending our man, she is so protective really, makes up for all the times he was being protective of her ! 👍🏼and Sherman is a big bitch. I really wonder if he was sorry enough when he finally apologized. 😡😡
But anyway I will ignore the bas***d..

I loved the way they are learning to smile like their original selves and the beautiful conversation they had in chapter 15, 😳😳😳 (alongwith my request my head massage 🤗 🤗** feels important** ) and the way they are getting comfortable with each other .

When she brought the kadha though, I started ROFLing very much thinking of what is to follow !! So innocently and keenly she made him drink it, in all earnest and dekho where it landed them !
😆😆😆

But I am going ahead of myself .. so let me properly review..

First the "Chapter 16: The Intoxicating Dance of Love"

Oh, you had me at hello ! i.e. the title of the chapter itself !! Could not wait to read it and it was let us say just exceeded the expectations superbly !! 😳

Drunk Ranveer and drunk Ishani are so adorable always, they way you made him like a goofball made my heart warm really, he is cuteness overload when drunk and little uninhibited, though not completely (as we would not have minded, you know, and Ishani too !) 😛

Damn, why he has to be so conscious to the depth of his heart ! and the way he said "I am enough for both of us".. made my heart skip a bit, no wonder Ishani was spellbound..

and when she learnt it was her kadha that was the jadd of matter, this is what she thought - "Knowing that there was nothing that she could do about the situation anyway, she decided to take her mind away from upon it and get him to cheer up a little more and contend herself with watching him be innocently happy like this, if he wasn't capable of letting himself be so when in his senses"

ROFL! our girl, so cunning !! Ab ho hi chuka hai to, dekhte hai aur kya hota hai !!😆

IshVeer dancing !! Ooo.. my my .. , that too on that beautiful song, how apt the lyrics are for them, hats off to your selection of the song as well as the poems. Their essence comes out so strongly when they talk about their pain and their most hidden insecurities, it is difficult not to fall in love with them again and again in your FF. '

Their such moments always makes us so teary eyed, no ? They have had such few moments of absolute bliss with each other without any angst or worries or constraints that such scenes are most cherished..⭐️
Really, the whole thing made me absolutely mushy with their cute nok jhok, his drunk puppy antics, his lovely speech about her love making him so happy and how broken he was when he thought he deserved her rejection because he had supposedly betrayed her ... Ishani was devastated to feel his pain once again thinking of that fateful night and how he was a living dead all these years because of her.. She begged him to allow her to heal him but he is still afraid to accept her love, his happiness and trust the future, isnt he. 😭😭😭

But dear, is he ever going to be happy without her ? never, right, so whats taking him so long to get that into his, otherwise-perfectly-sharp but somehow-thick-on-this-point, head ? 😕😕😕

Anyway, as I was grinning reading about the cute kiss and then her effort to take him to bed and the shower scene, bamm ! before I could say whattt, the air around me turned hooottt ! 😳

Ah, the deadly combination of kadha and water !! Makes wonderful memories !! 😉😉😉 So beautifully you have mixed memories from the valentine epi, the drunk ranveer and the drunk ishani one, in this, kudos to you for that. ⭐️

Our man, finally started taking initiative, never mind the instigation required and boy, he was blazing.. ☺️ ☺️☺️☺️☺️ making our girl perfectly happy and ecstatic, in spite of being a novice really ..

Well, love teaches everything they say and he certainly knows what makes her happy. 😆😆😆😆Ok, I shut up. But this was one hell of an amazing, passionate read, in the best way, of course, and I just thank my stars that I dont have to read your chapters sneakingly in office any more .. you know, difficult to hide the blushes !! 😛😛😛

Seriously, LM, you have upped your game so much in this department that you are undoubtedly the most sizzling writer on this forum of such scenes, mixing the emotional and physical aspects of intimacy, without a trace of vulgarity or impure language. Kudos to you again for that !
👏👏👏👏👏👏

And my regret is only I wish Ishani had little bit of kadha herself too, what chaos would have then descended !! 😉http://www.india-forums.com/edit_post_form.asp?PID=137669519&PN=93

I was really wishing that you will make him remember the night and not make him forget it like the flower con.. and also he did not sleep in wet clothes.. ahem ahem..😳 where are my ice packs when I need them...😆😆

and then we go to the next chapter (Ha, you thought I wasn't going to write about that ? wait , girl 😃😃)

The morning after surprises !! I could not stop ROFLing, the way she was trying to keep all quiet about she being the judd of all nautanki, giving him statements like 'you might have gotten wet'! 😆
like seriously ! 😃😃😃

That kadha must have been really powerful, what with 6 times the prescribed amount of bhaang leaves !! But the surprise of she having changed his clothes was able to get him out of any hangover I suppose !! 😉
I remembered their first SR and the controversial night after she drinking kadha, both ! You have reversed the scene beautifully though ! Made me chuckle to no end !! 😛😛😛 and he feeling contentment, observing the glow on her face and having no clue what kaand he did earlier night !! Oh god, I almost died laughing. It was just too naughtily written !😳😳😳

Well, finally she accepted her mistake in making of the kadha with those err.. controversial ingredient! Their conversation about the old bhaang episode finally came out, I was so waiting for it !!

Idiot Ishani, only if she had realized things earlier.. but anyway we wouldnt have had this lovely FF then !! And Oh, they laughed heartily after ages..

Poor fellow got a fright seeing those love bites and not knowing what happened.. ahem ahem.. 😳😳😳reminds me of that stupid episode when Ishani could not tell 'something' had happened ! and I love that confession he made that he would never want it to happen when he was out of his senses. Now only if our CVs had thought the same too, we would not have got that stupid morning after the flower con, where Ranveer's memory was completely erased about the most important night of his life ! and I am totally agreeing with Ishani about what will happen when he does not restrain himself ! What fireworks will we get to see then.. 😉
But I digress (u know it is always a fav topic!),

Coming back, did your Ranveer remember finally or he just realized that he probably went more ahead than kissing ? I am was not clear about that.. and How nice he is to give her that cute kiss, just like one of my fav scenes during that valentine cute episodes.😳😳

Disha made a surprise appearance and what a girl she has become ! I actually enjoyed the way she embarrassed Ishani/Ranveer and spoke her mind ! 👏👏 The cousins breakup is really sad but the bright side of it is she got closer to Ishani now. So much smarter sister to openly drool on Ranveer and calling him 'hot goods'. 😃😃😃
Ishani would have definitely given her death stares had she not cleared that Ranveer was out of limits for her ! Only if our dumb girl had learnt something earlier from her ! But yeah, now she is smart and more than compensating for it. and the parting shot was well !! very unsafe ! 😆

But our man had the last revenge, making such fake impressions to give her heart attack of losing the contract till she cried ! 😉😉😉 How mean of him but all is forgotten quickly in love ! isnt it ! The king and queen finally are tasting the fruits of their success !! Haye Haye, nazar na lag jaye.. !!

Such such enjoyable chapters LM, God bless you for such wonderful and loving chapters !

I think I crossed my earlier limit of long reviews with this one, but what can I do, you write too fast and I have been busy !!

Lots of love and best wishes for Muharamm, do take care of your health.⭐️

Originally posted by: RoshniSingh

Good to know that you are fine now. Take care 😊

And like you said, this chapter was the best remedy for your fever😉⭐️ It's not just you who feel this way. You know what I lost count, how many times I logged in India forums just to check if LM has updated the chapter or not. I was desperately waiting for it. 😳😳 I had an exam on Tuesday and it wasn't in my town and you won't believe after my exam when I was on my way back to home I was checking my phn if LM has updated or not😆😆

And when I started reading i t, everything and everyone disappeared. I was so lost into it. 😃

thank you dear.

and i can totally understand your condition dear because i myself lost the count of how many times i logged in just to see whether there was any update. Hi fi on that desperation. and it was same oblivion feeling the moment i start reading any of her chapter and this chapter has more than one reason to feel like that.

Hy LM
The chapter is out of words
Loved it dr
Ishani teased him and made fun of his hangover 😃
Its lovely dr
Disha she is the one who cannot accept her cousins now and she admire ranveer even now in infront of ishani 😛
Superb dr.
Their london journey was really something beyond
Waiting for your next dr
Keep smiling 😉
Take care 😳

Hi LM!!!!!!!

Hope you are good.

Thank you for updating this much fast given the hectic schedule of yours. And for your effort I will try my best to not ask any question in this review. * don't laugh this is the max I can do*

👏👏👏One important thing I just so love the metaphors you use to convey their emotion or describing that moment whether memories slipping away like mist of smoke and the implied meaning to it I always read them with lot of emphasis. This is entirely your effort in writing which put an icing on the cake and this is not only for this chapter in all the previous chapters. That's a small thing but I like it very much about your writing it highlights how much thoughts, efforts and practice must have been put by you to get that right.⭐️⭐️⭐️

Finally morning after the net practice.

This guy is totally idiot when it comes to ishani inspite of watching so many times DDLJ with her he should have understood but don't blame him either evidence were too overwhelming.😆😆

Contentment and tranquillity without even doing anything well I am not saying anything. I am telling you this ishani is a pretty dangerous stalker won't leave ogling at him even in sleep. And is ready with everything. But ranveer is idiot atleast think of something good getting up and shouting about the call first recall the act dear.

The way she was responding to his question you may have done, this might have happened felt like one of those times when caskett asks victim about "hypothetically"😃😃. Ishani is very sharif just like our serial wala ranveer kissed then changed clothes but did nothing.😆😆

His brain is working despite all the kadha effect and he can recall it was the loving kadha that brought such thing from him.

Cannabis leaves that to powdered🤣 like seriously I mean how come she can even think like that. She kept all her brains in closet as well I guess😆😆. And this smart extra talented queen has an equally talented helper just like serial who knows only one thing ji Bhabhi.

Ritika even made kadha 😳72 gun I am glad she is dead otherwise I would have done the deed.☢️

She should do only one thing for him defend him and love him don't do anything to prove that it might be dangerous for both of them.

The moment I think you can never surprise anymore that time itself comes the cold water of reality 😊😊you can do that any number of times and I have stop expecting knowing thing now it's the surprises I am expecting. Honestly she was the one hiding it away this was last thing I expected and still she couldn't decipher the meaning of that moment and proximity well ishani before the divorce was the dumbest creature alive on earth hands down no second thought. So your sentence was true she couldn't recall anything but she had seen everything that happened on holi. 👏👏LM seriously what do you eat for such a plotting brain. You know to spin things around 360 degrees. But given his reaction she wasn't entirely wrong in doing it but dumb enough to understand it. You know what this ishani has just right amount of stupidity and smartness mixed perfectly in her.👏👏👏

This was the other way round and this girl just know how to make him more rattled up but she did put on a good show 👏👏that look giving out exactly the amount needed and coy smiles nothing can beat that👍🏼. They may be king and queen in business world but in their relationship it's the other way round ishani is the king. Technically it should be 5 kisses🤓 or if you consider last day together then 4. Dhikra got attacked his ijjat was in danger ab kisko muh dikhayega?🤣 Don't worry baby ijjat was saved tune apne mathe kalank nai lagne diya🤪. Now that I have promised that I will not ask any question but would point at one thing😳 - giving away to his emotion and following his heart for once. Well rest is rather understood. He was more disappointed at the fact yaar itna sab hua aur mujhe yad hi nai. 😆😆😆

The moment he returned back to hug reminded me of my favourite moment in the serial the day after the valentine when he hugs her after challenging her to come for date that was the best gesture of love I liked it so much.😳😳

"And if this was what he was capable of evoking within her with so much self-control, she wondered what he was capable of without it." This was exactly my thought.😆😆

I hate to admit this but never thought I would say this but I loved disha here so much😳😳 for making our love birds blush so much. * walnut pancakes my favourite *

Disha itna pyar for ishani😭😭 *khushi k aansu* disha can never stay away from party😎 its in her blood and look at the way she is addressing ishani. Behen ka pyar ek taraf just don't ogle at the boy😎 that's the unsaid rule and she is still doing it trying to distract disha I mean I couldn't stop laughing 🤣since this moment to the point disha went. But atleast disha was frank with her opinion he was good as helper and for a change she didn't used servant it was her pretty smart sister who was dumb enough to notice anything beyond his cheeks. Disha was just perfect in every response be it frank opinion on ranveer, on their so called cousins🤡 or the future prospect of their relationship. And her anger pretty much fair given that she was the most who have got hurted because she was from the "clan". Honestly baa brought it but their cousins were really ridiculous I mean gauri just had got married how come she can 😳and sharman🤢 the so called understanding and responsible did it. But karma did paid off baa and everyone were forced to accept the destiny which was written before hand and how much fore sighting HP was to see this all despite the faade of love. I wonder what would have happened had they known it been named on ranveer in first place.😲

Hey that point you mentioned about the money it's the same thing happened with me in terms of living each day I had the same planning sort of thing till the point I faced the biggest life turning event of death and now I live it as lively and best as I could I love that theory even for money as well.

Disha was seriously on testing spree🤣 about her sister's patience 🤪its good she didn't murdered him. Only in ranveer's case its ishani can trust no one😆😆. I so wished had disha seen the marks😉 scenario would have been much more fun bina aag k dhuaan🤪. Last sentences was so needed it was like in the end she voiced ishani's thought. I love disha for whatever she did and behaved there and ranveer being hot blue and white☺️

Crossed boundaries really ok nothing I would say now waiting for the conversation to resume.🤓

they did got the revenge and finally they achieved something which their only god had left for them to do. It was overwhelming their emotions achievements its like finally it paid of everything on professional front every hell and hardwork they have been through it was all worth and to celebrate the moment the silence of room but was filled with each other a universe for them. They had everyone they needed at that moment.👏👏

👏👏This chapter was exceptional for the cheerfulness and achievement of it. fantastic work dear. you amaze me with the fact that how much difference you can bring even with the simplest of the moments.🤗

Thnx for pm

Waiting for next

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Finally morning after the net practice.

NET PRACTICE... 🤣


OMG dv.. this is epic... 😆 😆 totally brilliant.. 🤣🤣

Originally posted by: NidsJ

NET PRACTICE... 🤣


OMG dv.. this is epic... 😆 😆 totally brilliant.. 🤣🤣

thank you dear well this is what they did. and to top it he was even regretting it i bet more for the fact that kuch yad nai kitna kya kiya