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Posted: 8 years ago
Hy LM
This chapter its amazingly marvellous.
Fire over the chapter. 😃
Update soon
Keep smiling 😳
Take care 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
"WOW,This was something, wasn't it?? "
Sooo Passionate, Sooo Intense, sooo Hawwt yet so pure and beautiful ☺️❤️☺️
I knew that something is coming our way in the next chapter but I didn't expect something the way we are going to get that⭐️ Ohh.. You just left me speechless. I had already told you that you are just brilliant when it comes to passionate and intense romance and my expectations rise with every update and you never fail to surprise me.❤️ It was truely mind blowing. You just rocked it girl and seriously it was worth the wait. More than giving review for the chapter I want to praise you for writing it so neatly, so purely that the essence remains intact.❤️ I just feel proud that I got the chance to read your piece of work😊

As I had told you last time too, it reminded me of the episode of Disha's party and it was one of my favourite episodes from the show.Ranveer making cute faces and talking to Ishani in childish way was something I wanted to read and thank you so much for giving that🤗 Like Ishani asked him, "how can he love her so much", I too want to ask the same question. Kaun si mitti ka bana hai wo insan?? He just knows one thing- just to love Ishani unconditionally❤️ Just to make her feel loved and instead of that he wants all her pain, miseries and troubles of her life❤️
The song was beautiful and the farsi lines were suiting him and his love for Ishani. Nothing more amazing I can imagine for their night.

How come Ishani challenged Ranveer?? 🤣 Didn't she know what would be the result?? 🤣
Ab ye to hona hi tha, aise provoke karegi to... ahem ahem ☺️
Like I already told you, it was just superb.
He is inching closer and closer towards the cliff. I just can't wait to read when he 'll take the leap.. He is ready to let it go but yes it'll take some more passionate moments to completely let it go😉 our girl knows how to make it happen. Sydney is waiting to take them few more steps ahead☺️
Thanks for PM
Waiting for next one
Do take very good care of yourself❤️


P.S Don't worry about the updates. It's perfectly alright.
Happy Muhharam in advance 😊
Edited by RoshniSingh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hii Pretty😊
How are you?? I just hope you are feeling better now😊 You had fever know??
After this chapter I was feeling blank. Your review was something that gave voice to my thoughts. There are many things I too felt while reading the chapter which you have described nicely. Hugs to you for an amazing review🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RoshniSingh

Hii Pretty😊

How are you?? I just hope you are feeling better now😊 You had fever know??
After this chapter I was feeling blank. Your review was something that gave voice to my thoughts. There are many things I too felt while reading the chapter which you have described nicely. Hugs to you for an amazing review🤗



Hey hi roshni😊
i am fine now was having bad time with fever and study load though but now all fit and fine and after reading LM's chapter a little more fine.😉

thank you dear you think so high of my reviews and read them😳. honestly even your reviews are just as awesome as you say they point very interesting thing.😳
hugs to you also dear🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: NidsJ

Fire fire fire... Everywhere... ☺️

Readers also will need cold shower after this... 🤣 🤣 😉





Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ And hehe, I think after the reviews, I'm going to need a cold shower myself. 🤣🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

LM readers seriously need ice bath after this
it was
cant reply rushing to read again




Hehe, honestly I've not blushed so much when writing this chapter as much as I've blushed when reading your review. ☺️☺️ But I'm glad that you did like this chapter so much. 😛😛 And how are you doing now, sweetie? 😃😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RoshniSingh

As you had said, you are going to make the wait less painful with this chapter and I found your words true..

HOTNESS OVERLOADED!!





Thank you so much, dearie! 🤗🤗 I couldn't have been happier that you did think so. ⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hi LM 😛

Hope you are good.😊 and dont worry about updates take your time we can understand muharram time can be really tiring.

And I cannot tell you how much I was waiting for this chapter though what it brought along completely blew my mind all the wishes coming true and it seriously wasn't expected at all.☺️

LM how can you write such thing without giving a warning that further contents may cause fire please sit in cool environment while reading.🤓

It was incredibly hot and truly intoxicating girl. Infact I am more spell bound. Need to decrease AC temperature screen is on fire😲. A kadha can do so much where is chaitali I literally respect her more now.😆

Well usually people get irritated and curse the time for breaking their sleep but ishani after this would never complain about it🤣. And there came the loveliest form of ranveer childish🤣 but he always have this control or hesitation about it never subconsciously letting it cross the line or let out his inner feelings. His reply no one told me anything was so laughable😆😆 honestly in this whole chapter either I laughed or blushed so heavily that my cheeks are hurting now🤣☺️. inspite of having a doubt on extra ingredient she made it. Ishani seriously she is one of a kind.

Hey is adele your favourite? And this song their conversation how much he loves her and poor soul thinks that its his fault entirely that they met such a fate😭. I love this guy so much🤗 he is just so surreal no one can love like him never and he was right his love alone is sufficient for them because its so much that there wont b need of anything else🤔. That moment was surreal seeing him fighting his battle from pain alone for both of them his love is sufficient for both of them but his ability to fight and bare all the pain and guilt for both of them is also enough for both of them😭. First time she realised that she was really more than stupid to miss something utterly obvious.

And the fact that she realised that it was she who is going to fail miserably in letting it go and not ranveer because her guilt wont allow her after knowing how much she killed themselves in her emotional turmoil🥺. This song I love it so much 😳😳more now first caskett 😳and now ishveer I have more than one reason to love this song its so awesome and hearing it on a starry night takes me in trans state.😳😳

He never forgets seriously but accept the present and move ahead. What is this?😲

Her paintings were her confession the silent one yet most loud and colourful way of saying her feelings for him and she was on her path to realise her love had she completed all those but...

LM if anything which I love the most in implied meaning was one that dream of phoenix and then this painting both ranveer and ishani's both of them are exceptionally portrayed with meaning which can define their whole lifetime of relationship. And yup though injured and burning phoenix will again gain birth from their ashes I am positive😳. I don't know about their actual proper confession but this confession was the best I cannot think anything more this was simply stunning no words a confession with pain of lifetime. I so loved it LM.🤗 i love you even more now

Well after what is going to happen I wonder how come she can control all her craving🤓. He trust her but afraid to hope for the happiness and don't want any other heartbreak to embrace him into death. This was really painful for both of them knowing about the things and yet running away from it.

Ranveer is back to his antics he looks so adorable in such antics and it reminded of that time when ishani made him stand in the shower he was looking so adorable. Seriously his bathroom antics were awesome how well you have described it dear I so loved it. Don't they know🤪 water, incredibly hot people, intense chemistry, hormones and hidden emotions can bring disaster 🤣and that too pushing just right button none of them like being called wuss and look what a way to contradict it.😳

Galat bande se panga le liya?🤣

*shifts in freeze* LM this was simply fiery, stunning awesome marvellous and what not☺️☺️. Their interlude was so hot passionate and intense. I had expected that trip to London will be remarkable but this much this was hawt hawt and more of it. I am left with many question after this if this was him just moving towards the cliff trying to let go what will happen when he finally let it go?😲 9 days and 4 days is for other things then 5 days what all and how many times its going to happen. 🤪And I expected such kind of move from ishani first😆😆 but you gave me a shock and now I can get the exact meaning when you said the moment ranveer will start expressing his love he will be uncontrollable🤓🤓. Cant blame him really ek to itne sal k controlled hormones and then ishani experimenting on him with kadha🤣 and walking in simply gorgeous avatar😎 apart from that chabhi laga rai hai what can we expect?🤣 she will get tired of the scores😆😆

And she is the one to review it also🤣 I am sure she didn't just meant something and had ranveer not brought his serious face this girl after seeing his bangs on head again would have pulled him in😉. and ranveer turn on karke chod diya wait beta next time. And she actually minded ruk kyun gaya? But ranveer his love is too innocent and pure 😊😊and he need to break that boundary first. But now the question which I know you would be expecting from me😆- is this inhibition only till the time he takes his leap? And in Sydney things will proceed right? I also know that you wont reply directly but I am looking forward to positive hints. Again slept I guess the answer to trust will be through actions.🤔

You know what LM if any one can write all these moments so passionately and yet purely its you hands down. Girl you have really left me mesmerized. It was fabulous I cant even begun it was so awesome. i love you so much🤗dil khush kar diya.❤️

Thnx for pm

Waiting for next.





Thank you so much, darling! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you loved the chapter so much! ⭐️⭐️ And I'm sorry for the delay in the update, but that happened because I wrote both Chapters 16 and 17 together before splitting them into half. 😛😛



Coming to the review, hehe you are right, I should have given a warning now that I think about it. 😆😆 As to Chaitali's kadha, oh yeah the woman deserves props. 😉😉 And coming to Ishaani's sleep being broken like that, I think she would have lost it otherwise but seeing a childish Ranveer enjoying himself and being genuinely happy was much more than she could ever ask for. 😳😳



Honestly, I've had so much fun penning this chapter on the whole right from going childishly innocent to passionately in love that your review only makes me happier. Yes, Ranveer does have that hold upon his feelings even in his state of inebriation, but then again there are some emotions that he does let go off nonetheless. 😃😃 And yes, Ishaani is definitely one of a kind like that. 🤣🤣



Adele isn't my favourite per se but yes, I've heard some of her songs and I do like her as a singer. 😊😊 As to their entire moment during the song, you've explained it with sheer beauty. Coming to the song, it was the first English song that I'd heard and it's been my favourite ever since I heard it first in Season 4 Episode 23. ☺️☺️ And as to Ranveer, he just needs a little push before he does let go entirely even though he's beginning to do the same now, but it will take a little more time before he let's go entirely. 👍🏼👍🏼



I couldn't have been happier that you loved the whole painting confession, and the whole thing in the room and managed to connect to the confession that well. ❤️❤️ As to the implied meaning instances, I simply love penning those instances and the two you pinpointed were certainly one of my more creative ideas so I couldn't have been happier that you love them so much. 😆😆



Moving to the next part, he does trust her even though he doesn't say it, but like you said he's too afraid lest anything should go wrong this time. As to Ishaani and her controlling her craving, if she's waited for so long, a couple more days won't hurt her still. 😉😉 As to Ranveer and his cute antics, oh trust me, I was just smiling like an idiot throughout the time when writing the whole washroom scene as well. ☺️☺️



Oh yeah, water and hormones had to spark that kind of emotions out from them eventually. ☢️☢️ And yep, Ishaani new definitely galat bande se panga le liya. 🤪🤪 As to the whole next paragraph, you've written so much about the scene that I don't have anything more to add to it anymore. As to what's to happen in these nine days, you'll find out soon enough by the end of this book and what's to happen in Sydney then. 😈😈



Yes, Ishaani definitely meant a lot more than something. 😎😎 And like you said, had Ranveer not had the serious look on his face, she'd have pulled him back again maybe. 😆😆 As to Ranveer, he is like that only - he loves her and respects her too much that he feels afraid to break through the boundaries even though he'll only have to break through them eventually. 😛😛 Coming to your question, it will help him let go a little more, but not entirely until he gets that certain push. 🤔🤔



Thank you so much once again, and love you loads! ❤️❤️
Edited by LadyMeringue - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Tintish

Oops😛😛...Hotties...so much fire😛😊⭐️just burnt😛..




Thank you so much, dear! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it so much! ⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mayashelly

Hy LM
This chapter its amazingly marvellous.
Fire over the chapter. 😃
Update soon
Keep smiling 😳
Take care 😉





Thank you so much, sweetheart! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ And don't worry, the next chapter is right here. 😳😳

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