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Gudiya

@o_gudiya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Hii princess...

hope u r doing well..

Lovely update...

Loving the story...

Its shaping well..👏

Eager to read next one...

Do update soon...

Take care and Keep smiling..😳😳

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1042749

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Edited by IshveerForever - 9 years ago

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powergirlpriya

@powergirlpriya

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#83

res😃 i read your both chapter after give u comments ash😳

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ShadikaIshVeer

@ShadikaIshVeer

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Choco monster🤗🤗

I AM SHO HAPPY READING THIS UPDATE Makes me sho proud of my little sis😳😳

Okey I love your Ishani, you have really written her beautifully❤️❤️ You go girl!

OMG Ranveer called her " my flower" ❤️ My shipper heart is sho happy now😳😳

Why did it has to be another girl with Ranveer😡😡 Totally ruined my and Ishani 's mood😭😭

Anyways I did not like that Ishani dont consider herself pretty😭 Poor girl , because of some horrible peope she thinks that 😡 I hope she soon realise that she is beautiful , not by the way she looks but the way she talks , acts , her personality and streng is what define her beauty

Also I loved the title of the chap just as much as you do🤗

Huggie🤗

Loads of love

Cookie monster🤗

Edited by ShadikaIshVeer - 9 years ago

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1042749

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: o_gudiya
Hii princess...
hope u r doing well..
Lovely update...
Loving the story...
Its shaping well..👏
Eager to read next one...
Do update soon...
Take care and Keep smiling..😳😳

Hey Doll 🤗

I am doing well dear , how are you doing ?

I'm glad you like the update 😳

Take care dear and keep spreading love 🤗

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Awesome update.

You beautifully portrayed the thoughts of ishani.

She is a girl who suffered a lot in her life.Her step father always try to snatch her happiness.Her mother always supported her.

And now she got a new job.but i think this place is not safe for her.it is a guess from me.

Because while reading Ranveer's part some dialogues was mysterious for me...

The ranveer's character is totally different ...

What will happen next

Eagerly waiting for your next update

Thanks for the pm

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1042749

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah
Awesome update.
You beautifully portrayed the thoughts of ishani.
She is a girl who suffered a lot in her life.Her step father always try to snatch her happiness.Her mother always supported her.
And now she got a new job.but i think this place is not safe for her.it is a guess from me.
Because while reading Ranveer's part some dialogues was mysterious for me...
The ranveer's character is totally different ...
What will happen next
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm

Hi 😃

Im gald you liked the chapter and the way Ishani's thoughts have been portrayed , you see Ishani is the first main lead in the ss for a few chapters , You will get to know more about Ranveer soon , but as of now the story is concentrating on her POV .

Yes the place she is going to work for isnt good for her ( i wont say its not safe because that isn't the situation ) , Rv's character is completely different from the one from the show , and his character will remain a mystery for a while to keep the suspense element going in the story 😳 , I will update soon 😃

No need to thank me for pm

Love

Ash

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behirlover

@behirlover

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Hey hi dear!!!
This was amazing update I liked it your chapters are going as per their point of view.
She just cannot forget him but will not go near him because of her past.
Ishani was in California and she ran away from demons of her life both "he" and her stepfather what kind of people were they and many things happened to her something which had shivered her soul.
Now she is back to streets with nothing in her hands except for a nightmarish past
Her stepfather didn't even allowed her to complete her education well not everyone is harshad types but she did something nonetheless.
That whole speech she gave to the manager for job was something very nicely written with nothing in her hand not even a degree that was seriously a good attempt.
And there again they met with a little anger from both sides mere at the thought of them being with someone else
And despite having all sort of troubles she can't help but blush at his compliment and then her self respect more bigger than her safety just wanted to be independent
Let's see how the story unfolds further.
Waiting for next

Edited by dvprt418.py - 9 years ago