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Gudiya

@o_gudiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

hii beautiful gIRL...

Loveky chapter i read it...

I want to say more bit lack of time...as my school has started there is lot of work..

But will surely reply u within 2 days but now plss forgive me..

Res..😭

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: o_gudiya
hii beautiful gIRL...
Loveky chapter i read it...
I want to say more bit lack of time...as my school has started there is lot of work..
But will surely reply u within 2 days but now plss forgive me..
Res..😭

Hey there doll🤗

Im so happy you liked that chapter 😃 , and doll there is no hurry to give reviews , review whenever you have free time 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py
Hey hi dear!!!
This was amazing update I liked it your chapters are going as per their point of view.
She just cannot forget him but will not go near him because of her past.
Ishani was in California and she ran away from demons of her life both "he" and her stepfather what kind of people were they and many things happened to her something which had shivered her soul.
Now she is back to streets with nothing in her hands except for a nightmarish past
Her stepfather didn't even allowed her to complete her education well not everyone is harshad types but she did something nonetheless.
That whole speech she gave to the manager for job was something very nicely written with nothing in her hand not even a degree that was seriously a good attempt.
And there again they met with a little anger from both sides mere at the thought of them being with someone else
And despite having all sort of troubles she can't help but blush at his compliment and then her self respect more bigger than her safety just wanted to be independent
Let's see how the story unfolds further.
Waiting for next

I am glad you are liking the story so far 😳 ,

Ishani has had a lot of bad past with the 2 men in her life therefore she cannot forgot , but she will have to go near them if they force her to , she has been taught to take orders from them and listen to them when they threaten her .

😆 ofc not every father is like Harshad Pareak , he was a great great man 😳

Ishani has to fight for her life , but not only for herself but for her mother too , so she had to give it her best no matter the fact that she has no degree or has finished college.

And of course Ishveer , as reading the story you can easily find out that Ranveer has a possessive nature , and Ishani , she is attracted towards Ranveer but she doesnt want to risk falling into the trap of attraction , while as Ranveer ,he doesn't know that it is attraction , he has completely lost all trust in the word "Love" itself and therefore you can see that he covers up the sweet gestures in front of Ishani and at times becomes harsh , but not in a manner to hurt her as you can see he does care for her at some point

Ishani is well known for her self respect and independence so i tried to bring it out in this chapter 😳

Will update soon

Love

Ash

Edited by IshveerForever - 9 years ago

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Sakshi

@sakshi5050

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

hi Ash dear
lovely update nice one
Ishani's thoughts were well written I am loving it
she is feeling for him but because of her past she is hesitating to go near him
waiting to know how the story is going to unfold
keep giving us update dear
update soon 😉😉😉😉😉

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: sakshi5050
hi Ash dear
lovely update nice one
Ishani's thoughts were well written I am loving it
she is feeling for him but because of her past she is hesitating to go near him
waiting to know how the story is going to unfold
keep giving us update dear
update soon 😉

Hi Sakshi 😳

I'm gald you liked the update and the way Ishani's thoughts were written .
I will update soon 😳
Take care :)

Love
Ash

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ShadikaIshVeer

@ShadikaIshVeer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Choco monster your cookie monster will give reviews today🤗 Pinky promise😳😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer
Choco monster your cookie monster will give reviews today🤗Pinky promise😳😳

😆 darling review whenever you want to ,there is no hurry Cookie Monster

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Edited by IshveerForever - 9 years ago

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ShadikaIshVeer

@ShadikaIshVeer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#99

Hey Pingu🤗

So we got the see the other side of "the billionair "😆😆 Glad sent that other girl away , felt bad for her when she cried Excuse me and my heart😆😆 Ahem anyways so I am glad Ranveer saved her from that horrible job and let see what game he is playing😆😆

Looking foraward to see what happens further

A verry good job on the updates honey boo🤗

Loads of love

Shona❤️

Edited by ShadikaIshVeer - 9 years ago