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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnYa_ArMan

Good start, 😭 did she really give him her heart??

Eagar to know more :)


Thanks dear and to be honest , yes.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayeshamukhtar

Ommmggg it's fantastic update soon dear

Thanks dear 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: IshaLuvIshveer

Great start dear...update soon

Thanks for pm dearie!

Isha


Thanks dear 😳 I am glad that you liked it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prologue no.2

She was lying,lying dead on the bed, peaceful. The next few minutes were the worst of my life. Oh! So, I am breathing without her,looking her in this way, was something unbearable for my eyes.As I always wished her to be with me, my eyes filled with water and my face was washed with tears.But there was still a feeling that she is with me, beating fast in my chest. lI hugged her tightly , I hugged a lifeless Ishani , I holded her hand and it was cold .I wanted to give her my warmth but I knew, it's not going to effect anymore. One of her han was closed but not with that extent , she had always . I opened it easily as for she can't stop me anymore or she is not there to stop me. My guess was right , there was another letter for me. Another instruction for me.

Dear best friend,

I know that you are crying looking at me. I just wanted one thing from you , please don't cry. It's hurting me.Take care of yourself. I want you to be happy , I will not force you but I would feel good if you marry Rithika .Although, she is not your Ishani but she loves you , she is a good girl . I am sorry if it hurts you but I want you alive. I give it all for you.

Yours and only yours,
Ishani Ranveer Vaghela.

Reading this , I quickly wiped out my tears as she instructed me. I first thought that she is selfish. She left me for her love , but than I thought she left me for me. I stood up, she was still as beautiful as ever I caressed her hair, kissed her forehead and took her soft hands in mine, I said for your happiness I am gonna give it all .

3 days later.

I was now feeling fine , I didn't cried because she asked me to not to. I was at hospital these days. I felt that really started caring about myself more than ever and I think it is because it's her heart inside my chest.
Today, was her funeral. Ritika was with me , she tried to console me but it's way to hard.

I still remember the day I first met her.


Sorry , I know you all hate Ritika but before getting wicked she was a nice one.
Constructive criticism will be more than welcome and sorry for any typos :)
Edited by Sania03337 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The story without Ishani! 💔💔

Okay, I am ready to read it! But can't see him pain! 😒😒

So the final rites are now done with him still heart-broken. And he's not able to cry, too! :'( :'( And Ishani asks him to marry Ritika! Oh My God! The lady is not wicked here? Or is she?

Update the next one soon, Sania. But a part of them is already dead! </3 </3
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bloomfield

The story without Ishani! 💔💔

Okay, I am ready to read it! But can't see him pain! 😒😒

So the final rites are now done with him still heart-broken. And he's not able to cry, too! :'( :'( And Ishani asks him to marry Ritika! Oh My God! The lady is not wicked here? Or is she?

Update the next one soon, Sania. But a part of them is already dead! </3 </3


Well,I can't tell you anything as it is the very beginning but I feel good for Ritika.

And believe me Ranveer is gonna stay happy without Ishaani.

Thanks dear. I will update it as soon as possible.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi sania,
This is very good FF . I also didn't know that how story is going to be without ishani, but let's see. Start was very nice. And I love sadism too. :D

Same here aaru! I too didn't knew that there are many sadists here. Good to hear that!: D

Is ritika really good in the FF? :o
This is getting really interesting. So sad Ranveer couldn't even cry. :(:(


Please send me PM next time you updates.

VC
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: VC288

Hi sania,
This is very good FF . I also didn't know that how story is going to be without ishani, but let's see. Start was very nice. And I love sadism too. :D

Same here aaru! I too didn't knew that there are many sadists here. Good to hear that!: D

Is ritika really good in the FF? :o
This is getting really interesting. So sad Ranveer couldn't even cry. :(:(


Please send me PM next time you updates.

VC


Thanks dear. Actually, I prefer Sadism.
Well, the same answer I can't tell you anything.
Surely, I will pm you on the next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 01

All of my friends enjoyed parties, went for clubs but I wanted something different in my life.These were not my cup of tea . I wanted peace in my life , something which was quite difficult to find in these things. They all just earned money to spend it on weekends. But I needed someone to share my feelings, my day and someone to understand me . Actually, I wanted someone like me. Money never meant to me.

Since, my father and mother died in a car accident two years back and I was their only son, so, I lived alone at my house. It was dreadful thing for me and I believe that if you have something today never mean it is gonna remain forever. But I never wanted the same about my family. My father was a driver and whatever I am today is because of his advices , my mother's prayers and my hardwork. It was my routine to work overnight. I remained busy in my work and I feel that is the reason of my success. But tonight, I have to sleep earlier, I mean instead of sleeping at 3 a.m , I have to sleep at 2 a.m because there was an important meeting at 8 a.m . I changed in my night suit quickly and went for a usual sleep. In the morning, I woke up at 6 a.m , yeah I know sleeping for only four hourand then having a very hectic schedule is not good thing but I like the way it is. I went for morning walk , today I Took bath and changed in a black and white three piece suit. I didn't take breakfast because I was getting late. I rushed to the car and as soon as I sat in car, I ordered Laten, my driver to take me to my office.

My office was at the distance of 25 minutes from my house . Well, my office's building belonged to one of the biggest and so was my business. I never knew that hardwork has the power to change a small building into huge company, named the RV group of companies. My career started from a very little building and a work of small scale. But there is famous quote by one of my favorite novelists that "And when you want something, All the universe conspires in helping you to achieve it." And that was also in my case . One day I went in a party , there I met with a person, Mr : Harshad Parekh . He was a very nice person , he asked aboumyself he asand my life and than he said to me that I inspired him and he wants to have a small deal with him. From there I started my work on large scale and I reached here. I am still very thankful to him .Unfortunately, I never met him after that deal because he died and I didn't have his address even to thank him through his family.

Constructive criticism will be more than welcome and sorry for any typos :)


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Posted: 9 years ago
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hii sania

sadism story but with out ishani 😭so sad.. but i read your updates dear because muje janna hai ki ishani ke bina story keshi hogi😲 your ff in ritika nice girl but how long dear???😉ranveer without ishani i don't think that in my life 😭😭your first was chapter nice sania👏👏wait for your next update🤗

love
priya❤️

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