Ishveer FF | Give it all ( chapter 4 on page 6 )

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Author's Note : Ok! so this is my second attempt of an ishveer FF.I think I have improved a lot since my last FF. This is not a happy one and totally different from the real story. Hope you like it.

Prologue no.1

Firstly when I opened my eyes, my vision blured .I tried again and this time I was successful. As soon as got my consciousness, I started looking for her. I thought she will be the first to see me after my heart transplant but to mu disappointment, I found none in the room . Suddenly, a nurse came , without wasting a second I asked her about ishani. But again to my surprise I got a letter and the nurse without uttering a word left the room. I was really surprised and was afraid too at the same time but I eagerly wanted to know about ishani so I just opened the letter.

Dear Ranveer,

I know that this letter is not going to give you pleasure as it tells you that I am no more physically. But if you you wanna find me just follow my instructions. Put your right hand on the left side of your chest where you can feel my heart beating . Yes, it's the truth.You will find another letter later . Till than Meri aashiqui tum se hi.

Yours and only yours,
Ishani Ranveer Vaghela.

A shiver went down through out my body and I lost my thinking and just ran towards the door, reaching in the corridor of hospital, I started looking for Michael, I then found him coming out of his cabin, I asked him about Ishani. Firstly , he said that my condition is not well to run but then when I asked him again about her without giving an ear to what he said, he understood my condition and pointed towards the door adjacent to me room. I opened the door and found my world there or my died world there.

Constructive criticism will be more than welcome :)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow! Sadism ! Yay!

I never knew that there were so many who love SADISM here. :D D Continue it soon! I am wanting to read more!

And how did your exams go?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its unbearably beautiful dear...
Just carry it on..
Will b waiting for...

Keep rocking
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very nice👏👏👏👏
carry on dear waiting to read more😊😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good start, 😭 did she really give him her heart??
Eagar to know more :)


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ommmggg it's fantastic update soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great start dear...update soon

Thanks for pm dearie!

Isha
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bloomfield

Wow! Sadism ! Yay!

I never knew that there were so many who love SADISM here. :D D Continue it soon! I am wanting to read more!

And how did your exams go?


Yeah! I just love the SADISM.😳
Thanks dear.My exams went really good. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1ishveerian

Its unbearably beautiful dear...
Just carry it on..
Will b waiting for...

Keep rocking


Thanks dear😳 I am glad that you liked it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tnzila

very nice👏
carry on dear waiting to read more😊😊😊


Thanks dear 😳 Update it soon

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