#3 ~FF: Untold Stories~ - Page 8

Hii LM!!!
Congro...for 3rd thread 👏 👏
And complete 50 epistle 👏 🥳

Now coming, just read the all 5th epistle its really so deep...and marvellous dear
Oh! Our girl playing prank with ranveer, wat a girl (koi apne bestfriend ke sath aisa bhi karta hai kya) Seriously she's prank really very dangerous and after this our girl not accpted her fault.
And they are arugment btw us i think that only ishani wrong while when she know about that ranveer know her nightmare dream and she instead of apolagising her but she blaming him and saying such a harshaly word.And she said that she was protecting him all the pain. Really they are such a stupid that don't know they help out eachother pain but one issue btw us they both aren't talking.
Oh! God here they haven't talking to eachother in past one half month and even they come forward just ignore to eachother and also hp,f,b trying to many things but not working! She's feel guilty and she cann't meet him eyewith her. Becchra... dhikra.. this issue ki wajah...his nightmare again frighten her.
So our boy again sees her love in his dream
I think ranveer love with dream and their convesation btw us its really mysterious
I liked it. One things dear who's love? poor boy always face ishani's anger and his miseries and ishani mood swing really horroble.
And that's best the best and great update
So Ranveer now 18 and our silly girl thinking about this she's going to wish her b'day or not but then she heard ranveer is frighting in her dream!
Oh ho! Ranveer again got drunk (ish time ishani ek thapped jarur maarti but Dhikra ko BP ne baccha liya) 🤣
Now best ,so beautiful and excellent part Ishani 18 promises and after a long time finally they patch up and a tight hug and kisss hayeee! Seriously u describe and create every moment so perfect its was simplely beautiful but magnificent...
Sorry for any word boring u...
And thanx for pm

Hi LM

congrats for 50th Epistle 👏👏👏

Nice one dear it was deep and amazing loved it
keep updating 😉😉😉

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

So silly of me I was so involved in your ff that I thought we have completed 20 epistle but it's that much to go.
Sorry I am turning lunatic but it's your fault your mesmerised writing made me like that sorry just kidding

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Originally posted by: 1ishveerian

Hey hi dear..''
Both of Your epistles were brilliantly constructed..,
The contents were also too good..,
Happy that everything got sorted out,
18 promises are something I've no words to say, coz there is nothing left...,
The mystery of bands is also revealed,
Many things are mor to say, but
I can't give a long review but will must say that thank you so much for giving
A part of Your intelligence for our pleasure's sake..,
You really deserve an applause
👏 👏 👏

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Originally posted by: amazing3

Nice one LM,

You never ceases to amaze me with your writing skills.

Very beautifully scripted. Enjoyed reading it. 😛

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Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

Heya! I am back. I was so late. I am sorry, again. And let me go about the usual style of reviewing.

Selecting parts...

Like always, my hands and feet were bound, but this time, they didn't hurt at all. It was as though it were customary. But maybe it was because I felt blank.

The binding of hands and feet may be are his thoughts. Sometimes, thoughts thought about in our head all the time become so familiar that the next time you think about it, it seems not unusual but constumary. This especially happens with those painful thoughts, with me.

But somehow, pain was compensated with this time by the extreme weight upon my shoulders, as though somebody had given me the load of all the responsibilities and pressure of the whole of mankind to carry upon them.

Weight upon the shoulders, umm... may be it is the responsibilities as Ranveer said. As you grow older, don't they say that responsibilities grow too. And here, Ranveer was facing a difficult time - Ishaani, studies. Also, the hopes of his parents on him. So, it must be the responsibilities only.

I felt my body keep hitting against some kind of invisible barricade that kept me away from the reach of Love. I did not like the barrier; it gave me a vibe of being kept away from Love for something I didn't like doing in the first place.

Keeping away from Ishaani. Wasn't he doing that?

It was not just familiarity from the previous times when Love did it, but also from someone else... someone who I could not place in that moment.

Ishaani?!

"You didn't return after that night... I just thought..." I mention awkwardly as she now ruffles my hair playfully. This felt familiar again...

It's Ishaani who always ruffles his hair, isn't it?

I just wanted to feel happy. And only Love could do it.

Only with Ishaani does Ranveer's happiness lie and vice versa. So, proved. Love = Ishaani.

"I was with you all the time... you know it too," she tells me finally, her scrutiny upon me in spite of the mist between us.

Ishaani was with Ranveer all the time and he knew it, too.

"Well, isn't that why we're here?" she questions me, her tone suddenly amused. I crunch my eyebrows at her in bewilderment as I can feel beads of sweat now rolling down my forehead.

"Now what's that supposed to mean, really?" I retort instantly, my mind suddenly distressed. As expected, the bonds got tighter again, but I was still in control of them.

Hmm, does Love mean to say that they were there to find answered to Ranveer's latest predicament and Ranveer doesn't get her question when she asks about it.

"Why are you so mysterious and terrifying? Why are you my friend in one minute and my foe in the next?" I ask her unconsciously, not realizing that I'd let my thoughts slip into words. But now that I did ask her, I wanted some answers.

"You gave me the name," she replies swiftly once again, this time her tone sincere. "I define what I am known for. It depends upon how you view me. And right now, you aren't viewing me in any good light," she adds mysteriously, and I can feel my head spin now.

Ah! The final nail to the coffin. Love, the emotion is reckless. It is the most sweetes thing once and the bitterest one the next moment. Love, the mystical figure is also like that. Even Ishaani is also, the same. Ranveer's best friend once and his ex-bestfriend the next.

"So you're a mirror of my emotions?" I ask her, my senses suddenly sharp even though the sunlight was blaring my vision of what little the mist let me see of Love.

"No, the biggest one you feel. Your emotions are what tie you down; your feelings, where you find yourself to be," replies Love, but her voice felt as though it was coming across from a great distance.

The biggest emotion which Ranveer feels is love. So, wait, Love is a mirror of Ranveer's love!

Ishaani and I may have our issues, but no one, NO ONE, is allowed to make her cry.

Aha! I love this possessiveness. What is love without possessiveness?

I think Ishaani and I were this close to bitching about them together when we realized that we were no longer on talking terms.

IshVeer are awesome, always. Forgot about their issue! And were close to bitching about the kids who wanted them to patch up and tried it.

It's as though there's an invisible barrier between us that obstructs my way... I cannot reach her and I've shut the door of my mind, heart and soul to her as well.

This is like the barrier between Ranveer and Love. Where he can't cross it, only Love can. That's why she comes to caress his cheek.

Second chances... do they even exist? People say that life always gives us a second chance, but no, it doesn't. It. Just. Doesn't.

Do you believe in second chance, LM? I do. Because I feel that they exist but I have always believed that the second chance us never the same as the first.

Again, this is one helluva update! Love returns back. To help Ranveer find his way back in life and find his direction. And I have noticed that Love comes back only when there is some gap between IshVeer and there has been a disaster in Ranveer's life. Like ein the second case, Ishaani and Ranveer never talked and just sat in silence. In this case, they never talked, too.

Does this add up to something?

Love,

Poplu.

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Originally posted by: Bloomfield

*sigh*

I come her finally! All thanks to tomorrow's holiday! Yay!

So three updates and one review( forgive me for one review. Can't help it!)

The first one is that of their confrontation! Damn! They are so fierce and the friction between the two is something worth betting for!God, they are adorbs! <3 <3 <3 So it starts with Ishani crying out her heart and closing the diary in a fit of anger and planning to confront him...And then comes the long waited conversation of theirs! Man, you penned it so beautifully! And then, I expected this. Ishani fainting/falling sick and yes, she did. And our hero finally gets brains to call the doctor and repent (yes, he had to.) And then he kissed her! *blushes* Sigh, this was very, very beautiful! <3 <3

Now next comes the previous Epistle. Love and Ranveer. I don't know. But whenever I read about his conversation with Love, I have a strange vibe and I don't know what it is. Like the way he is expressing about her mysterious entry and words..it is just something. Okay, I guess my mind is blocked and that's the reason.

And next comes this! <3 <3 <3

Gosh!

Ranveer's 18 now! Officially! *Yay* *Shout-out* This was one chapter which made my eyes dewy! The eighteen promises (well, they are to be broken, I know.) were heavenly! I know, their lives are going to take a huge turn (it has, already.) Still, it was worth thousand reads! And the way he pulled her into his arms! *Blushes* Ranveer, I love you! <3 <3 (Ahem, stop being crazy!) And she kissed him now! LM, you give us surprises! :D D:

The cup-cake ceremony and the star-gazing (not one exactly)...Everything was just perfect! I know, Ranveer had his nightmares again and she had to call the doctor, (these two make me to feel proud. :D :D Getting into the doctor's doorstep once in two weeks xD xD) But no, I am not going to talk about it because it is his birthday today!

Love you!

Aarushi

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Originally posted by: lifesobeautiful

Hii LM!!!
Congro...for 3rd thread 👏 👏
And complete 50 epistle 👏 🥳

Now coming, just read the all 5th epistle its really so deep...and marvellous dear
Oh! Our girl playing prank with ranveer, wat a girl (koi apne bestfriend ke sath aisa bhi karta hai kya) Seriously she's prank really very dangerous and after this our girl not accpted her fault.
And they are arugment btw us i think that only ishani wrong while when she know about that ranveer know her nightmare dream and she instead of apolagising her but she blaming him and saying such a harshaly word.And she said that she was protecting him all the pain. Really they are such a stupid that don't know they help out eachother pain but one issue btw us they both aren't talking.
Oh! God here they haven't talking to eachother in past one half month and even they come forward just ignore to eachother and also hp,f,b trying to many things but not working! She's feel guilty and she cann't meet him eyewith her. Becchra... dhikra.. this issue ki wajah...his nightmare again frighten her.
So our boy again sees her love in his dream
I think ranveer love with dream and their convesation btw us its really mysterious
I liked it. One things dear who's love? poor boy always face ishani's anger and his miseries and ishani mood swing really horroble.
And that's best the best and great update
So Ranveer now 18 and our silly girl thinking about this she's going to wish her b'day or not but then she heard ranveer is frighting in her dream!
Oh ho! Ranveer again got drunk (ish time ishani ek thapped jarur maarti but Dhikra ko BP ne baccha liya) 🤣
Now best ,so beautiful and excellent part Ishani 18 promises and after a long time finally they patch up and a tight hug and kisss hayeee! Seriously u describe and create every moment so perfect its was simplely beautiful but magnificent...
Sorry for any word boring u...
And thanx for pm

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Originally posted by: sakshi5050

Hi LM

congrats for 50th Epistle 👏👏👏

Nice one dear it was deep and amazing loved it
keep updating 😉😉😉

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Originally posted by: matsh1

Ranveer s 18! Wow! Super!

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