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Posted: 9 years ago
Two updates? So quick?

Just finished reading both the Epistles! ❤️❤️

Starting with the 57th Epistle now...The Enigma--Unveiled and Veiled

I simply love this title!⭐️⭐️ So the Epistle starts off with something which every parent has a worry about. The 'whom-do-you-love-more' is something very common in every household and I must say, both the gentlemen tackled Ishani well in the situation 😆😆. The answer which Harshad gave and that eye-lock of the ever famous duo Ishani is just stupid 😆😆.

And then comes the 'art of manipulation' Our boy's teen tensions! 😆😆 His preaching and thought process! No wonder he gets marks in Maths 🤪🤪 And Ishani finds everything to be abnormal.😃😃 But none can be done! She herself fell into the trap! 🥱🥱 How many ever times he stressed upon the fact that she was very weak when it comes to trust, she falls rightly into the wrong trap! 🤢

Moving on, we then have the Holi part! (Um, Ranveer? When will his POV come back?) The entire fiasco of how Baa smiled and patted his shoulders, being calm with him and scolding everyone else! Well, I was, shocked, in literal sense. I expected something else 😆😆 And the way Ishani is jealous of Disha is simply 🤣🤣 #JFLS And poor, SHarman got so much from Baa

And here we come to the next Epistle!


I miss Ranveer's POV! But poor HP😭😭 Did not have a proper retirement gift. Sigh, life does not favor you everytime But I loved the way how both of them consoled him. It was no less than beautiful!⭐️⭐️ I loved this line of Ishani where she says 'I would do it with Ranveer,' Sigh, too much of love! ☺️☺️
What about their Tennis classes? 😉😉 I'm wondering...😛😛

Ranveer is laughing at the 17 year old businesswoman but he never knows... Ishani is 27 and is one of India's biggest business giants! ⭐️⭐️ And the funniest part, both of them are now going to have a business contact! Aha! Destiny! Wondering about their confrontation now! Can't wait already!😳😳

When will we have his POV now?😃😃

Okay, I've become demanding. I'll stop here. And I'll try to review yours ASAP. I know you'll update the next one by tomorrow or the day after.

Loads of love,
Aarushi

PS. Where were you staying before shifting to Mumbai? Just asking. It's okay even if you don't answer. 😊😊
Edited by Bloomfield - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hi dear its good to see that you are utilising your vacation most wisely but your making us get habituated to something most interesting and it ll become difficult for me when it ll stop.
😊 😊
OK so coming to review so before I start just wanted to let you know that in this whole ff most of the time first line impresses me the most it's always so knowledgeable.
OK so these two seriously don't have anything to do apart from constant bickering it really amazes me how they can be both mature and childish at times but that's what best friends are you can have all the innocence back with them forgetting about all the worries and responsibilities. 😃
So this is the reason why they are all geared up and making everything possible to gain control of Monopoly in London for diamonds well it's something related to the person they admire the most. 😳
Harshad and ranveer are the best their bond is really amazing and to be honest they are way beyond father son relations because they way HP always expect his remaining work to b completed by ranveer and the way ranveer Pacifies and motivates hsi mota babuji was really awesome and yup I can say that ranveer is seriously more dear to HP but ishani has a different place in his heart.
OK so ishani made a promise and I think that's what motivated them now to fulfill it inspite of all the miseries. And this character of yours is the best I mean she don't know anything about business but still she promised and somewhere hopes to fulfill it. Samosa, chai barish well that's pure heaven for me nothing can beat it.
O this ranveer of your he reads ishani lime a boom whole inside out 🤓 boy he amazes me with his knowledge about each and everything.
The way he explained that whole scenario of trust faith by heart and by mind was amazing I mean he knows each and every aspect but also how to draw a fine line between them.
I like the fact that no matter how much weak they are but when it comes facing other ones vulnerability they support lime rock to each other. 👍🏼
O this whole ishani's pov of why she don't trust people easily and why she is afraid of not able to fulfill the expectations of two person who loves her the most was very well justified. Though I don't blame falguni over hear neither for giving her false hope in childhood nor for preaching her mind game because all she wanted was give her child a sense of security and also protecting her.
O that line of ranveer that he want to make friends but no one is willing to make servant as his friend hurted 😭
But then ishani was always there for him doing everything possible.
Ishani in this ff is someone I admire a lot because inspite of facing worst possible scenarios she picked up broken piece of heart and became something both her protectors wanted. I know ranveer is good learner but ishani is at Apr with him because she constantly ask questions which make him ponder more over it.
LM I must admit that this whole ff is nothing but a class on psychology of human behaviour and and human mindset for me. and trust me on this I am not exaggerating or saying things to flatter you but seriously I got to k ow do much about human nature through these ffs that amazes me the most and I loved it. 👍🏼
OK so all this preaching of ranveer over trusting other person also may become both a boon and bane for them because I guess thts why she trusted chirag because he appeared the way ranveer said but also because of his preaching only she becomes what she is today sorry to say all this nonsense but I may be wrong.
OK dear i have to admit it with so many promises and growth of their relationship in this whole book 3 has made my anticipations of interludes and their confrontation very high though I know you will justify them but still it's like I just can't wait to read them am sorry. 😛
Thnk you so much for pm
Waiting for next.





Thank you so much, sweetheart! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it. ⭐️⭐️ And hehe, I know it but since I'm not really sure about how my schedules are going to be next month, I want to get as much done as I can for now. 😳😳




Coming to the review, most of the opening lines are my own, so I'm really happy that you like them so much. 😃😃 And hehe, those two have got all the time in the world when it comes to bickering with each other, but that's what makes their friendship so amazing again. 😛😛 And yes, now you know one of the driving forces as to why Interlude-Ishaani has sought Ranveer out with so much planning for the deal. 👍🏼👍🏼



I'm glad that you liked the Ranveer-HP bond over here. 😊😊 And again, you've said it perfectly - they hold different places in his heart so the love he feels for Ranveer and Ishaani cannot be compared. 😉😉 As to Ishaani's character over here, I love penning her down. It's like I get the chance to unlock the brains that the show-Ishaani was clearly too lazy to use. 🥱🥱




Hehe, samosas, chai and barish are the golden trio for all Indians.



Moving on to Ranveer, I'm glad that you like this POV on this. 😎😎 As to Ishaani's part, yes, Falguni cannot be blamed because she just wanted to give her daughter a security that things were alright. 🤔🤔 As to Ranveer's reason of not making friends, yeah, that line kinda hurt me as well when I was writing it. 😵😵



Here again, you've described Ishaani's character with such justice that I needn't say anything more. 👏👏 And as to trusting Chirag, you haven't said anything wrong. On the contrary, you've once again understood what I wanted to establish with this chapter, so take away another 300 brownie points.



As to the human psychology class, hehe, I try using my own little inputs and knowledge on this, but I'm happy that you find it interesting rather than a snooze-fest. ☺️☺️ And yes, the Interludes I'm petrified about, really. 😭😭 Expectations are running too high.



Thank you so much once again and I'll try to have the next chapter up soon enough. ❤️❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

Read this update. (The review will be small. Sorry!)


"Papa, you trust me, right? I promise that I will fulfill this legacy of yours should you not get a chance to do so. And I'll do it with Ranveer,"



God! Ishaani has kept at least one promise. *Laughs* phew. I am feeling so, so happy.
1. Because she kept the promise. And I told you, right? I feel proud whenever these two do things together.
2. Because the Interludes are coming! *drum rolls*



LOL, Ranveer is right. Imagining her as a businessman will be funny. But not in the Interludes. *grins* And Rain! The smell of mud... petrichor. That is one of the most beautiful things yet simplest things in our life.



Oh, Ranveer is going too much into art of manipulation, isn't it? And I did really feel bad for HP. Such a successful man facing a loss before retiring... it's like, there's no satisfaction at the end of the professional life. Like, adha adoori.



Ishaani actually underestimates her own self. She has high opinions of HP and Ranveer. But she feels she can't do all the things they do. Well, women are always like that, aren't they? They don't know what all they are worth of!



IshVeer conversations are always good. And this one... eating samosa-chutney watching the rain descend from the heavens. It's absolutely beautiful.



Oh my god! I am really dizzy with happiness. Interludes! Ab na kehna ki iss baar bhi IshVeer nahi milenge. <\3


And you re giving such fast updates, girl! Ah, I am so loving it. I hope you finish the Book Three, which has been a truly fantastic book, by the first week of May!



A great job on the update, girl. Update the next one, soon enough.



Love,
Poplu.





Thank you so much, darling! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it. ⭐️⭐️ And don't worry about the length of the review, it's cool. 😆😆



Coming to the review, hehe, I knew you'd love this part. 😉😉 Well she did do one promise right, I'll give you that. 😛😛 And yes, the Interludes are approaching, but like I told you before, their confrontation will happen only after Book 4. 😭😭 *runs before flying slipper attack begins*



Yes, imagining a 17 year old Ishaani as a businesswoman is funny, but the 27 year-old Ishaani is a whole different person again. Tastes change, and so do circumstances. 🤔🤔 But yeah, even I felt really bad for HP... As to his art of manipulation obsession, it's just a phase that'll wear off. 🤣🤣



Well, she does underestimate herself a lot, but her reasoning is not because she's a woman that she can't do it... it's more like she considers herself ill-equipped for the job based on how she is nature-wise. 😊😊 As to their conversation with the samosas, chutney, chai and rains... it's only made me go . Sigh, relationship goals.



Yeah, I'm surprising myself with the speed of the updates, but like I was telling Dv, I'm trying to get as much done as I can because I'm not certain about my schedules next month. 😆😆 And I'm hoping for the best when it comes to the deadline of completing Book 3. 😳😳



Thank you so much once again and I'll try to have the next one up soon. ❤️❤️



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py


Sorry dear I can totally understand how it feels because that's what happened with me many times I was writing reviews and someone or the other reserved it 😃 I don't have any problem with it but just saying 😉
But you know what I actually wrote whole review before even reserving but my tab got some problem and it restarted whole system again erasing everything I had written I had to write it again 😭
Sorry for spoiling it. 😳



Oh, kaun jaane hum reviewers ka dard. Sirf hum log hi jaante hain. 😭😆
Oh, then you are first, itself! It's fair. 😳😛

Don't ask sorry, dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-



Thank you, love! 🤗🤗 Ah, no no. I have retires from spamming. A big no to it. It takes away a lot of time and energy. So, I am happy with Rockerz. 😊😊 Now, I want you turning Sizzlerz, sooner. 😉😛



Love,
Poplu.




Hehe, the Goldie to Rockerz phase is always like this. 😛😛 Even when I turned into a Goldie, I went into a spamming phase and fell to a halt once I became a Rockerz. 🤣🤣 But don't worry, you'll still manage to accomodate a little spamming here and there. 😉😉



As for me turning Sizzlers, let's see when that happens. I have 243 posts to go yet.



Love,
LM
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

This is not fair! When I came here, there was no review. And now dv res-ed. :( (please ignore my rant)

It's okay, LOL. ;)




This has happened with me so many times that I could write a poem on it. 😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py


Sorry dear I can totally understand how it feels because that's what happened with me many times I was writing reviews and someone or the other reserved it 😃 I don't have any problem with it but just saying 😉
But you know what I actually wrote whole review before even reserving but my tab got some problem and it restarted whole system again erasing everything I had written I had to write it again 😭
Sorry for spoiling it. 😳




The same thing happened with me when I was replying to your review today. God, it's a terrible, terrible urge of breaking the laptop when things like this happen. 😭😭
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-



Oh, kaun jaane hum reviewers ka dard. Sirf hum log hi jaante hain. 😭😆
Oh, then you are first, itself! It's fair. 😳😛

Don't ask sorry, dear.




Poplu be a drama queen. 🤣🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue





The same thing happened with me when I was replying to your review today.God, it's a terrible, terrible urge of breaking the laptop when things like this happen.😭😭


Well then you can understand very well sista...
And I don't blame poplu for being drama queen hum becharo ka dard hum jaise hi samjh sakte hai.
Well as it is for collecting brownie it's an honour to receive from you mam want to count how much I have collected till now in this whole fff 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue




Poplu be a drama queen. 🤣🤣


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