1ishveerian's Story Corner |FF:Love Beyond Terms| (Part 4 on Page 8) - Page 2

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Oh god what have you written girl I mean you made me cry yar this was so beautiful
I mean I fantasise a little less about ranveer's death after reading though 99% I still wish
Seriously ranveer is turning out a love God I mean he astound me with his ability to love
That one conversation between them where she was convincing him was so painfull I mean he and she knows that they cannot make it but they hope beyond hopes
I mean that amba searching him was very touchy but the best part comes that five minutes conversation between ishveer that was marvellous
Dear you have written so well that I cannot stop praising
Throughout you kept me on edge of my seat thinking what more
That was really a great work
Waiting to read more from you
And thnx LM for bringing this to us

Thanks dear that You liked it ⭐️ ⭐️
I'm really glad that it made some sense to You People...
Yes Ranveer is simply a Love Guroo.. And their hopes You said perfectly right dear..
Yes for me that part was the best thanks that You also liked it..
And thanks that You also said thanks to LM.. Coz I'm getting seriously short with my words

Thanks again that You liked my thoughts 😊 😊
Sorry I don't know your name???

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

Wow! Just wow. Being so awesome in the first FF makes me wonder about the talent which is hidden in you. You go, girl! (I guess you are a girl; sorry if I'm wrong, haven't checked your profile)

The OS was awesome. Ranveer dying is our fantasy but imagining Ishaani die and Ranveer in pain is much more wishful. (Sadistic pleasure) So, here the whole stuff about love never losing is very, very, well written. And I had an error which seemed standing out to me, although.

As far as I know, there is no such operation in the world which is done without anaesthesia. Even the minor root canal sugery we undergo in the dentist's is done on local anaesthesia. So, I found the no-anaesthasia thing faulty. I hope, you forgive me for my brazenness.

And coming to the little Ranveer, he seems so intelligent and witty at his mere five years of age! Exactly a carbon copy of our charming Ranveer. <3 Amba and Ishaani's relationship is really well written, again. And the nostalgia which comes with the little Ranveer calling his Maa, Ishaani and Dadi Maa, Maa is very, very endearing. It just made my stomach lurch, a sensation that I am truly feeling for a thing. :D

On the whole, a beautiful OS. First, the title confused me a little, but it's all clear now.

Love,

Effulgent.

PS. To LM - Thanks for posting this, behena. And your style of posting an update and neatness is what I love the most, all the time. <3

Hey Effulgent
First of all yes You are right I'm girl 😳
Then coming to Your review...
Thanks that You liked it ⭐️ ⭐️
Yeah the 2nd type of fantesy is also a pleasure for us as You said sadistic one.. Its mesocistic at the same time... In any case we are loving Ranveer's Love.., so far as i think

Yes dear you are right.., infact i also had doubt about this.., but as i wanted this so i searched for it and get to know that in cardiac reserve it happens... I might be wrong dear.. But i just wanted to make a sense of story... So i think it went more fictional , if I'm wrong with this search.. And don't say sorry at all, coz I also thought of the same

Yes little Ranveer is like our Ranveer..., and You said all the things very beautifully dear I can't say anything more

Originally posted by: VC288

That was marvelous!!!

beliefs,such a brilliant writer, 1ishveerian!! I can't believe that's your first OS. You have written so well. And also thanks to you, too,LM. You have brought us a wonderful OS.

Now,this OS was quite full of emotions. Ranveer's decision to agree to operation for sake of her shows how much he loves her. Even though he knew he was dying, he didn't think about him. And Ishani's faith over her love even when situation is beyond the hopes was again marvelous.

When I read about amba asking for Ranveer, I thought he had pulled through it,but it was their son. He is always as cute and caring as his father.

That was just wonderful. I am looking forward to read more from you.

VC

ThankYou so much VC that You liked it ⭐️ ⭐️
Yes its my 1st one.., infact i was so nervous till now but glad that You people liked it..
Yes the credit definitly goes to LM,so thanks from me again 😳
These thoughts were my own dear actualy my beliefs,
Now a days I'm coming accros the fact that destiny is something most powerfull
Yes the convo of son with father is my own 2nd best part of the stpry.. Which i only wrote while writing means i'd not meditated over it at all.. It jist made its way...

Thanks again ⭐️

Originally posted by: sakshi5050

Hi My dear lovely girl

This one made me cry for a while loved it...
You deserve a big clap dear 👏👏👏
Ranveer man who lived with Pain all the time and he is now been a love god
In the form of Little Ranveer he will be always with Ishani
Loved it dear you rocked😛😛😛

Happy LM that you have posted and help her to produce this story to all the readers of the forum 😉😉

Thanks dear Sakshi ⭐️ ⭐️
Hope You going well with Your health 😊 😊
Yes Ranveer will live through his shadow.. He is like immortal just like his love... Which made us hook up with the show even after its ended...
And yes a great thank to LM.. She dedefinitly helped me a lot..

Thank You dear again that You liked it

Ohhh great dear. Big applause 👏

Originally posted by: 1ishveerian

Hey Effulgent
First of all yes You are right I'm girl 😳
Then coming to Your review...
Thanks that You liked it ⭐️ ⭐️
Yeah the 2nd type of fantesy is also a pleasure for us as You said sadistic one.. Its mesocistic at the same time... In any case we are loving Ranveer's Love.., so far as i think

Yes dear you are right.., infact i also had doubt about this.., but as i wanted this so i searched for it and get to know that in cardiac reserve it happens... I might be wrong dear.. But i just wanted to make a sense of story... So i think it went more fictional , if I'm wrong with this search.. And don't say sorry at all, coz I also thought of the same

Yes little Ranveer is like our Ranveer..., and You said all the things very beautifully dear I can't say anything more

Hey ishveeran!!!

That was marvellous...
I still don't believe it was your first os...
If it's true ...
U should write more...
U can do wonder if u write more...

I m sorry bt dark story is not my cup of tea...
it was heart wrenching...
After reading that I was not able to sleep... 😭
That's the reason I avoid dark ones ...
I m too sensitive for that.. 😕

Bt it was really beautiful...
I loved the ishveer's 5 minute conversation...

When amba finding ranveer...
I thought he is alive...
Bt he was his son... 😲

He was really amazing as 5 year boy...
Too caring & mature ...

Atlast reading last paragraph I was in tears.. 😭
It was painfully amazing...

Hats off to u... 👏

Thnk u so much LM for presenting this amzing os on behalf of ishveerian...
Thnx for pm...

Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer

Hey 1ishveerian🤗🤗

First of all welcome to the forum🤗Do you have a nickname I call you for , if you dont want to share you real name ?😊 Well you can call me MM, anjali or ShadikaishVeer ofc😆😆

Coming to your os it was truly painfully beautiful , you have written so beautifully and captured their love and pain so amazingly that I actually dont know what to say❤️❤️ Some of my beautiful friends like the sadistic pleasure here , but I am a gooner for happy endings and I cry badely reading stuff like this😭😭 Honestly girl , is this your first os???😲😲 Because I swear you blew me away with your first writing👏👏 So I look forward to see what masterpieces you write in future🤗

One thing I have to applaud you for is how you wrote about their pain so beautifully , my heart broke for them and yet you gave a small happy ending. Dead is a part of life , and how much it breaks my heart to think that Ranveer did not grew old with Ishani and grandchildrens but sadly that happens in some cases😭😭But I am glad Ishani named the son Ranveer , another beautiful touch by you in the OS😳😳

You have done an amazing amazing amaziing job🤗🤗I can't still believe this is your first OS👍🏼👍🏼Keep writing like you do dear , and God bless🤗🤗

LM , thank you for the PM dear and also for helping 1ishveerian , I still remember how you encouraged me when I started writing and I can never thank you enough for that🤗

1ishveerian , you are lucky to have a mentor/friend like LM , she is amazing😳😳Also you write so beautifully🤗🤗 I can understand how nervouse you must be being new in the forum and writing your first OS , cause I almost did the same😳😳 But dont worry sweetheart you have done a beautifully job🤗

Loads of love to you both

MM❤️❤️

Hey Anjali..
First of all thanks for a warm welcome...
I really loved to have You people to guide me..
Now coming to the nick name... Mmm as i'ven't any so You can suggest any which one You like for You and for other forum members to call me with.. I'll love to have any from You...

Now coming to the is.. So yes its really my 1st one... I just got the idea of it, will try in sha Allah for more if got any time in my hectic schedual...as I got it as my future dream to be a writer.. But unfortunately I've no those skill to write it in better way.. But will try sometime latter..

And sorry dear I made You cry , I really didn't mean it .. I just wanted to share my thoughts... Story again

And yes LM really is a great mentor..
I'm really thank full to her.. Coz she helped me a lot
Thanks again dear that You loved it

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

LM, to be honest when I saw my PM box, I thought that it was written you and I was like "Ye ladki itte saare likne ke liye time kaisi nikl rai hai." And then I saw that it was written by one of the new members here. :P :P

So, a quick review(I am running out of time, sorry.) This was beautiful! Li'l Ranveer is way too mature here! Love him, too (Ranveer comes first, yeah <3)

So, the OS starts with him battling his last few minutes with life and talking with Ishani. The conversation was as beautiful as heaven! <3 <3 And then comes a leap of five years where our li'l Ranveer is taking his father's position. I love the mother-son bonding! *Dreams* Those were wishful wishes! Sigh.

And LM, I can see the Midas touch! The way you present things is itself beautiful!

1ishveerian, For the first attempt, this was really, really, good! Would like to read more from you. You write awesome! And, welcome to the forum too! Have fun writing!

AV

Hey Bloomfield I gotta hanged with restrictions of newbie as not allowed to post more than 10 in one day so took this much to review back...
Yes yesterday when I visited the forum my expressions were also the same coz it even got many reviews till then..., so far as the time LM put here is definitely too much coz she had to do many things with this... So sorry and thanks to her once again...,
And yes its really my first one... And am really glad that it made some sense to You people.. Who are great writers in themselves..,
Thanks for a warm welcome

Originally posted by: 1ishveerian

Hey Anjali..
First of all thanks for a warm welcome...
I really loved to have You people to guide me..
Now coming to the nick name... Mmm as i'ven't any so You can suggest any which one You like for You and for other forum members to call me with.. I'll love to have any from You...

Now coming to the is.. So yes its really my 1st one... I just got the idea of it, will try in sha Allah for more if got any time in my hectic schedual...as I got it as my future dream to be a writer.. But unfortunately I've no those skill to write it in better way.. But will try sometime latter..

And sorry dear I made You cry , I really didn't mean it .. I just wanted to share my thoughts... Story again

And yes LM really is a great mentor..
I'm really thank full to her.. Coz she helped me a lot
Thanks again dear that You loved it