#2 ~FF : Untold Stories~ - Page 56

Originally posted by: IshveerForever

😆 I'm also alone in my room only but mum keeps coming to check
Sho creepy yaar 😆

Originally posted by: Pluviophile

Yes MM, move to India. :D Ras malais everyday. :D

Originally posted by: IshveerForever

😆 I'm also alone in my room only but mum keeps coming to check
Sho creepy yaar 😆

Originally posted by: Pluviophile

My grandma comes to check on me.😆😆And it's really embarrassing. I can't sleep when everybody else is.😆😆

Originally posted by: IshveerForever

High five re ⭐️

Originally posted by: Pluviophile

Kahin thoda sa neend aane lagi. Main some ki koshish karti hoon. Bye, Aashu. It was a pleasure chatting with you. You people made today's night awesome.⭐️⭐️

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

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Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you've been enjoying it so far! ⭐️⭐️ And I hope that you are doing well and that your exams went well too. 😳😳 And yeah, I get the uncanny resemblance of the line. 😆😆 As to why you'd discontinued reading, yes I thought as much. 😛😛 But there's no nead to worry, I totally understand. 😃😃

Coming to the review, I'm glad that Book 1 managed to work that charm upon the readers. I wanted to fill the skeleton of the story with the muscles, veins, blood and life of my own, and I'm glad that you guys have been loving whatever I've been writing so far. 😎😎

Yes, Ranveer and Ishaani are way too matured for their age, but then again from the kind of environments they'd come from, the maturity only seemed befitting them. 😊😊 The chapters that you've mentioned are the most intense/interesting ones from Book 1. 😉😉 And yes, my aim through Book 1 was to establish that gradual friendship and bonding between Ranveer and Ishaani.

Coming to Book 2, yes, the reason I kept it light for the first ten chapters is because I wanted to show the easy bond that Ranveer and Ishaani had between them and now it changed them as people and personality both (well, Ishaani way more than Ranveer). 😆😆 And yes, a lot of readers have told me that they find themselves similar to Ishaani in a lot of ways, so I'm not surprised. 😉😉

I haven't been to Manali, but I researched a lot about it (I'm an obsessive researcher). 🤪🤪 And yes, I'm a Commerce student. 😛😛 Coming to the second half of Book 2, these chapters have been a whole new level of difficult for me to write. And even till today I don't know why writing dark comes to me so naturally. 🤔🤔 I'd take the applause over the curse, I've gotten enough for those six chapters to suffice. 🤣🤣

Coming to Ranveer's 'perfection', well this is inspired from one of my best friends. She was practically THE best at everything and I would never understand how she could be the best in everything. So I can understand each and every emotion that Ishaani goes through over here. 😵😵

Moving on to the dreams, yes I know I was roasting everybody's brains that's why I decided to give out some information. 😳😳 Since the readers had started connecting the dots (mainly Pluviophile who deciphered 80% of the dreams), I decided to atleast give out what would make sense and what was revealed, while still withholding certain points. 🤓🤓

So don't worry, I'll solve more doubts in the next Book. 👍🏼👍🏼 Also, after the FF ends, I'll be giving a detailed explanation about the dreams so that you guys get the clear picture of the whole thing. 😳😳 And don't apologize... I should be the one saying sorry for roasting your brains. 😒😒 And yeah, even I hate being all confused and riled up. 😔😔

Coming to Ishaani's dreams, I'm going to be mum on them because time will answer all questions eventually. 😛😛 As to the connection between Ranveer and Ishaani's dream, like I've said before too, its more of a lot of symbolism than connections. Shhh, I'm not saying anything further now. 😆😆

Moving to the Interludes, that's a lovely term - nuclear explosions. ☢️☢️ Ranveer is droolworthy in whatever he does, so I'm not going to deny you that. Since my Ishaani is WAY sober than the unbalanced one on the show, I do feel extremely sorry for her, but yeah, she had it coming. 😭😭 And that's a beautiful point of view that you've taken to, something that I've been aiming to establish from Book 1... sigh, the time will come to reveal about this too. ☯️☯️

Coming to your question - yes, there were a lot of names, touche. But like I said in the start, this is like an alternate universe (AU) version of their story with 75% of the details canon to the show, and that's why I used both Chirag and Ritika over here. 😊😊 One of the prime points of my curiosity have been in thinking about what if Ranveer had gotten married to Ritika and Ishaani to Chirag in an alternate timeline. 😛😛 And that's why it paved way in this FF.

Ritika in my FF has only her name common to the one of the show, and the thought did cross my mind several times to use another name for her. 😕😕 But because of my terrible need of perfection, it did not go right with me to use another woman's name even though in my mind it was Ritika. 🥱🥱 Like I said, ironically enough, my Ritika and the show's one have nothing in common, but I was stuck up on the name and wanted to be fair enough. 🤔🤔

But I'm glad that you have accepted it and are ready to take it into your stride. ⭐️⭐️ We're both so stuck upon the name for totally opposite reasons that it's amusing in this very uncharacteristic way. 🤪🤪 Coming to Finch, yeah I like him too. 😳😳 And I'm glad that you liked the tennis match. 😃😃

As to their face off, hehe, I just hope I manage to do alright in it. The expectations are frightening. 😲😲 And well, either you know me too well or IshVeer to well to predict about the 'shockers'. 😈😈 Coming to the current interludes, well I love my Ishaani being the woman she is and spanking Chirag right upon his sorry ass by taking his company. 😎😎

And yes, that was rather disgusting. 🤢🤢 I think I sickened myself too for two minutes till I regained control over myself, so I'll take the cursing. But oh yeah, her attitude redeemed her in my eyes as well. 👍🏼👍🏼 As to Piyush, naah baba naah, I haven't inspired him from *Lawyer No. 0*. 🥺🥺 I would lose my passion for writing if I started taking inspiration from him.

And that's an excellent summarization of what's happened! 👏👏 Superb, astute and succint. Coming to what happened between Ranveer and Ishaani (two confrontations), and about Harshad's demise, you'll come to know in Interludes 10 and 15. 😛😛

Lastly, coming to your Ps., I'm leaving that option up to the readers to assume what they want to in terms of this. 😆😆 But if you want to know my answer as to what I have in mind about this, I'll reveal it after the FF ends. 😳😳

Thank you so much once again, darling! ☺️☺️ Your review never fails to make my day, so there's no chance of it boring me. ❤️❤️ I'll try to update the next chapter soon enough. ⭐️⭐️

Love,
LM

Originally posted by: Lovemyself...

Hey LM!!!
Apologies for late reply ...
Was busy wid exam...😆
As I was too excited to read interlude...😛
What was that..?...
Sorry ...actually I m in little shock that how can u write to this extent... I m it was beyond perfect...👏
U described each & everything so amazingly that I can't even describe it...
CHIRAAG... he is such a loser...😡
Was waiting from 13 years...
Didn't know that he can get down to this much level for his revenge & greedyness...
The way he betrayed her... was so disgusting...😡
Ishani... she knows that she loves ranveer...
I m just waiting when RV will get to know all this what chiraag has done wid her ...🥱
As I told u before also I m waiting for their confrontation...
Update soon...😳
Thnx for pm...
Ps. Sorry I know I have given such lame review n blabbered too much...bt I M Feeling all this to write just bcoz u have described it so perfectly...👏

Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it. ⭐️⭐️ I hope that your exams are going well. And dear, you praise me too much. ☺️☺️

Well, you've given Chirag the perfect description - loser. 🤢🤢 And yeah, even I felt disgusted when writing about it. But yeah, the way Ishaani turned her life around from there is what gave me a little peace to write. 😛😛 As to Ranveer's reaction, there's a long, long way to go for that, but I hope that it's worth the wait. 😃😃

Originally posted by: Pluviophile

*EEE* I love to be on this thread. Believe me, this is the only story I'm reviewing in my breaks from studying. 😉😉 And surprise point... Let's see what it is. I just saw that you've updated! Four days before the promised time! Wow. You are such an awesome writer. You understand our excitement and curiosity. 😭😭

Eight years old. That was the year she met Ranveer. ☺️☺️ But Chirag... 😡😡 I see that Jeffrey Archer books are your current love.

Aw. You are too cute! 😳😳 And no worries. Ishaani is just the way I wanted her to be here. 😉😉 Dashing, bold and attitude-filled. 😃😃 But a little or a lot more broken too. 😭😭 And if at all the show Ishaani had said that, 'The smartest ones make the stupidest mistakes.' I would have been ROFLing but here Ishaani IS smart. 👏👏

I'm again telling you that you're too cute. 😳😳 And October... That's one of the awesome months. Dusshera vacations and autumn. Ahem, coming back. I hope this October won't be Obnoxious for IshVeer. 😳😳

Love,

Effulgent

I enjoy reading your inputs and reviews a lot. ⭐️⭐️ It's the best source of fun for me during my own study breaks. 😆😆 And by now, you must know that I'm a box of surprises, so let's see how this one pans out. 😛😛 As to the update, well I've been making contingencies since two weeks before my exams began so that you guys don't have to wait too much for the updates.

Well, if you've read the update, you'll get the whole reference point. 😉😉 And yeah, I've gotten rather attached to the Jeffrey Archer books. ☺️☺️ I guess I get that as a hereditary from my grandpa. He also used to love his books a lot. And besides, Archer's books have helped me gain a new perspective in terms of writing as well. 😎😎

Originally posted by: Pluviophile

1. So true. 😳😳

2. Ooh-ho. This ladki is so... What to tell!

3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, taken. 😆😆

9. It's happens with me. But now, not so much like before. 😛😛 But I will rather remain silent all the time now. Till I really have to talk. Are you a chatter box or the silent one? I know that MM is a chatter box. 😆😆 When I talk with her, I too become one. 🤪🤪

10. This guy is impossible. 🤪🤪

11. Really? I wanted Ishani's answer to be akin as Ranveers. 🥺🥺

12. Oh, okay. ⭐️⭐️

13. 👍🏼👍🏼

And, true that. This chapter is one of my favourites, I bet. 😛😛 And *wolf-whistles again* You've been the Asst. Head Girl! 🥳🥳 We have it in tenth. And I'm still in eighth. 🤪🤪

Since they'll be, or the age is, so silly in Book Three, you can take my suggestion. Our Ishaani in trouble for using swear words. 😈 Yes, that age is... You are in that phase, right? But you are so balanced and even. ❤️❤️ It's okay! 👍🏼👍🏼

Love,

Effulgent

Yes, I've been one in the tenth and it was THE best year I must have had in my whole academic life. Hehe, you're obsessed with getting Ishaani caught for cussing. 😆😆 Don't worry, I'll give it good thought. And yeah, I'm balanced and even, but then again I'm a 'still waters run deep' kind of person, who I have my own shares of stupidity too.