#2 ~FF : Untold Stories~ - Page 108

Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer

Also LM if i dont manage to catch up all the reviews before this thread got finished , I just want you know that I am sure that all the updates I have not read is amazing and beautiful written ❤️ I will try to give you reviews at least twice in a week , but I might not be verry active the months further cause my plans are fullbooked 😭😭

Loads of love and best wishes with rest of your updates and thread(s)🤗🤗

MM

Cherie, how many times must I tell you not to apologize for this? And I'm going to miss you loads over here! I hope that your plans work out and you take great care of yourself. 😳😳 Remember that you have to come back to me then. 😛😛

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

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Okay, okay, I won't say it, bas? Please don't hit your head on the wall for that. 😆😆 And yes, I have the same kind of friends too. 🤣🤣 I hope that these vacations are productive for me. 😛😛 Aha, next time, I'll hire a nanny (inspired from you) for Disha so that she can become good. 😉😉

That's one habit that isn't going to go, so you'll have to live with it. 😳😳

Love,

LM

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hey LM hi you are on fire so much lovely updates
Now coming to your update
So dhikra went for trading I must say this ranveer so best and smart that it makes us fall a bit more for him although we already drool over him sorry so he did it that to in a better way well what we can expect but mister perfect is still not happy with it I guess he planned to earn huge profit on first day itself
O so ranveer thinks that his mota babuji is very naive and he is too innocent to lie under the nose of his mota babuji o boy he is turning 18 well love is all in the air in this conversation of them
So now HP was right that he know very well about love and relationship of falguni and hp but it's just the fact that he choose to ignore or is to naive to actually realise it's altogether meaning
You have so perfectly explained !meaning of love and difference between marriage love and hate
That sentence explaining how marriage is based on many things and love is a part of it also I just realised how he hinted at the things that lovers always don't end up together well that's what happened with our ishveer
Trio know very well that falguni don't love him but I like the fact that she inspire harshad to love the way he loves her
And ya though everything was best in chapter two most special thing was how life is the best teacher one can have how well you have written about destiny I mean it's kind of we own create it step by step though blue print is already present
And that last part explains the title of this ff and I am now connecting some dots to find gist of this though I know very well that I ll fail because you end up giving new surprises every now and then
Love again got mentioned here
Harshad is just so smart that I love him he knew very well which flower he want and for whom
Baa is such a devil she spoiled such a good moment for him she deserves ishani's special treatment
Well I guess that these small dots connection made him believe that ishani loves I wish harshad had given some peace of his mind to that stupid dumbo
Well what you are indicating about painting you always leave me in a doubt
LM you are such a perfect writer I know I am boring you with same line but can't help it
Thanx for pm
Waiting for next

Originally posted by: IshveerForever

LM , at the moment I'm not being able to catch up with giving the reviews , because my schedule is getting all booked up as my holidays come to an end 😭 , I will update a few times and catch up as much as I can .. But even if I've not read the updates yet I'm 100% sure they are great and amazing and beautifully written 😳 as ur writing is phenomenal 👏

Heaps of love and best wishes for the coming chapters dear :)
And yes me and apply will surely finish this thread too at some point 😆

Ash sweetie, don't worry about the reviews, it's completely alright. All the best for your next semester and study well! 👍🏼👍🏼 Loads of well wishes, hugs and love to you as well! 🤗🤗 Stay blessed and always be happy. ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

For Epistle 41: WOW, GIRL! Just wow. I can't find words. Words just abandon me to describe this epistle. I can't tell you how inspirational it's truly been. I feel like reading it again and again. And that's what I did.

It was like a sonnet, really. In a sonnet, the first six lines speak of a problem, and the last eight lines speak of the solution to the problem.

Here, Ranveer starts with the running, he describes that he was tired of the world tagging him a servant. And gradually, he proceeds to his accident phase. It's true what he said. It always takes losing something to know it's importance by it's absense and to appreciate it. And this is what I loved the most... pain. Pain isn't a good companion at all... *_* And I had connected the puzzle to its pieces that day in Feb. Love died to give a new birth to Ranveer.

And I like the part that Ranveer's advise proved worthy and gave big bucks to HP. And he is HP's official advisor. <3 I see that this chapter is full of inspiration. Of passion to achieve and conquer. And the Ranveer gradually proceeds to talk of Ishaani. About how she's always been there for him. I loved the part where he says that the least HD could do in return for his rebirth in Ishaani's arms was to give her his existence. Hayee! Aise accha, grateful wala ladka aaj kal kaha milta hain!? And God! He is an obsessive runner.

I also love the connection between Nature and Ranveer, so explicitly written. Nature and Ranveer always seem the perfect combo. I don't know why, but some things are naturally like that, aren't they?

The 'long way to go' reminded me of a certain poem by Robert Frost (I guess), where there's a line... 'I have promises to keep and miles to go before I sleep.' <3

And ahem, coming back. Didn't I tell that a sonnet's second part is about the solution. Here, Ranveer finds the solution to his problems (at the start of this epistle) as he tells that he does not care what the world tags him as. It only matters to him what Ishaani thinks of him. It's been said in the show, too (but HP was also included there). It's she truly, who can make him or break him.

The way he dreams of being an equal to Ishaani is drool-worthy. <3 And he stops running to scream and let out his building up emotions. He had to return back through the wilderness for her.

A splendid update. And wonderfully written.

Love,

Poplu.

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

For Epistle 42: Another brilliant look-in to the slightly grown Ishaani's life. She is way more mature. The Holi... here, Ishaani is introduced through the last epistle's sonnet like way.

A problem - illegitimacy. At the end, she does find the solution. Her pain... Ishaani never had the capacity to fight through her pain alone as Ranveer does (although he requires her support sometimes). But I love the part after she runs into the store room. The monologue is inspiring. And her term 'walk of shame' is something similar to what we all do to mitigate the effects of a failure. I have been through the walk of shame once too. Uh... let's not get to that.

Then, Ranveer is well... Ranveer. Always on the lookout to protect and support Ishaani. Their conversations are what I love the most every time I read it. It has a perfect balance of the nok-jhok and the serious stuff.

Ranveer had kept his hand beneath hers at the bonfire. That boy, really. He loves her so much. And she does too. Otherwise, why will a seventeen year old girl describe a boy so purely and intently. Had she only realised her love. Her description about how they both love/can love differently yet with passionately is my favourite. <3 Ishaani's love has always been destructive and fiery. Ranveer's is the calm, passionate and cool. And their combo is worth batting eyelids (like the IF emoticon). <3

She said it right, they are diamonds. Diamonds in the making. And the update ended with a legible question. No one knows what's in store for them the next day, at all. Not even what's in for the next moment. Ending it here.

Love,

Poplu.

PS. I love the usage of particular scenes from the show. Like, the ice-cream one.

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

For Epistle 43: Aha! Ranveer drunk. I read it on 30th itself (day before my Sanskrit exam) after I had finished studying. And believe me, I had been laughing my head off for an explosive ten minutes. That poem, Snake-dancing, RKM (those singers) songs and Urdu/Farsi poetry?! xD xD

Seriously, Ranveer is helluva cute here! (Forgive my language). Er... at two in the night. And drunk. He can't get anymore adorable. *goes all 'aww'* So, a teenage (mood swings are horrible, I guess; glad I dot have them) Ranveer gets his hand on the drinks.

It always begins with a sip. Those sips turn into glasses... don't all addictions begin with the tiniest of prompts? And drinking at near eighteen... umm, condemnable, but seeing him go all cute, I can care less about that. Even Ishaani can.

He-he. Solid reasons for drinking. Missing Maa and a squabble with Ishaani. Ishaani took real pleasure seeing Ranveer's reactions on the terrace. She is not-so-serious one time and explodes the next. That girl is something. Came in the terrace at two o' clock. Um, I already had found her answer unconvincing that day. My guess had been right.

At the end, how they just ended up star-gazing! Ugh... these two make me drool upon them (Ranveer more than Ishaani). And your one-liner endings are at their best. 'She was my only vice.' Ah... *day-dreams*

Off to the next one, now. Splendid update; light-hearted one after ages.

Love,

Poplu.

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

For Epistle 44: 'Okay, I'm the one who sounds terribly drunk.' <3 <3 For the first time in forever, Ishaani makes me drrroooll upon her. Aha! Ishaani back to her cheery self. This update is again a light-hearted one. More so, a mixture of seriousness and light-hearted.

Boards over. 10th and 12th. What a relief for them both! The close camaderie they share is well-described. It's funny how they went from being too formal to not-so-formal. IshVeer are a beauty made in heaven truly.

Pottery barns! LM, you girl! You find small things which suit IshVeer aptly and makes it work for them. <3. IshVeer are one such duo who find happiness and learning in the smallest of things, too. The last line is again apt for them. 'I'm sure that the pottery barns will teach me more than just to make pots.' When Ishaani agrees to it, I think that maybe Ranveer does, too ('cause this is Ishaani's diary and we don't know what Ranveer views this as).

And two disgruntled puppies shooed away... can I take a few minutes to drool over them? <3 Falguni and HP's reactions are droolworthy as well... Ugh. I have a complain - Girl, you make me drool and smile like an idiot too many times! Thank Goodness, my father has fill now not caught me smiling like that. Otherwise, what might he think?

And the narration style is again clap-worthy! *claps* You included two entries in one update. I especially love the line - 'Goody-two shoes Ranveer Vaghela, Mr. Prefect Perfect was drunk!'

The second entry was a bliss as well. Her reason for coming up, I had guess it. *grins evilly* She cried too, now I truly felt bad for this poor girl. And then, magic happened. Ranveer came there. GOD! The entire description was amazing! Ranveer screaming, 'Weee!' at the top of his voice. xD And he did tell her that he loves her. But our Ishaani is all about friendship, right now.

And that's right, Ranveer is always the bigger mystery box. <3 Her reverence and respect for him is beautiful and inspiring. Let me end it here, now.

A BEAUTIFUL update! I loved this the most in Book Three because as I said, it has the perfect mixture. And also, I am pretty sure that you will churn out more beautiful chapters which will make it to my 'Favourite Playlist'. :D

Love,

Poplu.

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

For Epistle 45: AH! I OFFICIALLY AM A FANGIRL OF HARSHAD PAREKH, NOW HERE!

Excuse me for my wooziness. Your update made me so. *chuckles* I am truly acting like I am drunk. Drunk in all my glory. Drinking in the drops of your FF; when did I get so poetic? Never mind. I will continue my reviewing.

Baa has to be the cold hag! Ugh! That woman seriously needs to have her brai checked for having an unreasonable and prejudiced hate on Ishaani and Ranveer. Accusing him of theft!

And intra-day trading. <3 Well, I am so happy for Ranveer. :D

So, love. Love has so many dimensions, many which are not explored. The explored ones are what we talk about most of the times. HP and Ranveer's conversation is added to my 'all time favourite literary conversations list'. The conversation between Amir and Hassan in The Kite Runner during the kite-flying tournament is one among them too. <3

Coming back. Girl, you just preached so many things to me. I am so happy that I am get tutored for free. :D All the dimensions, principles and fundamentals... they are so aesthetically told. Brilliant, brilliantly written, girl! I loved the part where HP tells that two lovers who has strayed away, if they are meant to be, they will cross each other's paths and re-unite. And true, it's all people's perception of how they see the love stories. Ranveer did not get all that, then. But I am sure now, the Interlude Ranveer reading all this, for him, the jigsaw pieces will be falling into place.

And it's also true. Quoting from OSO, "Agar woh happy ending nahi toh, woh ending hi nahi hain!"

I can't say more than this on that (the conversation). You know why. Because you just made me dumbstruck. Coming to the orchid part... Life is full of surprises. Some pleasant. Some not. But it gives you surprises only when you don't expect one... Hayee. IshVeer are always beautiful. After the Baa fiasco, Ranveer goes to his room and finds the butterscotch ice cream, orchid (I wonder why she gave it back) and the note. A beautiful end to the Epistle. But I wish that Ishaani had fed him the ice-cream. ;)

Another beautiful addition to already the many over there! Update the next one, soon!

Love,

Poplu.

PS. *WEEE* I just finished reviewing all the updates of yours!