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-FlameOfHope-

@-FlameOfHope-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1061

For Epistle 44: 'Okay, I'm the one who sounds terribly drunk.' <3 <3 For the first time in forever, Ishaani makes me drrroooll upon her. Aha! Ishaani back to her cheery self. This update is again a light-hearted one. More so, a mixture of seriousness and light-hearted.

Boards over. 10th and 12th. What a relief for them both! The close camaderie they share is well-described. It's funny how they went from being too formal to not-so-formal. IshVeer are a beauty made in heaven truly.

Pottery barns! LM, you girl! You find small things which suit IshVeer aptly and makes it work for them. <3. IshVeer are one such duo who find happiness and learning in the smallest of things, too. The last line is again apt for them. 'I'm sure that the pottery barns will teach me more than just to make pots.' When Ishaani agrees to it, I think that maybe Ranveer does, too ('cause this is Ishaani's diary and we don't know what Ranveer views this as).

And two disgruntled puppies shooed away... can I take a few minutes to drool over them? <3 Falguni and HP's reactions are droolworthy as well... Ugh. I have a complain - Girl, you make me drool and smile like an idiot too many times! Thank Goodness, my father has fill now not caught me smiling like that. Otherwise, what might he think?

And the narration style is again clap-worthy! *claps* You included two entries in one update. I especially love the line - 'Goody-two shoes Ranveer Vaghela, Mr. Prefect Perfect was drunk!'

The second entry was a bliss as well. Her reason for coming up, I had guess it. *grins evilly* She cried too, now I truly felt bad for this poor girl. And then, magic happened. Ranveer came there. GOD! The entire description was amazing! Ranveer screaming, 'Weee!' at the top of his voice. xD And he did tell her that he loves her. But our Ishaani is all about friendship, right now.

And that's right, Ranveer is always the bigger mystery box. <3 Her reverence and respect for him is beautiful and inspiring. Let me end it here, now.

A BEAUTIFUL update! I loved this the most in Book Three because as I said, it has the perfect mixture. And also, I am pretty sure that you will churn out more beautiful chapters which will make it to my 'Favourite Playlist'. :D

Love,

Poplu.

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-FlameOfHope-

@-FlameOfHope-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1062

For Epistle 45: AH! I OFFICIALLY AM A FANGIRL OF HARSHAD PAREKH, NOW HERE!

Excuse me for my wooziness. Your update made me so. *chuckles* I am truly acting like I am drunk. Drunk in all my glory. Drinking in the drops of your FF; when did I get so poetic? Never mind. I will continue my reviewing.

Baa has to be the cold hag! Ugh! That woman seriously needs to have her brai checked for having an unreasonable and prejudiced hate on Ishaani and Ranveer. Accusing him of theft!

And intra-day trading. <3 Well, I am so happy for Ranveer. :D

So, love. Love has so many dimensions, many which are not explored. The explored ones are what we talk about most of the times. HP and Ranveer's conversation is added to my 'all time favourite literary conversations list'. The conversation between Amir and Hassan in The Kite Runner during the kite-flying tournament is one among them too. <3

Coming back. Girl, you just preached so many things to me. I am so happy that I am get tutored for free. :D All the dimensions, principles and fundamentals... they are so aesthetically told. Brilliant, brilliantly written, girl! I loved the part where HP tells that two lovers who has strayed away, if they are meant to be, they will cross each other's paths and re-unite. And true, it's all people's perception of how they see the love stories. Ranveer did not get all that, then. But I am sure now, the Interlude Ranveer reading all this, for him, the jigsaw pieces will be falling into place.

And it's also true. Quoting from OSO, "Agar woh happy ending nahi toh, woh ending hi nahi hain!"

I can't say more than this on that (the conversation). You know why. Because you just made me dumbstruck. Coming to the orchid part... Life is full of surprises. Some pleasant. Some not. But it gives you surprises only when you don't expect one... Hayee. IshVeer are always beautiful. After the Baa fiasco, Ranveer goes to his room and finds the butterscotch ice cream, orchid (I wonder why she gave it back) and the note. A beautiful end to the Epistle. But I wish that Ishaani had fed him the ice-cream. ;)

Another beautiful addition to already the many over there! Update the next one, soon!

Love,

Poplu.

PS. *WEEE* I just finished reviewing all the updates of yours!

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ShadikaIshVeer

@ShadikaIshVeer

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#1063

Review for Epistle 25

First of all I have to admitt that I am not into stock market ( business stuff) but really liked how you explained it , cause I understood what HP was saying to Ranveer😊😊

"Is my knowledge any good, really? No matter what I do, at the end of the day, I'm always going to remain a servant. At the end of the day, my knowledge is only going to be restricted to doing household chores."

"Who said so?" he asks me angrily and I cower under his glance, heavily stammering. He disregards it and speaks in a very grim voice.

"Listen to me very carefully, Ranveer. Just because you have been born into circumstances that aren't bright, it does not mean that dreaming about the moon is a sin. More often than not, you wouldn't belive it but the moon is attainable. When I was your age, even my financial condition was the same, and I even had to look after my younger siblings and had to carry my mother's business on my shoulders. It wasn't pleasant to leave school like that or to be laughed upon by my friends for being poor, but the one thing that I never let go off was knowledge."

"You're right Mota Babuji... I don't know why, but I just-" but even before I can complete my statement, he cuts me again.

"Always remember that knowledge sees no social status nor caste nor creed nor religion. Knowledge was made so that we could evolve. And who ever said that you are going to remain a servant? Ranveer, I don't know much about anything else, but I'm going to educate you as well as the other kids of the house. Take that on a stamped piece of paper or not, this isn't going to change. Nobody can control the condition that you are born into, but nobody has ever restricted you from exploring your entire future, for that is entirely yours."

"Is it wrong to dream of becoming a big man, Mota Babuji?" I ask suddenly, finally wanting the answers that I've been denied all my life. Mota Babuji's reply made my day.

"Ofcourse not. Its only if you dream big that you actually acieve your dreams. Few have the courage to do so, but those who see their dreams through to the end, those are the ones who emerge victorious. When I started off, I had no money and people scorned at me. Today, the same set of people revere me. Today you may think that you are only a servant, but tomorrow, you'll be a big man, you see. Mark my words, you're destiny has been written for greater things. You're sincere, humble, hardworking, honest, loyal, dedicated and above all, a smart and sharp young man - what more do you need?" he asks me gently as he cups my cheek lovingly and I shake my head, trying to hide away the tear that fell from my eye.

"I feel so afraid at times when I dream, Mota Babuji... its like dreams were never meant to happen," I whisper softly and he shakes his head in understanding.

"There's a thin line between dreams and probable reality. Always remember one thing, what goes around, comes around. It's nature's rule. Speaking of nature, you'll be coming with us to Manali for a week. Is that alright?" he suddenly looks at Baba and asks him, who was silently listening to our conversation with tears in his own eyes. Baba nodded his head and said softly"

LM this part was just PERFECT🤗 I just loved how you portrayed his questiones and doubt and how HP encouraged him , supported him and explained to him that his dreams can be reality 😳😳. Just truly beatiful written LM , I am in love with this part in the story🤗 HP and Ranveer's scenes on the show was the golden days of matsh😃😃

And the last part was just He will for sure make the moon his

As always a verry beautiful job with the update🤗🤗 You write so beautiful LM , and keep writing like this LM😳😳😳 Reading from you always makes my day😃😃😃

With loads of love & best wishes

MM❤️❤️

Edited by ShadikaIshVeer - 9 years ago

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#1064

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

I'm very honest. 😆😆 Nope, I will review them like I used to. I just needed some time. But I don't feel better. It's like I betrayed my friend. I really plan on giving all the reviews to the chapters. I have read them, just yet to give a review. I didn't read the new update, though. I'll just have to sort things out which are messed and come back, truly. 🤔🤔

Don't be so absurd. 😳😳 It happens and it's alright. 😆😆

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#1065

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

Yep, perfectly explained. 👏👏 Oh my. Jaundice. 😲😲 I am happy that you are doing alright now. And death is like that sometimes. Or many of the times. I wish that he's found happiness and is at peace in the other world. 😊😊

Yep, I'm alright now, thanks. 😳😳 It'll be ten years for it this August. 😆😆 And yeah, he's definitely left for a better place, and I hope he's proud of me wherever he is. 😊😊

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#1066

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

You have reduced or cut down wholly on your spamming. 😆😆 That's the reason why you are at a slow pace. Oh, you are so sweet and big-hearted. 😛😛 That's why Ashu and me break your rules. 😈🤣

Interlude 16. That's still a long way ahead. 🤣🤣 I will wait for it. 👍🏼👍🏼 So, I have a question for you which I ask most of the people. Would you like to read minds or speak different tongues? 😃😃

Ever ever again. 😊😊 Yeah, the show has been full-on preaching on aashiqui, sacrifice, promises and saath nibhana. 😳 Ahem, I should beware and decipher the quotes accordingly now. 😈😈

Oh yep, well. Hadn't truly thought of this one. Now, I have to go read the updates and ponder more on it. 😛😛 God, you girls (Niki, Elvish, Aaru and you) are too mysterious. 😆😆

Chalo, chalo, now enough maska maarofying for the spamming thing. 😈🤣 Yes, Interlude 16 is still a long way ahead. 😆😆 As to your question, I love doing both. What does that say about me? 😉😉 As to the show and it's preaching, the lesser said the better. 🤢🤢 Matsh and I were talking about it just this morning and saying how Ranveer went half loony because of all the things HP preached to him.

Yes, I have a lot of inside jokes with the quotes I make.

As to the mystery about the painting, well life's full of mysteries now, isn't it? No fun if there isn't anything to decipher. 🤔🤔

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#1067

Originally posted by: Lovemyself...
Hey LM!!!

So this time I m not late ...

I know last review of mine is still res.

Bt it's a tragedy...
😕
I wrote such a long review & when I post it it came error... 😭
So I m not sure now I'll write it again or not...
So sorry for that...

Coming to ur chapter...
It was amazing as always... 👏
Seriously u r too good at writing...

Baa...she is the person I think who can not change behaviour... 😡
& ishani is obvious to not control her mind...

Ranveer & his passion about shares is really awesome ...
Isn't it? 😛
It gives me so positive feelings to stick wid dreams. 😊

Love...
The word which is impossible to describe in even infinite words...
Bt u described it so well that also in such paragraph... 👏

I really like bond between harshad parekh & ranveer...
Harshad's words about one side love was really amazing..

Sacrifice & compromise ...
It was really awesome...
Even I believe that this 2 words are too much important in any bomd or relationship...

Ranveer gives flower to ishani...
It was so cute...

Ishani & her mood swings...
(If I say truly I m the same as her...
My mood swings are even terrible... 😉 )

I think harshad knows very well about ranveer's feelings towards ishani...
He is really friendly person... 😊

Last paragraph was so good...
Really...ishani & her care towards him...

Her note about surprise was supperbb...

Thnx for pm...
Update soon...

Ps. This review is too lame...
I know... bcoz I have written it too fast...
Thnk u for bearing wid this... 😊

Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so, so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ And don't worry about the previous review, it's alright. 😆😆 Although I can imagine how you must have felt about it, I've been through the same thing way too many times.

Coming to the review, Baa is a real pain in the ass, I swear.

So yes, Ishaani has got her valid reasons for having her views on her.

As to Ranveer, yes he inspires me a lot as well or rather, my own beliefs are inspired through him. 😳😳

I'm glad that you liked the teensy bit of description about love.

Like I always say, love is something no mortal man can completely understand, and I'm happy that you share the same view. 😃😃 As to HP and Ranveer's conversations, I love writing them! And yes, no relationship can ever sail through without compromise and sacrifice both. 🤔🤔

Yeah, I'm happy to see how so many are realting to the mood swings. 🤣🤣 They're really crazy, these mood swings. As to Ranveer giving Ishaani that flower, well that was again one moment that made me blush as I was writing it. ☺️☺️

And yes, like I'd mentioned in Interlude 10's FB as well, Harshad did know about Ranveer's feelings for Ishaani all along, or rather, he had the gist of it. 😊😊 And the ending is my personal favourite excerpt from the chapter.

Thank you so much once again and I'll try to update the next chapter soon enough! ❤️❤️

Love,

Ps. No self-criticizing your reviews.

They aren't lame.

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#1068

Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer

How many times have I told you I dont like whaat you write I LOVE WHAT YOU WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Do I have to scream it out to the whole word to make you belive me Next time you say " I am glad you liked it " I will hit my head on the wall due to frustration 😆😆

I am sho happy shappy to hear you are good🤗🤗 Dont ask me about me , my teachers goal is to murder me and when I try to study my friends throw papersball on me😆😆 Aww lucky girl you are on vacation, have the best time darl 🤗🤗

Always senorita , that is the only thing that matters Kids are my life I swear I can't still belive that you made a little kid be this mean😭😭 Disha should have had me as her babysitter😆😆 Ahahaa can't blame Ishani 🤣 Kitne cute hain yaar Yeah she reminds me so much about Ashu when it comes to this matter🤣 Ashu is going to love me for saying this 🤗

LM sometimes I am your good student🤗😎 Phir thank you

Loads of love

MM

Okay, okay, I won't say it, bas? Please don't hit your head on the wall for that. 😆😆 And yes, I have the same kind of friends too.

I hope that these vacations are productive for me. 😛😛 Aha, next time, I'll hire a nanny (inspired from you) for Disha so that she can become good. 😉😉

That's one habit that isn't going to go, so you'll have to live with it. 😳😳

Love,

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#1069

Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer

t sure is 😉 I am so good BMing dad to cook for me 😎 My dad even agreed for a hug 😆😆 You so should , but I cooked for him the next day 😆😆

Keep surprising me like this☺️ I can imagine Effulgent faiting now🤣 You better not , and they sure are

Bas I love you the most LM ❤️❤️

LM the kid I babysitt proposed me second time Damn do you know how hard it is to say no , and clearly he dont understand why the agedifference matter🤣🤣

Damn he is going to have so many girls running after him😆😆

Hehe, I'm good with BMing too, but I don't like to BM. 😆😆 And yes, our romance is increasing the summer heat over here. 😉😉

Haye haye! Propose? 😲😲 Man, kids are so cute and innocent!

As to who loves who more, I love you more. Ab bas. ❤️❤️

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#1070

Originally posted by: Bloomfield
Not AT ALL COOL! --_--

I am starting to become late for my reviews! And I am really sorry for that, LM!

So here's my very quick review for the 44th Epistle--Ishani's!

I have told you, Ishani's is always fun to read! MM!!!!! *Blushes and laughs* This was damn funny again! xD xD Her reactions about his behaviour! My God! You made me smile today again! :') :')

And he confessed! (Though he was drunk and partly wrong by saying that it was from a friend;s POV. --_--) Ranveer cannot change, can he? o_O

And that was not the only surprise! She kissed him too! *Blushing furiously now* Gosh! I am dead already! Those li'l moments made my day, you know? :') :')

Lovely update, darling! I'll try to be on time from now on! :(

AV

Thank you so much, sweetheart! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ And God, will you guys stop apologizing? It's alright, I understand. 😳😳

Coming to the review, I'm really happy that you enjoy her POV so much. 😆😆 And I'm happy that I made you laugh with this again. 😛😛 As to Ranveer... poor soul is all I'm saying for him. Hehe, Ishaani's then again full of surprises now, isn't she? 😳😳

Thank you so much once again! ❤️❤️

Love,

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