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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Elvish_Hobbit

Beautiful update, MM. It was a chilling one. Loved the way you expressed the agony of his life, the anguish and most of all their encounter. So that's how they met? It's the pain that connects them both and defines their existence. As long as they exist their life has to have incredible pain for them and their love heals it. It's so beautiful and so sad.

BTW, MM, I think on a point you need to correct. In the quote you wrote about moon and sun you said, "Sun loved moon so much that died every night so that sun could live." It should rather be "Sun loved moon so much that it died every night so that moon could live." Do make the correction please. It was a beautiful update. And sorry for the late reply.

Shank u so much Elvish🤗🤗 I am glad u found it beautiful😳😳 Poor soul , he always been connected with pain and she as well 😭 But that what connects them both but also how they find the light in each other❤️ Yes it is beautiful and painful at the same time,
Oh Elvish thank u so much for telling me that , i did not notice the error 🤪 U are my lifesavioure 😳 I will correct it now😳
Shank u once again and please no sorry😉😉
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AN : Hey everyone 😊 Hope you all are doing well, just want to infrom you that there wont be IshVeer in this chapter. So sorry for that and sorry for any typos.
Have a nice reading😳
Chapter 67
Broken pieces

Anil had met many beautiful women's in his life, yet it was only one who left him speechless and dazed. Ridhima Khanna, sure she was good-looking heck she was one of the most beautiful girls he every laid his eyes on but it was something else with her. She was like a melody to a song, beautiful, enchanting and ... Broken, she was broken and he could see it in her appealing eyes. Her eyes were dreamy but missed life, he 's seen spark and determination in them. But still it was a deep sorrow in those eyes that made him wonder behind Ridhima Khanna 's complex personality, what was it that left her in this much pain.

Ridhima found her employer Anil looking lost, rolling her eyes she went towards him and said " Anil , I do not pay you for daydreaming about girls " she said in an authorized voice . Anil snapped back from her thoughts and looked at her embarrassed. He could clearly read amusement on her face to found him embarrassed and before she could give him a cocky line he outsmarted her with his line.

" I was not dreaming about girls , I was dreaming about one certain beauty " he said and daringly he went and stood really close to her . Seeing her eyes full of fire, he knew he had pushed the wrong buttons .

" Don't you dare try to cross the line , because you really don't want to see what I am made of " she warned him and with that she was about to walk of , but he stopped her in here tracks.

"I think you are kind , hardworking , caring , smart and strong" he said , the admiration clear in his voice. He looked at her eyes as they softened, his boss must appear as a women to not mess with. But did not stop him from reading her and he found something he knew she did not want him to find. Her heart was big, that was the reason why she had left her luxuries life as a doctor and daughter of a millionaire to work as the boss in a hospital for the poorest patients. He heard the staff gossiping about how she had buyed the hospital when its previous owner could not pay for it anymore. How the new and the young owner had put all her money on the hospital , rebuilding it and making the doctors payment bigger and hired the best doctors from all over the world .

" Don't try to play sugary sweet with me , now go back to your work . Your lunch break is over "she said her voice like she was talking to a little kid. He laughed, which seemed to annoy her more than she would ever admit.

"You are not as cold stoned as you are trying to appear "he said sincerely, because he had seen how much she truly cared. He had seen her with kids, she would always threat them with that much care and respect that any parent could trust there kid in her hand. He had seen her eyes filled with unshed tears when they failed to save a patient. She never really cried in front of anyone, because after all a doctor is taught to learn how to live with the death of a patient. However, no one cannot deny that we are humans as well, and it pains us. However, we move on, but we never forget.

He heard her sigh and for the first time he saw her break down the wall she built around him and she whispered slowly "Don't walk on broken pieces, cause have a broken mirror ever been whole again even if you tried to pick up the pieces? NO. " And with those words uttered she walked out of the cafeteria leaving him wondering what broke her into pieces.

Ridhima Khanna went to her cabin and slammed the door after herself. She was angry, oh she was beyond angry, she was pissed. How dare he talk to here like that, what did he thought she was damsel he could try to romance. No, she was Ridhima Khanna and no one talked to here like that. Yet Anil, always seemed to not read her warning seriously like others . He liked to see how far he could push her line, see if he could boil any response out of her . She sighed , the one thing about him was that he did his work with the utmost dedication and he was one of the best doctors she have ever met and he got along with everyone from patients , coworkers and relatives of the patients so firing him was out of the list.

This day was one of those days she did not even want to be at work, she would rather lay under her blankets until dawn the next morning. Because on this date was the day Ranveer Kapoor was born, her bestfriend and brother from another world. Another relation she had failed, and she wished wherever he where he had found some happiness and solace.

She still remember the words she had said to him, gosh that day she had died. When she said those words to Ranveer, in that moment she lost the innocence in her eyes and was consumed with deep sorrow. She had lost two brothers; she had been left with immense pain watching her brother bleed to death , yet another kind of pain and guilt consumed her knowing she had killed Ranveer with her words .

She opened the first drawer and took out the gold frame; she touched Akash cheeks and whispered, "Oh if only it had been me instead of you "she whispered weakly. She smiled a pained smile looking at Ranveer standing next to her, having his arms around her.

"Happy birthday Ranveer, wherever you are know that your little sister is thinking about you"

A small tear fell from her eyes, and she hurriedly wiped it off. She put the frame back and put her wall back up and said "You are Ridhima Khanna, You don't cry, you don't. You are emotionless "she lied to herself.

Anil stared at the patient in front of him; it sickened him to see the bruises all over her body. Kids were supposed to play and laugh not fighting for their life. He told the nurse to take care of her while he came back in minutes. Giving the girl in front of him one last look before he hurriedly went to his boss cabin and knocked on it in improper manner.

His boss opened the door immediately and seeing his worried demeanor, she knew something was wrong.

"what is it ?" she asked her voice dead serious

"I have a patient, a teenager girl who has bruises all over her body some is old and some is fresh. All my doubts are on abuse, you need to call the police "he said

"Okey , what's her name ?"

"Alia "he whispered back and before leaving to help his patient he gave her his patients file. Ridhima read into it and found an investigation on her .Reading further she found out Alia was adopted, but later her foster parents had died in a tragic accident leaving her in shelter. She looked for a number and saw the officer's name who had helped her when she first met the police.

" Ranveer Vaghela " she read and dialed the number , having no idea what she getting herself into.

Edited by ShadikaIshVeer - 9 years ago
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Chapter 68

Finding you

Ranveer smiled as he read his description about the meeting with ishani in his diary, he was always fond of Ishani from the first meeting. Now it was beyond amazing that she was his wife and one day hopefully be the mother of his children. A small blush appeared on his cheeks, and he thought it was amazing how ishani had made him want that. He never imagined himself like this, but love is a wonderful thing and can change anyone.


He smiled happily like a little kid opening Christmas gift .imagining his beautiful wife with a womb. His smile turned to a laugh wondering how he would have to handle his tantrums but he would happily take anything she will throw his way. Honestly he would love his child immensely no matter gender. But he had to admit he really was wising for a little girl, he wanted her to inherit everything from Ishani.Suddenly he realized what he was thinking, he hit his head with his diary, and mumbled, "Idiot, Ishani might not even be ready for that, and just now you were emotional thinking about Ridhima and seeing Akash. How did these thoughts cross my mind? "He wondered.

Shaking his head for his silliness, he took out a pen from his shirts pocket and wrote in diary :

"To my dearest Ishani,

I believe Ernest Hemingway said it best:" The best people possess a feeling for beauty, the courage to take risks, the discipline to tell the truth, the capacity for sacrifice. Ironically, their virtues make them vulnerable: they are often wounded sometimes destroyed. "

We both were wounded badly when we first met and none of us knew that we found our reason to heal, each other. Thank you for seeing beyond my broken heart, thank you for being patient with me , thank you for being the best listener and most of all thank you for reading me better than anyone else . However, most of all thank you for letting me love you, because I think every single step I have taken since I was born was a step towards finding you.

I might not be a poet, but you shall know my heart is with you. It belonged to you yesterday, it does today as it will tomorrow and it shall belong to you for eternity.

Know that I might not always be able to say romantic's lines as your beloved SRK, but just touch my heart and it will tell you everything you ever wondered. The first time I met you I trusted you enough to seek comfort from your arms , when I confessed my love for you on your birthday many years ago I told you I was trusting you with my heart , this year in 17 may our heart opened the doors again so we could heal each other yet again. Today I am giving you my diary, but for me it is more than that. It's my deepest thoughts, worries , declarations of love inside this book and I like to call it my story , but from today I want you to have it because I want you to write the next pages of this story . My story is about finding you Ishani, it always has been.


He put his pen down and he could feel his heart beating in a fast speed, he was nervous giving this to Ishani . Giving this book, symbolized that he trusts her as he never trusted anyone. Giving this book , meant being fully vulnerable and surprisingly Ranveer was cool with that . Afterall he wanted to grow old with Ishani, to look at their grandchildren one day and smile remembering when they had been young. If Ranveer wanted that, he had to be fully vulnerable with Ishani, let her know he trusted her fully and he was on this all the way.

He laid the diary safely in his book shelf and was about to go out of his room when the door opened, and he heard Ishani 's magical voice started singing " Happy Birthday " followed up by " Hurra for deg "

He stared at Disha , Ishani , Shikhar and Angela shockingly as they was holding cake in their hands and singing for him . Before he could even react, Angela threw herself in his arms and said "Happy birthday Superman " she said lovingly . Ranveer kissed her forehead and said "thank you my angel " he said and added " thank you everyone " Everyone smiled and came forward to wish him while Disha told him she had thrown a party for him and he should be there on time and look decent. He had nodded, knowing how much dedication she had put into it. He looked at Ishani lovingly while he crossed his arms and said "Sunny , you not going to wish me ?" he asked as he saw her cheeks were crimson red and he wondered why.

Disha elbowed him and whispered, "I think she was dreaming about kids, as she was mumbling something about beautiful kids "she said and winked at him. Ranveer smiled happily, he brought her into his arms, and whispered in his ears "Soon Sunny "he promised with taking a birthday kiss from his wife.

Ishani moved out breathless and looked at him with pure love as she whispered " Happy birthday and happy anniversary " and all she got in reply was a bear hug from him and Angela.

AN : Sorry for any typos . Constructive critism is more than welcome😊Also Merry Christmas to you all😳
Edited by ShadikaIshVeer - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: strings123

intriguing...so Riddhima is alive!

yes she is😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey cutie!

Merry Christmas, FoF...😊😊😊 And I read both the chapters just now so shorry for a late reply and shank you for the christmas gift. I loved it :)😆😆

So Ridhima(?) is alive and she calls him so! Hope they sort out their differences soon😳😳 Everything has to set and done right😉😉 And Ranveer is now going to gift his diary to her and it needs, TRUST⭐️⭐️⭐️ And I'm loving the trust!

So expecting quite a few more scenes like this and the way Disha whispered about Ishani having that dream! I found that cute!!😆😆

Brilliant job on both the chapters darl!😛😛

AV
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very Nice chapter Cherry😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shank u suta 🤗 ❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bloomfield

Res(Itnni jaldi? :O) wait kar yaar...



Take your time 😉 hehe my Christmas gift to u all , hamesha late update karthi hoon that's why 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveyDoveyNeha


Very Nice chapter Cherry😊



Shank u gudiya 🤗 🤗

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