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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: amazing3

Hi MM,

How are you doing?


Sorry for replying late. ...Infact I thought I had replied bcos I was one of the 1st to read this chapter but I decided to read again today and realised I haven't.

OMG chapter. ...so SPEECHLESS. ...The emotional setting is brilliant. ...

What a sad phase Ranveer has to go through. ...hope his mum makes it.

Love the support Ishani gave him. ..there's nothing better than having a warm hug in times like this even if it's from a stranger.

The narrative, expression and wording is beautifully done. ...you should be proud of yourself, you're so talented. ...😊

Overall, one word. ...OVERWHELMING CHAPTER . 😛




Hi dear🤗
I am okey , having a cold or else I am okey😳 How are u sweetie ?
No worries , I totally understand😊😊 Woow what a review dearie, i am really happy you liked it😊Shank u so much ❤️
Yes his mother made it 😊 But in the presnce of the story she is no more😭 And Ranveer really had a painful past😭
Yeah Ishani is the light in his darkest nightmare and darkest reality. Yes he truly needed a hug , he needed to feel safe
Woow thank you so much for such a huge compliment <3 means the world for me <3
A huge thank you for such a beautiful review <3 #Speechless
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
MM ⭐️⭐️ ⭐️
Good morning cherry 🤗 Hope you are doing well , 😃
Coming back to the chapter , its FLAWLESS ⭐️ like you 😉😉 , your descriptive writing has really shown out here on this chapter , the way you expressed the agony , their encounter
pain decries Ishveer and thats what makes them SOULMATES , both have gone through a lot
of pain and that their essence , thats what makes them compatible😳 ,
i really really adored this chapter ⭐️

#YourNo.1Fan
Ash 😉




Edited by IshveerForever - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Ashu, dont laugh😆😆 it was an error what to do😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: IshveerForever

Res ( Will write a review asap )

u have already reserved , are u going to write 2 reviews?😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer

u have already reserved , are u going to write 2 reviews?😆



Oh did i 😲 , i forgot , sorry 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: IshveerForever



Oh did i 😲 , i forgot , sorry 😆

hahaa yes😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer

Hi dear🤗
I am okey , having a cold or else I am okey😳 How are u sweetie ?
No worries , I totally understand😊😊 Woow what a review dearie, i am really happy you liked it😊Shank u so much ❤️
Yes his mother made it 😊 But in the presnce of the story she is no more😭 And Ranveer really had a painful past😭
Yeah Ishani is the light in his darkest nightmare and darkest reality. Yes he truly needed a hug , he needed to feel safe
Woow thank you so much for such a huge compliment <3 means the world for me <3
A huge thank you for such a beautiful review <3 #Speechless


You're welcome 😊

I'm doing very well, thanks for asking . ...just busy putting last touches to Christmas things. ...I have a carols service in church tonight so getting ready for that.

You have enough rest and keep yourself warm to get back up again. ..

Have a nice evening and take care...lol😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: amazing3


You're welcome 😊

I'm doing very well, thanks for asking . ...just busy putting last touches to Christmas things. ...I have a carols service in church tonight so getting ready for that.

You have enough rest and keep yourself warm to get back up again. ..

Have a nice evening and take care...lol😊

Glad to hear u are doing good😊 Well have a great time at church 😊
Thank u and hope u have a nice evning as well😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Beautiful update, MM. It was a chilling one. Loved the way you expressed the agony of his life, the anguish and most of all their encounter. So that's how they met? It's the pain that connects them both and defines their existence. As long as they exist their life has to have incredible pain for them and their love heals it. It's so beautiful and so sad.

BTW, MM, I think on a point you need to correct. In the quote you wrote about moon and sun you said, "Sun loved moon so much that died every night so that sun could live." It should rather be "Sun loved moon so much that it died every night so that moon could live." Do make the correction please. It was a beautiful update. And sorry for the late reply.

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