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Bloomfield

@Bloomfield

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#961

Hey LM!

So I loved this, again! They are right now thirteen?😳😳 And Ranveer has won an award for his dance performance! The happiness in his eyes and Ishani's were written so damn well! His treat too was so dreamy According to me, no one can love samosas any better than him. Not even me!😉😉

And the new word which I had learnt for you this time is : SANS PAREIL(Credits: Thesaurus.com) 😛😛

It means that you are second to none😉😉

And there goes Ranveer's long time(?) wish! To become a writer and she asking him to dedicate her name! How cute! Kids, you see😆😆 And the pen name, here it goes! ⭐️⭐️ Both of them are too sweet that I'm jealous that I did not get a friend like them.😆😆Like I do have better friends, but they weren't childhood😛😛

Lovely update sweetheart! Update the next one asap ;)⭐️⭐️

#Yours3Fan
AV

Edited by Bloomfield - 9 years ago

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ShadikaIshVeer

@ShadikaIshVeer

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#962

Hey love🤗

This chapter was so beautiful I loved it to the core❤️❤️ This is what I call " Magical update " Truly loved it😳😳 I love that song btw😉😉 Weee Ranveer won I am shoo happy to read that , such a beautiful moment I loved how his mom hugged him , and he hugged her first😳😳 I would have done the same thing😉😉 Unfortunately I am a terrible dancer🤣🤣

I loved this line :" My parents sat on the front row, clapping away madly, while Ishaani stood behind them, actually wolf-whistling! I didn't know that she had learnt to do that. Honestly, that girl is a mystery box." - This is cuteness overloaded

I love Falguni 's reaction , and loved that they still had a special connection😳😳 When Falguni scolded Ishani about the books, it reminded me of my mom and me😆😆

And what to say about IshVeer They are just beautiful , and kudus to your for writing them shoo beautiful👏

And yes Ranveer is an all- rounder and Ishu is a really good friend😳😳

The whole chapter was mesmirizing , and I loved how you wrote it so beautifully to the end😳😳 The ending was just simply wow:

" When we met each other for the first time, we were two people too matured for our ages; we were two people who had forgotten what it felt like to be children. In these four years, however, we have learnt to create a place for ourselves in the society and have learnt to face all odds with a broad smile upon our faces. True, there were times when it did hurt a lot, but we always found solace with each other. In those four years, we had learnt to accept the truth for what it was and to our astonishment and amazement, we learnt that we had never felt happier this way. These four years have changes us a lot - these four years connected us to who were really were.

We were the dancing stars upon the canvass of the indigo sky."

LM , when will you write your own book?

With love

Your better half😆😉

Edited by ShadikaIshVeer - 9 years ago

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behirlover

@behirlover

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#963

Beautiful chp felt so calm aftr reading dis 👏 👏
Lykd dere frndshp converstn evrythng vry mch 👏 😳
Falguni in ur ff is much more human I lykd both mother daughter had so mch confidence abt him winning d competition 👏
K so here hppns tht conversatn of interlude lykd tht part u alwys keep ur story intrstng nd involved myself into it
That I frgt d surrounding besides me 😕
Thnx fr pm
Waitng fr next update

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VC288

@VC288

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#964

Superb LM!!
Will give detailed reply later.
BTW fantastic job as always!!
Vaishali

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pinky

@kimnana

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#965

loved their conversation ...ranveer is no doubt all rounder

ishani ur partner i mean dancing partner will be ranveer wow ..waiting for

this competition ...ty for pm

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aastha

@..BABYGIRL..

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#966

hey LM 🤗
This was a blissful chapter!!! 😳😳
although i severely want an interlude but i love reading the epistles too 😊😊
and this was one of the best wid so much cute moments
i litterally laughed at the mention of smuggling of choclates by ishani as i too am an expert in this 😛😛
And your HP obsession was so evident in that LUCKY POTION wala part🤣🤣
so this was the part which ishani dreamed of in the previous interlude😳😳
i would love much more epistles coming from you 😳
update soon sweetie
lots of love n hugs
AASTHA🤗🤗
PS- how is ur health now sweetheart..??

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#967

Originally posted by: Bloomfield
Hey LM!

So I loved this, again! They are right now thirteen?😳😳 And Ranveer has won an award for his dance performance! The happiness in his eyes and Ishani's were written so damn well! His treat too was so dreamy According to me, no one can love samosas any better than him. Not even me!😉😉

And the new word which I had learnt for you this time is : SANS PAREIL(Credits: Thesaurus.com) 😛😛

It means that you are second to none😉😉

And there goes Ranveer's long time(?) wish! To become a writer and she asking him to dedicate her name! How cute! Kids, you see😆😆 And the pen name, here it goes! ⭐️⭐️ Both of them are too sweet that I'm jealous that I did not get a friend like them.😆😆Like I do have better friends, but they weren't childhood😛😛

Lovely update sweetheart! Update the next one asap ;)⭐️⭐️

#Yours3Fan
AV

Thank you so much, sweetheart! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it!

Right now, Ranveer is fourteen and Ishaani will turn thirteen in February. 😃😃 And I'm glad that you liked that part.

Hehe, I didn't know that you loved samosas that much. 😆😆 And well, stop making me blush. ☺️☺️ But I like your use of the thesaurus. 😉😉 Truth be said, I still can't get a hang of the thesaurus. 😕😕

As to the wish part, this was the exact excerpt that Ishaani dreamt/hallucinated about in Interlude 3. 😎😎 Hehe, those two are the world's biggest specimens. But yeah, I get that feeling too many a times. 😭😭

Thank you so much once again, and I'll try to update the next part soon enough! ❤️❤️

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#968

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py
Beautiful chp felt so calm aftr reading dis 👏 👏
Lykd dere frndshp converstn evrythng vry mch 👏 😳
Falguni in ur ff is much more human I lykd both mother daughter had so mch confidence abt him winning d competition 👏
K so here hppns tht conversatn of interlude lykd tht part u alwys keep ur story intrstng nd involved myself into it
That I frgt d surrounding besides me 😕
Thnx fr pm
Waitng fr next update

Thank you so much, dearie! 🤗🤗 I'm so, so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️

Yes, Falguni's character is one that I enjoy the most in terms of wriitng because I get to explore this whole different arena of her character before the first leap in a whole new different light. 😃😃 And IshVeer's friendship is one to always dote upon.

And I could not have been happier that you enjoy those small connections I constantly keep making between the epistles and the interludes. 🥳🥳

Thank you so much once again, love, and I'll update the next chapter soon enough! ❤️❤️

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#969

Originally posted by: VC288
Superb LM!!
Will give detailed reply later.
BTW fantastic job as always!!
Vaishali

Thank you so much, love! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ And no problem, reply whenever you are free. 😳😳

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#970

Originally posted by: kimnana
loved their conversation ...ranveer is no doubt all rounder
ishani ur partner i mean dancing partner will be ranveer wow ..waiting for

this competition ...ty for pm

Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so glad that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ And hehe, don't worry, the competition is quite a far, far way away. 😛😛