Originally posted by: NidsJ
Heyyy LM... 😊 😊
Story progressed so much and I missed a lot...Was on read only mode from so many days but TBH I was dying to write my weird thoughts...
but chalo now I am back u have 2 bear in details... coz I'll begin from where I left... I think after chapter 4...
So his ragging... that was cruel.... the way he was behaving and hid himself in the cupboard I really thought that he is going to do something 😲 then the truth came out... and it was completely unexpected...😕 u added one more case to his sufferings... but chalo at least it removed the restrictions and he got his life back... bt u know among all this one thing made me laugh ke ranveer ke hospital visits bachpan se hi chalu the...🤣 🤣 poor him... then came the butterscotch love... u know this is one of my favorite title and that chapter also was so sweet... and then the changes he observed in her... u wrote that part really well... it was so true that "everything was so sweet in their world only people sought bitterness"...
Then came his dreams... well that was quite strange... but all that i could make out from those is that how vulnerable and helpless he is in front of his love (and exposed also.. 😉 😉)... he could sense her reading his thoughts but I think she drives his thoughts, she can make him do anything... and anything means anything... bechare ko jump bhi kara dia...😆 😆 bt I was thinking ke achcha hai he saw such dream(or his truth) in childhood... coz agar present time me dekhta to thoda jyada weird ho jata...🤪 🤪(sorry bt I can't help... u know my craziness... 🤣)
Then when he had no hopes he got a surprise... a bday gift for him...and that too the one he always wished to have.. 👏 👏 but u know ek baat aur pata lagi ranveer ke baare mein and that is ke vo bachpan se hi kitna shareef bhi tha... 😉 😉
His definition of happiness and and love made her feel ashamed... well that is how he is na, doesn't even desire more... bt chalo at last her thrust is fulfilled with the 2 most important and right person... ⭐️ ⭐️
And then came diwali... Where our girl created real fireworks with her antics...😆 😆 i mean really... She was lost.. Well it do happens with kids so I can't blame her entirely here... aur chalo yahan bhi kuch achcha hi hua, finally she got her father ... but her strange behaviour and even more strange revelation to ranveer.. She do wanted a sibling na to when finally there is a time for one why she gave a whole new meaning to it and screwed up everything (although here also I can't blame her completely coz somehow her fear is true...) and ranveer ne kya kiya... She felt her vulnerability and dependence on him to isme vo kya kare... Uski kyu watt laga di vo bhi double... Pehle emotional hurt then vase n then she herself landed on him damaging him even more... God this girl is really crazy... And as far as ranveer is concerned he is still there for her... Man he is just like that na... btw In between I was thinking ke bechare ko pata hota ke kaun paida hone vala hai to bachpan mein hi bhaag jata apni izzat bachake... 🤣 🤣
And now came the most unexpected part... The intervals... With some shocking facts and even more shocking antics of again our girl...😕 😕 Well I have loads of thoughts for that but right now feeling bit lazy so will post about it later...
For now just want to say that ur writing is again making me addictive specially the interludes... 👏⭐️⭐️ That's y wrote so much... Thank for bearing me this much LM and keep writing... 🤗 🤗
Thank you so much, darling! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you've been liking it so far! ⭐️⭐️ I've missed you so much; and this must have been the most enjoyable review that I've had upon this FF so far.
Oh yes, that ragging part as kinda cruel - goodness knows the courage I had to muster to write it. And as to the cupboard part, I was pretty sure that many of you would take it from a suicidal POV that's why I'd written the clarifying POV in advance. 😛😛 Yes, it did remove a lot of restrictions, agreed. 😆😆
Yes, he loves the hospital, what must I do? 🤣🤣 I need to send him on the anuual trips. 🤪🤪 Hehe, but coming back to your review, Butterscotch Love is among my favourite chapters in the FF so far. 😳😳 And the credit for that quote goes to my mum - she's said this when we were eating ice-cream. 😎😎
Love is perhaps my accident yet my most intriguing creation so far. Well, the credit goes to God, but I liked exploring her in the dreams. ☺️☺️ And finally someone asks me this! 😉😉 Ever since I've mentioned love, I've been wondering why no one asked me why he was naked in his dreams and you did. 🤔🤔 Wherever have you been, girl? 🤣🤣
In response, I'd just say it's the only set of ones you're going to find him like this. 🤪🤪 (I need to certify this review as an 18+already ) And coming to your idea on his dreams, it's quite complicated but you may be right here and there. 😳😳 (although it's still a long shot off)
And yes, our Ranveer has always been very shareef. 😈😈 His sharaafat with get his killed for goods one day, that's for certain. 😵😵 And true that, his definition of happiness and love did make me go as well. As to Ishaani's fireworks, that girl can set a house on fire. 🤓🤓
As to the sibling thing, I kind of empathize with her because the poor girl wanted a sibling without thinking about the consequences. It was only when she gave it a thought did she realize what she was asking for. 🤔🤔 And Ranveer's vaat toh was lagofied since the day he set eyes upon her, really. 😉😉
That's why he fled to Australia. 😉😉 Knew girl was imbalanced and crazy and would kill him eventually. 🤣🤣 Just kidding, she did something even stupider than that. As to the interludes, I love giving the shockers around. 😈😈 And you are in for more. 😲😲
Don't worry, review about the interludes whenever you are free. 😛😛 I'm very, very interested to know what you do think about them. 😃😃 And thank you so much for such a long and amazing review! ☺️
Love you loads and loads,
LM ❤️❤️
Ps. I loved your review on Inkitt. 😳😳
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