#1 ~FF : Untold Stories~ - Page 83

Originally posted by: Sania03337

Unbelievable. You just did it. It was amaaazing chapter dear.you nailed it.The first part was best.

Loved the whole thing. it was fantastic, fabulous and unexplainable. Beyond the limits. 😳

Originally posted by: aasthaarora

ps- i hv some issues wid my lappy n m using sadu sa mobile so gonna give review in pieces.. plz manage :)
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Hey sweetie🤗
U neva ceased to surprise me:)
dedication for me!!! oh LM I love you soo much.. this is da best bday gift of mine this year along wid shakti's reply... <3
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cming to the chapter,yes i was a bit uncomfortable wid dark stuffs earlier but now i m addicted to it n well,the credit goes to my favourite writer "LM"
I thought ishani wouldnt harm herself after ranveer's pleading.. :(
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and the line"i'm always wid you. wherever u r,der i m. its as simple as that" yeah its simple n beautiful...<3 [

and ishani is so stubborn she didn't stop n cuts her arm... i dont know how to describe the feeling i have afta readin this line "she felt her hand fly across her upper arm wid a flash of metal and she felt warm blood against the cold metal" :'(
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and ishani's dream part,well i liked it totally for two reasons
1.their chilhood terrace moment.
2.ofcouse the kiss part :D... first kiss of ishveer in this ff of urs🥳 (ya i know it was in dream bt still it gave me the real feel..<3 )
and Ian Hake-Parish= ishani parekh that was superb dearie!!! [harry potter's effect... hai na..???]

ishani felt so relieved after knowing that ranveer still love her... <3
and what was that,ranveer was married.?? now u have to keep security for urself!!! u had pressed the wrong button :D
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and lastly the suspence,what was the promise n how they r gonna brought it into play..??
waiting to read more..!
ps-all the best for nc..<3 when is da result..??
double ps- luv u so much dearie! didn't expected a dedication :) u r truly lovable my cutiepie...🤗

Originally posted by: amazing3

SPEECHLESS. ...That's what it is. ...

Don't know how you do it LM, simply amazing. ...indescribable. ..."take a bow".

Absolute STUNNER...😛

Originally posted by: Katniss07

Oh shucks !...I missed one "a" of Isha" "ni 😛 😆 , and so the pen name IS Ishaani Parekh , cool 😎

Ahem , anyways fantastic update as usual , LM !! 😃 Ishani's condition ,oh she's in a dying need of someones company , her condition is biting me form inside and that scalpel , i knew that something was wrong for sure but didn't knew it'll be this much bad . She's hurting herself just to become strong enough to live alone , strong enough to stand rigid with dignity in this world WITHOUT anyone by her side 😭😭 After the severe attack of emotions and in a fear to become fragile again and get crushed she's punishing herself 🥺 oh my baby , and the way she was hallucinating...💔 you executed that part very well *applauding between sobs*

Hmmm...so the tragic past events happened in series right ? 6 yrs ago a drift might have occur affecting their friendship but not completely , then post this ( 5 yrs back ) ishani could've went through an emotional turmoil and tried of hurting herself ( or attempted suicide 😕) , and finally after 1 yr ( 4 yrs ago thingy ) the painful separation 😭 , all of this due to some complex MU i guess ...& what about rulers of the world ...promise...8 YRS AGO , wasn't able to connect that 😕

Ishani's dream , Elisabeth & Simon existed only in her dreams , haina , but those words were of Ben from RV's novel , and after that the terrace scene literally happened between her & ranveer and maybe she gave him some ideas in writing the novel 😕 So she was only connecting the dots to find the secret of the pen name , subconsciously ...

But this gave us a hint , that she too loved him but wasn't aware of it , but now she knows , good good 😳 ☺️ how weird it was that the dream started in a church and i was like it was CHURCH wala PARISH 😕😕...but to my utmost surprise my guess was right 😛

Also she came to know that the writer is ranveer , great ! 😃 but is thinking that he was married & his wife died , that R.V dedication was for his wife , man such a duffer she is

And now don't say Mr.Finch's partner is Ranveer , if he is , then let me scream,Wippieee!!!! 😆

Thanks a lot for such an amazing update 😃😃 brilliant piece of writing ⭐️⭐️ do update soon if possible as i can't take so much of mystery and suspense , it'll keep bugging me ...😛

PS : That puppy doggy reference made me go ☺️☺️ and also the dream was ☺️☺️ ( i know obviously not in that painful situation , but her dream showed how much she loves him ❤️ so yeah 😉😆 )

Thank you so much, love! 🤗🤗 I'm so glad that you liked it! And I did hint heavily that you were right all along, you know. 😉😉

And you've explained Ishaani's emotions so astutely that I don't have to explain anything further at all. And yes, you've set the time line quite right although the events are yet not filled in properly, but you'll come to know about them with the passage of time as well.

Um, I'd say that the parish part was her remembering the quote from another novel until it merged with Caffeinated Love and deviated from there. And yeah, that part was the most fun to write, tbh. The thrill of the twister was... intoxicating.

In case of Mr. Finch, read the first interlude again, or rather Ranveer and David's conversation. As to the puppy dog reference, I could not keep my hands off of it. 😆😆 And the dream all in all was a thrill for me as well!

Thank you so much once again and I'll try to update the next part soon enough! ❤️❤️ Hopefully, it'll reveal a bit more of the mystery.

Originally posted by: kimnana

confused ..why they r separated ..on top of that

he is married too n his wife is no longer in this world

ishani keeps on hurting herself ...unfold the mystery

ty for pm

Originally posted by: VC288

Hey hi LM!!!!!

I seriously don't know what to say!!!!

I had decided to keep myself away from the forum for a while but I don't think I would be able to do so!!!!! You have almost made me speechless!

this interlude is so so much great. It literally kept me hooked. I felt all emotions with ishani.what a pain she is going from! But I must say that it created confusion too or maybe that could be your shokers!! Like Ranveer was married and his wife is no more.

I had rightly guessed in start that ishani too loves him.yippie!!!:))

It was really a dark one but I love them. What Ranveer said to ishani when she was harming herself was enough for me! He said what happened was due to her cowardice to acknowledge her feelings. That means she loved him too!!!

Don't know why she chose to marry someone else! :(

Dream part was again awesome one! Best part being kiss of course!! First kiss in this ff even if in dreams. She tried to solve Mystery of the name in her dreams, in her subconscious mind, that again proves that even if she doesn't admit it,she loves Ranveer. I had guessed that name for ishani harshad paresh taking initials from each word.but didn't guessed it to be ishani parekh.

Coming to the last part,so ishani is going to meet mr. Filch (it reminds me of harry potter) and his partner. If it is Ranveer then hurrreyy!!! I would love to see their confrontation!!

Looking forward for the next update, dear!!! To get my mind blown once again!!

Loads of love and hugs!!!

#Your fan

VC288

Originally posted by: Katniss07

Ranveer pakka didn't married na 😕😕 ( if yes , i'll keep hunting you in your nightmares for months 😡😡 😛😛 ) Like maybe his wife was...was Ritika Vaghela ( R.V) 😡🤢 , everybody assuming that she died but she'll be alive ( the lady who wanted to meet Ranveer in interlude 1 ??) 😡😡😡

LM !!!!!! Prove me wrong this very instant 😡😡😡

Originally posted by: mas123

Hi LM

In what words should I praise you? You are beyond excellent!! 👏

You reminded me a famous author O Henry...the way your story is unfolding one by one secrets and suspense, it itself is a direct hint how fabulous you are as a writer

Yes, chapter was very dark ...i m eager to know what actually had happened that both are behaving in this manner.

Based on what I can guess, his wife isn't dead. Is he divorced?