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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

One minute please



What do you write when your arms are shaking and you are pretty sure that your heart is beating like never before , what do you write when you feel someone have stolen your speach ?

This is what you have done with this update of yours , I just dissepeared in the world of your writing It was so beautifully written and I am just amazed , I mean how can someone be awesome like u dearie 😳 😳

Gosh I love you and your writing so much πŸ€— πŸ€— It was just out of the world kind of masterpiece and I was hyptonized by each word of yours , I could imagine a little version of Ishani writing this and I just can't wait to read more from you 😳 😳

But do focus on your exam first and take care of yourself and yeah try to have fun as well and live life 😳 😳 πŸ˜‰

Really a tremendouse job on this chapter babygirl ❀️ πŸ€— πŸ€— Keep up the awesome work and write like u πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Love you loads beautiful , muah ❀️ ❀️

PS : I don't know how I will write a good review when u make me fall in love with your update all over again , I don't know where I will find words to apperiate u anymore πŸ˜† 😳 😳 That 's just how good u are


With love
#yoursNr.1fan
MM
Edited by MM123456 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Dis ws amazing πŸ‘ πŸ‘
U poured so wel thoughts of ishani her small shoulder burdens with so much 😭
I also loved d fact tht u made it realistic tht ishani didn't starts living her father instantly nd its coz of her mother c agreed more 😊
I dnt knw BT I alwys wished dey behavd or CVS showed sumthng which is possible in nrmal circumstances BT alas πŸ˜•
Wel my poor ishani still nt understood d pryng eyes of baa 😑
BT c hv a wish grntd tht c is gng to hv a wonderful frnd wid whm c cn share her evry feelng 😳
Nw m pretty excited to knw hw u carry dis story frwrd nw to defiantly Waitng in anticipatn πŸ˜‰
Once again amazing update yr I loved d fact k ishani do feel d harsh wrd of her mother to b calculative u alwys make ishveer soul touch in ur writing πŸ˜ƒ
Hw mch I missed writing so long reviews and also my fav line 😭
Waitng fr nxt part update soon
Thnx fr pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
awesome chapter LM!!!i just love ur writing!!!!!!!!how beautifully u have written feeling of little ishani!

U r a gifted writer!!u pour emotions in ur words so unknowingly and perfectly that is so amazing!!
I don't have words !!write next update soon and gift us another stunning experience!!
Thanks for pm!!
Your fan
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Fantastic chapter... and what a beautiful way u narrate it... amazing work... you have a way to write that makes you connect with the story n feel it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
One sec...
*Getting up from my chair...standing now and clapping*πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

What an update dearie...SIMPLY LOVED IT...I mean how can you write so well??Gimme a few tips so that even I could follow that...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

Coming back to ur update...What should I say???I think I have already used all the words of praise I know in English...I'll think and then tell you...

You are a gifted writer LM...😳😳

No other words for me now...

PS: sorry for such a stupid review...maaf kar do yaarπŸ˜•

#Yours3fan
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Edited by ishveer4eva - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
nice chapter yaar actually meri tabiyat kharab thi thori pehle to men nhn parh rae thi lekin MM ka comment parh ke socha parh lun. thanks for pm update soon pleaseπŸ˜›πŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
super update is all i can say u penned down beautifully what she has gone through...
shortage of words to describe how well u updated it
ty for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Read both your chapters of the new FF... G8 going... really loving it... Brings out there feelings out wonderfully... But they seem too matured for their age... Ishani at the age of 8 seems too matured...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: MM123456


One minute please



What do you write when your arms are shaking and you are pretty sure that your heart is beating like never before , what do you write when you feel someone have stolen your speach ?

This is what you have done with this update of yours , I just dissepeared in the world of your writing It was so beautifully written and I am just amazed , I mean how can someone be awesome like u dearie 😳 😳

Gosh I love you and your writing so much πŸ€— πŸ€— It was just out of the world kind of masterpiece and I was hyptonized by each word of yours , I could imagine a little version of Ishani writing this and I just can't wait to read more from you 😳 😳

But do focus on your exam first and take care of yourself and yeah try to have fun as well and live life 😳 😳 πŸ˜‰

Really a tremendouse job on this chapter babygirl ❀️ πŸ€— πŸ€— Keep up the awesome work and write like u πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Love you loads beautiful , muah ❀️ ❀️

PS : I don't know how I will write a good review when u make me fall in love with your update all over again , I don't know where I will find words to apperiate u anymore πŸ˜† 😳 😳 That 's just how good u are


With love
#yoursNr.1fan
MM

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Thank you so much, sweetie! πŸ€—πŸ€— I'm so, so thrilled that you loved it this much! ⭐️⭐️
Must you render me speechless every time? Day DreamingDay Dreaming Seriously, reading your reviews these days is no less than a blushing reaction of five minutes. ☺️☺️ And I'm really, really glad that you liked it so much and that I can bring a smile on your face with this. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Yes, exams are nearing and I'm really getting more and more stressed about it. This FF now works as a stress-buster for me. πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Oh yeah, having fun and living life are two things that are always on top of my priority list, no matter what. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Love you loads as well, gorgeous, and your lovely review really made me day. ❀️❀️
Ps. Your reviews are always the perfect ones to make me feel happy about how far I've come in terms of writing, so shush. πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Dis ws amazing πŸ‘ πŸ‘
U poured so wel thoughts of ishani her small shoulder burdens with so much 😭
I also loved d fact tht u made it realistic tht ishani didn't starts living her father instantly nd its coz of her mother c agreed more 😊
I dnt knw BT I alwys wished dey behavd or CVS showed sumthng which is possible in nrmal circumstances BT alas πŸ˜•
Wel my poor ishani still nt understood d pryng eyes of baa 😑
BT c hv a wish grntd tht c is gng to hv a wonderful frnd wid whm c cn share her evry feelng 😳
Nw m pretty excited to knw hw u carry dis story frwrd nw to defiantly Waitng in anticipatn πŸ˜‰
Once again amazing update yr I loved d fact k ishani do feel d harsh wrd of her mother to b calculative u alwys make ishveer soul touch in ur writing πŸ˜ƒ
Hw mch I missed writing so long reviews and also my fav line 😭
Waitng fr nxt part update soon
Thnx fr pm

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Thank you so much, dearie! πŸ€—πŸ€— I'm so, so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️
Yes, we all know about Ranveer's story and can assume how he must have felt as a child, but Ishaani over here is the mystery element. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed She is a girl who has lived life without a father during the crucial years of her life, and getting adjusted into an entirely new life is a challenge in itself. 😊😊 And given that Ishaani has always been simple right from the start, her journey to write is going to be just as interesting. πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Yes, I've always expected Ishaani's relationship with Harshad to be gradual, rather than sudden, even though she recognizes the fact that Harshad does genuinely love her like his own. It's the precise reason why I names this part 'My Thirst For Love', because Ishaani always strikes me as the girl who must have craved for the love of a father, given that her mother couldn't give her all that attention as a child just to make two ends meet. πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
And yes, she is still some way to go before she actually learns about things like these. ConfusedConfused As to having a special friend in her life, oh yes, that is something that I've very, very excited to write about. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ We've heard about how those two saw each other and fell in love, what I want to explore is how they did indeed become friends. ☺️☺️
Thank you so much once again, sweetheart! ❀️❀️ And I will try to update soon. πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

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