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loved it so much....

they don't deserve her definitely

she trusted raghav that's good....

RR ka style and reputation 😆 he gives back very nicely and I love it...

Pallavi deserves all the love care and respect

Beautiful OS Anushka.. love that Raghav stood for Pallavi and gave back to D’s in his own style ❤️❤️👏🏻👏🏻🤗🤗

Originally posted by: MissWiseUnicorn

Anushkha this is so good!! 👏

"With this he walked off leaving behind a broken family getting enveloped by the darkness of their own making having thrown their light who was busy snoring softly like a kitten in his arms while Pallavi dreamt of clear skies and pink butterflies and a sweetly arrogant bearded man smelling of spice and whiskey."

This paragraph is soooo good! I love that you showed Pallavi finally giving up on the deshmukhs and choosing herself and Raghav was so nice in this one

Thanks ❤ I somehow would have loved to see this. Raghav standing up for Pallavi and she giving the Deshmukhs a kick on the backside 😂

Originally posted by: diksha710

Beautiful OS Anushka.. love that Raghav stood for Pallavi and gave back to D’s in his own style ❤️❤️👏🏻👏🏻🤗🤗

Thanks dear! ❤

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

loved it so much....

they don't deserve her definitely

she trusted raghav that's good....

RR ka style and reputation 😆 he gives back very nicely and I love it...

Pallavi deserves all the love care and respect

Right! Thanks for reading!

Originally posted by: Srijeeta06

Thank you Anushka

You are so good with words that I could feel the entire thing happening in front of my eyes

It’s not always easy to exactly convey to the reader the mind of the writer at the time of writing a piece

You did that job brilliantly

Thank you once again❤️

Thank you hon! You took the time off to read and review! Glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Damn Anushka!

I'm not sure I should voice it out or not but I'm glad you started watching MHRW recently.

This piece takes me back to those initial days of the begrudging yet the awesome time of the show. Raghav & Pallavi's individual traits were being explored & am glad to be kinda nostalgic.

You have a certain knack at getting the flow of the scenes perfectly in order. The dialogues spoken by each individual is aptly them👏

This was beautiful & Thanks for writing this piece❤️

Folks, do give this a try!

Oh damn Sonia! I love your reviews man... makes my entire day. Thank you so much for taking time out to read and review. As usual you flatter me! ☺

And a big thanks for tagging.

Originally posted by: Medha0609

This was amazing yr especially how Raghav recognises Pallavi’s true worth. 🔥

You know I would really love it if you could extend it into a fan fic which goes beyond this point like Pallavi starting to live independently and starting up on her own again professionally and Raghav continuing to mentor her and falling in love with her in the process.

Thanks a lot! Im glad u enjoyed it! Thats the point actually... she becomes independent, comes to an equal standing with Raghav, irritates the hell outta him and makes him fall for her... hard. 😂😂😂

This literally felt like those good old days of Raghvi. Those initial days where intentionally or unintentionally they were still each others armor.

Originally posted by: AnushkhaA

Right! Thanks for reading!

Lovely OS and writing style....please keep writing.