RaghVi FS - Your eyes don't lie (Part 2 updated on page 109) - Page 84

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

You are absolutely right. I ship Harikrishna.

We have them here? 😳

I haven't read yet. Will do soon and give a comment too. 🤗

Actually, not much..😅

Waiting

Originally posted by: Trista101

Roses are red.

The next chapter is in for a craze.

You wouldn't need to wait much,

It's just a matter of 14 days.

Violets are blue,

How innocent she tries to be,

Fool me once shame on u,

Fool me twice... shame on me.

Originally posted by: Prriyam

Here it is!

The same scene from another perspective is how it starts. I personally love this tool. It will be so interesting to see the same frame from more than two eyes!

She is getting ready with cake. He is buying her a saree. But still ends up as a sad day! Hmmnn....

you have slid in Harish. In Krishna’s thoughts. Someone will be happy!

Aniket. So you go for A? Why did lateuser talk about S snd A already? Did i miss it in the prev chapter?

Keerthi. Farhad. And as you would’ve asked, ‘where is Farhad going; with Keerthi’.

Coming to the emotional bit, P is still talking to RR, though distant. My inference is the phone call has got to do with her side; not his side of it. Will wait.

This added more to the existing layer, as additional details of the scene was spelt out; and Aniket’s call. No new layers; but you had gone for details.

liked what i read. And will wait to read the mystery unfold. 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

@bold : Was that someone me? 😲

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

It might be felt like that because no leaps were taken in story telling but more of a build up o their relationship. But Writing helped to keep it a swift read.

Definitely. U worked so hard. Its surely something u earned.

Originally posted by: Trista101

Are you really appreciating me?! It seems so good to be true🥳

I hv issues with ur schedule... never was with ur writing. That had always been good.

Originally posted by: Trista101

Yaar bhaw wali koi baat hi nahi hai.. inn 100 pages mein humne jam ke spamming ki hai🤣

Thank you for your valuable feedback!❤️

@bold - fog chal raha hai yahan😆 (it was a joke :p)

Yes, sure. But I think we would need a second thread by the time the next chapter is uploaded 🤣

Hain? Me going to read this Spam whenever I get time😆

Arre yeh thread ke space ko seedhe forum par lagao Apne pages badhenge😆

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

I hv issues with ur schedule... never was with ur writing. That had always been good.

🎵~Aaj main upar, aasman neeche~🎵

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Hain? Me going to read this Spam whenever I get time😆

Arre yeh thread ke space ko seedhe forum par lagao Apne pages badhenge😆

Matlab? Woh kaise karte hai🤔? I am new here so IF ke baare mein zyada nahi pata😅

Originally posted by: Trista101

Will try to improve it.. but till then,

🎵~Aaj main upar, aasman neeche~🎵

@bold Told u to hold down on 'sparkling water' intake. It was bound to happen.

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

I like giraffes. ❤️

Well done for that before 12. 🤗

As I said, the chapter would be updated within time😎