RaghVi FS - Your eyes don't lie (Part 2 updated on page 109) - Page 83

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

Kya mast spamming huyi hai is thread mein😆

Kirti is positive wah. I wonder who called Pallo, and damn Raghav need to buy that saree some day

Yes, Ab show mein toh positive Keerti milne se rahi 😆

Here it is!

The same scene from another perspective is how it starts. I personally love this tool. It will be so interesting to see the same frame from more than two eyes!

She is getting ready with cake. He is buying her a saree. But still ends up as a sad day! Hmmnn....

you have slid in Harish. In Krishna’s thoughts. Someone will be happy!

Aniket. So you go for A? Why did lateuser talk about S snd A already? Did i miss it in the prev chapter?

Keerthi. Farhad. And as you would’ve asked, ‘where is Farhad going; with Keerthi’.

Coming to the emotional bit, P is still talking to RR, though distant. My inference is the phone call has got to do with her side; not his side of it. Will wait.

This added more to the existing layer, as additional details of the scene was spelt out; and Aniket’s call. No new layers; but you had gone for details.

liked what i read. And will wait to read the mystery unfold. 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

Originally posted by: Prriyam

Here it is!

The same scene from another perspective is how it starts. I personally love this tool. It will be so interesting to see the same frame from more than two eyes!

She is getting ready with cake. He is buying her a saree. But still ends up as a sad day! Hmmnn....

you have slid in Harish. In Krishna’s thoughts. Someone will be happy!

Aniket. So you go for A? Why did lateuser talk about S snd A already? Did i miss it in the prev chapter?

Keerthi. Farhad. And as you would’ve asked, ‘where is Farhad going; with Keerthi’.

Coming to the emotional bit, P is still talking to RR, though distant. My inference is the phone call has got to do with her side; not his side of it. Will wait.

This added more to the existing layer, as additional details of the scene was spelt out; and Aniket’s call. No new layers; but you had gone for details.

liked what i read. And will wait to read the mystery unfold. 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

I agree. I had been thinking of using this perspective somewhere in the later chapters but then changed my mind. :P

Yes, someone ships HariKrishna so I didn't see why not😛. Am I right Keechu?

And regarding S and A, that's a mini secret hehe...

Farhad is fed up of his bachelor life and finally decided that it's time to woo someone and make a girlfriend. So Keerti is helping him by becoming one🤣

@bold - you are 'smort' !

The new layer would be added soon (okay, maybe after 14 days😅).

One question - who do you think is the patient?

Pehle toh aisa karta kaun hai?

Itna bhaw, bataiye...100 pages ke baad Ch-2 upload kiya gaya hai😆

I liked both the chapters though not sure exactly where the story's heading so can't say much. The room mess with just a phone call with that mix of emotions - enough to change her way of talking with Raghav - Chal kya raha hai yahan?

Hopefully, we'll get a chapter sooner this time

Thanks for the tag...

It's interesting, bt I m equally scared with the story...

Originally posted by: Trista101

Thanks a ton for taking out your precious time to give a detailed feedback! I am overwhelmed. ^‿^ ❤️

I agree. I had been thinking of using this perspective somewhere in the later chapters but then changed my mind. :P

Yes, someone ships HariKrishna so I didn't see why not😛. Am I right Keechu?

And regarding S and A, that's a mini secret hehe...

Farhad is fed up of his bachelor life and finally decided that it's time to woo someone and make a girlfriend. So Keerti is helping him by becoming one🤣

@bold - you are 'smort' !

The new layer would be added soon (okay, maybe after 14 days😅).

One question - who do you think is the patient?

You are absolutely right. I ship Harikrishna.

We have them here? 😳

I haven't read yet. Will do soon and give a comment too. 🤗

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Pehle toh aisa karta kaun hai?

Itna bhaw, bataiye...100 pages ke baad Ch-2 upload kiya gaya hai😆

I liked both the chapters though not sure exactly where the story's heading so can't say much. The room mess with just a phone call with that mix of emotions - enough to change her way of talking with Raghav - Chal kya raha hai yahan?

Hopefully, we'll get a chapter sooner this time

Thank you for your valuable feedback!❤️

@bold - fog chal raha hai yahan😆 (it was a joke :p)

Yes, sure. But I think we would need a second thread by the time the next chapter is uploaded 🤣

Originally posted by: bips_freedom

Thanks for the tag...

It's interesting, bt I m equally scared with the story...

I wonder why?🤔

Originally posted by: Trista101

Roses are red,

Giraffes don't sit,

Here's it guys,

Before 12:00 AM, I did it!😎

I like giraffes. ❤️

Well done for that before 12. 🤗

Originally posted by: Trista101

Thnak you for your wonderful feedback!❤️

I am kinda not impressed with this chapter too. However, it was necessary to keep the story in a flow.

Yes, the style has been changed a bit. But I didn't expect you to praise my writing! It has made my day you know!🥳

Lmao a burnnn again!!🤣

It might be felt like that because no leaps were taken in story telling but more of a build up to their relationship. But Writing helped to keep it a swift read.

Definitely. U worked so hard. Its surely something u earned.