RaghVi FS - Your eyes don't lie (Part 2 updated on page 109)

Here's the prologue of my new work! Do vote and comment. Constrictive criticism is welcomed.❤️

Warning : Proof reading has not been done!

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RAGHVI FS : YOUR EYES DON'T LIE

Prologue:

"I need a divorce." Pallavi closed the doors of his study room and spoke in no - nonsense tone.

"Wh-what?" Raghav was shocked would be an understatement.

"Didn't you hear it right? I said I need a divorce."

"Come on Saree ka Dukaan, you are joking, aren't you?" He asked, still hoping it to be some sick joke.

"No, I'm serious." She deadpanned.

"But why?" He whispered, still not believing her words.

"Because the six months of our contract is over, and I can't tolerate you anymore."

"But, everything was going good -"

"I will send the papers to Farhad by tomorrow morning. Just sign on them and set me free."

"Pallavi, give me another chance. I promise mai fir Marathi sasurji ko manane ka koshish karega."

"Ab tum jise manao, mujhe koi fark nahi padta. I don't want to stay in this hell now, even for a second. Now move aside." She pushed him harshly, moving out of the room.

"I - I'm sorry. Please forgive me. You know what, you are a very stupid person... How could you... You thought that I will just leave you like that? Listen to me, I love you.... P-please don't leave me.." The vulnerability and pain was evident in the voice.

"I'm sorry, we couldn't save the patient."

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Hey everyone! I'm back with an another story. My days are going very hectic nowadays so the updates may be late😅.

Again, proof reading has not been done so please ignore my typo errors.❤️

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Part 01 :

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/157905124

Part 02 :

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/158124860

As much as I wanted to write on one of the possible theories of Lateuser's work, I didn't. However, a few scenes can be based on my theory lol.

I would like the members of IF IO to give my work a try, and hence the tags.😛

U shouldn't hv mentioned it was based on ur theory... Now need to go nd read bck... anyhow that last line makes up for everything. I hope u stay true to ur tag and avoid happy ending.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

U shouldn't hv mentioned it was based on ur theory... Now need to go nd read bck... anyhow that last line makes up for everything. I hope u stay true to ur tag and avoid happy ending.

Originally posted by: Trista101

Let's see lol😆

We r not seeing... its a demand not request....

That was a bomb blasting start Trista.🥳

I got shocked with "I need a divorce " because that sentence has been printed inside my head as something my would be husband will be telling me after our one year anniversary of us, too fed up with me.🤣

IF IO queen will be supporting. Keep them coming. All the best. 🤗

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

We r not seeing... its a demand not request....

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

That was a bomb blasting start Trista.🥳

I got shocked with "I need a divorce " because that sentence has been printed inside my head as something my would be husband will be telling me after our one year anniversary of us, too fed up with me.🤣

IF IO queen will be supporting. Keep them coming. All the best. 🤗

Thanks a lot for your support!❤️

Originally posted by: Trista101

Okay.... I don't want to die early💀

https://tenor.com/view/aplauso-aprobacion-good-job-clap-very-good-gif-15604920

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

That was a bomb blasting start Trista.🥳

I got shocked with "I need a divorce " because that sentence has been printed inside my head as something my would be husband will be telling me after our one year anniversary of us, too fed up with me.🤣

IF IO queen will be supporting. Keep them coming. All the best. 🤗

Don't post such things... I was having multiple comments on that..