SS: Memento Mori: Last chapter, updated 22.04.2022, Page 14 - Page 7

Thank you so much 🤗

I was really in a fix while writing this chapter. Like you said, it could have been tacky and that was my greatest fear. The story revolves around the 7 stages of love and one wrong chapter could have taken away the intensity of what I’ve tried to weave so far. In addition, I don’t feel comfortable writing explicit scenes, that’s a talent very few people have. Thanks again, I’m looking forward to writing the next one ❤️

Originally posted by: hapc

Beautiful as always. Your way of depicting their first night by focusing on the emotions instead of the deeds per se made the chapter brilliant where it easily could have been tacky. I was waiting for this part for a long time and now I'm going to have to wait for the end. The way you write is so poetic that I'm always in awe of you. You did complete justice to their love.

Thank you so much for loving it this much 🤗makes me want to keep writing! ❤️

Originally posted by: Joyness

Speechless....your poetry is A class and so interwoven in your story...such lucid writing that make us feel the emotions....just loved it

Thank you so much! 🤗

This story has been ongoing for about 3 months now and I always had the intention of portraying the 7 stages of love for this couple. I’m so happy you felt all the emotions portrayed in this story ❤️

Originally posted by: Merly

I do not know what to say rather than well composed. 👏How well you have mentioned the steps of love in a marvelous manner. No words can describe it .

Each moments of raghavi are so touched by the heart . Thanks for writing so beautifully and keep writing more …..⭐️

Dear Vera,

Thank you so much for writing this wonderful feedback! I’m left in awe ❤️ You pointed out one scene where he sits with his head in her lap. That one happens to be my fav too because I’ve always pictured him to be someone who has fully surrendered to love and she is now his entire world. I’m happy the words let you feel the emotions I’ve been trying really hard to project. This was a really difficult chapter to write, not just because it was about their first night but because it was more about the maddening love they’re experiencing and I was often at a loss of the right words, so thank you so much for reading it twice!!! ❤️

The poems - the first part is mine, second part is by Rumi up until the part where it says “Now!”. I think Rumis writing puts to words a love that we will probably not experience in this life and those who do....they’re the lucky ones!

Originally posted by: missFiesty_69

Kiara,

I read the last three updates once again and this one 2 times. Mann nahi barta. Such beautiful potrayal and your words, I'm in love with your words. They have encompassed me in them just the love encompasses all. The instances, especially where Raghav sits with his head on her lap, my words are very diluted in comparison. It's that good. I'm speechless and in awe of your writing. Your words have the magic to make me transcend time and felt as if I was in there. I donot want to ruin this amazing and a fantastic story with my words. Just know I love it and I am eagerly waiting for the final part. You have always been above expectations. This one was somewhere in the stratosphere. These poems here has all my heart ❤️

From attraction to infatuation,

Springs love and trust,

Not shy of any worship, a reverence,

Leading to this maddening love,

Your dark sweetness,

Sanity is for the practical,

Real value comes with madness,

beneath the hurt and grief.

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Some nights stay up till dawn,

as the moon sometimes does for the sun,

turn, as the earth and the moon turn,

circling what they love,

around and around until morning,

when a breath of air says, now!

A free fall,

I surrender to your spirit,

Passion breaks loose,

Shallow breaths,

Let the souls mingle,

Until they're one.

And then, silence.

Lots of love 💕💕,

Vera ♥️

I loved each & every line. Every scene was well-composed & flowed meticulously👏. Quoting just some lines that I absolutely love

But my heart is set at your feet,

I know, you shall never walk over it.

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Look at me, he speaks,

But who looks from inside him,

If not me?

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Brilliant Lines in the poems👏

placing his head in her lap, his favorite place ever since he found her. If he loved this, she loved it as well.

Love is all encompassing and there's no room for selecting only the good parts.

They shared several moments of silence while they were together, yet it was never deafening. Their silence was a medium of exchanging deeply rooted feelings where words had no place.

I love how you can write an 18+ scene but with such words that it feels almost holy - Body rising through the spirit, spirit up from body and an endless pit of pleasure. his ability to love in abandon which made her feel beautiful, and now a new found boldness urged her to hold and love him in equal fervor.

"Tonight. We shall never be apart now henceforth", she said as she held his hands and pulled him up in her embrace - I think I can already guess where you're going in the next chapter. I don't think I'll be able to read a ballad for the Raghav Pallavi you have created & the ones I have come to know, it'll become that as per your message. For me this story ends here with them happy about their future together❤️, as I won't be able to read their beautiful journey which went through too many tribulations ending up at the Last Stage.

Thanks for both stunning FFs though Kiara...You know I love your work immensely. Hope to read another piece from you soon🤗

Hey dear 🤗

I've loved reading this!!!! I'm so happy that one of my favorite lines (bold,red) is also one of your favorites too!

Thank you so much ❤️

About the 18+ scenes- This is exactly what took me so long to update. I wrote, deleted, wrote again and redrafted.....it was tough but I'm glad in the end it turned out to convey the emotions exactly as they were envisioned.

Oh my...I will miss you in the last chapter 😭 Let's see how it ends :) I am also looking forward to it too because most of the times I know the main plot when I plan a story, but I rarely know what my fingers will eventually type. Sometimes, I do end up improvising things. But I respect your choice entirely!! ❤️

Thank you for being part of this story🤗, I feel sad that it's reaching the conclusion. These two stories will always be one of my fav's not because of the writing but because of the number of emotions involved, all of which I felt each time I penned down the words.....

Originally posted by: SONIA441

I loved each & every line. Every scene was well-composed & flowed meticulously👏. Quoting just some lines that I absolutely love

But my heart is set at your feet,

I know, you shall never walk over it.

---------

Look at me, he speaks,

But who looks from inside him,

If not me?

-------

Brilliant Lines in the poems👏

placing his head in her lap, his favorite place ever since he found her. If he loved this, she loved it as well.

Love is all encompassing and there's no room for selecting only the good parts.

They shared several moments of silence while they were together, yet it was never deafening. Their silence was a medium of exchanging deeply rooted feelings where words had no place.

I love how you can write an 18+ scene but with such words that it feels almost holy - Body rising through the spirit, spirit up from body and an endless pit of pleasure. his ability to love in abandon which made her feel beautiful, and now a new found boldness urged her to hold and love him in equal fervor.

"Tonight. We shall never be apart now henceforth", she said as she held his hands and pulled him up in her embrace - I think I can already guess where you're going in the next chapter. I don't think I'll be able to read a ballad for the Raghav Pallavi you have created & the ones I have come to know, it'll become that as per your message. For me this story ends here with them happy about their future together❤️, as I won't be able to read their beautiful journey which went through too many tribulations ending up at the Last Stage.

Thanks for both stunning FFs though Kiara...You know I love your work immensely. Hope to read another piece from you soon🤗

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This is so beautiful. Loved it. Fantastic