Raghvi SS: I can, I shall and I will- It's my chance -completed - Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mihika

Baki likhiye pehle 😎

Baad me bakbak train on hoga😎

part 4 ab kl denge jara bada n climax hai so trying something diff. let’s see kya niklta hai.. but dhanyavad ap sanke support k chlte hum 3 part likh paye.. ab 4 ke sath samapti krenge pkka jyada nhi pakayenge.. 👍🏼
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Amazing

Continue soon please

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ImHemangi

part 4 ab kl denge jara bada n climax hai so trying something diff. let’s see kya niklta hai.. but dhanyavad ap sanke support k chlte hum 3 part likh paye.. ab 4 ke sath samapti krenge pkka jyada nhi pakayenge.. 👍🏼

Pakana......oh hello I loved it ....ab jaldi kal update chahiye🤗
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Finally the part 4 is here, spare me for little length, but believe you will have best ending...chlo shuru krte hai


Part 4: its my chance

As raghav had informed amma about his late night work he asked them to take rest i will be back late. Though pallavi is sad by the news of not able to see him before bed because anyhow she is sleeping with amma today to hide her mehndi. All three ladies at amma's bed while amma at centre and both girls besides her sides, all of them are immensely happy as from tomorrow onward their family will have all the happiness they struggled long for.

Amma broke the silence with her words, beta tum dono mera bachha hai aur mai tum dono ko ek aisa baat batane ja raha hai jo mera amma mujhe bataya tha jab mera shadi fix hua tha. Both girl hears curiously. Beta shadi ek aisa rishta hai,jisme tera-mera kuch nhi hota jo bhi hota hai o humara hota hai, dukh sukh nok-zhok,ruthna-manana, gussa-pyar sbkuch kisi ek ka nhi rehta aur jab aisa do log milta hai na tb usise family bnta hai, o dono apne ap me family hota hai, kbhi tumko apna sathi ke liye hr rishta nibhana pd skta hai maa, dost, bhae, behen, tabhi tum puri trh sathi kehlata hai. Pati-patni ke rishtey me hmesha patni ko 4 kadam extra in partnership nibhana pdta hai beta kyu ki veikateshwara ne duniya banane ka ho ya jindagi sawarne ka ho hr pehla haq sirf aurat ko diya esliye uska contribution in her every aspect of life hmesha jada hota. Humne rishta kitne sal jiya esase jyada jarusi hai ki o kaise jiya aur kitna khushise jiya. Esliye mai chahta tum dono aage tumhara aanewala life me sbse best partner bno aur apna hr chhota chhota khushi ko pehle apne liye jina sko, tum khud khush rhega tbhi tumhare aspas khushi bat payega , duniya ko dena ka mtlb khudko compromise krna nhi hota bulki khudko hr situation me fit krna hai bina apni khushiyon ko gawaye. Beta hr rishtey ka asli test na bura smay leta hai acha nhi, jb lage ki pura duniya tumhare khilaf hai tb apne sathi ka hath etna mujbuti se pkdna ki koi tufaan tum dono ko tod na paye bs fir bacha kya hr vakt toh gujrna hi hai chahe achha ho ya bura bs rehta hai memories aur humko humesha acha aur happy memories ko store krna hai aur baki kachra ko filter kr dena hai, and amma starts laughing, fir dekhna life kitna sundr lgn lagega. Aur life jb bhi koi chance de kuch thik krne ka toh use kbhi nhi chhodna , o tumhe humesha sahi raste pe le jayega, Kuch smjha, ? amma asked after her little ramayan series, both girls replies immediately yes amma, and hugged amma tightly and ho gyi enki good night.☺️

Raghav come home late and found his room silent without SKD and smirk little like he was expecting this and goes to bed post freshen up, but looking at other side of bed he said saree ka dukan ab tumhara badbad ka adat ho gya hai aaj lady thangbaali ke bina kaisa nind aayega and tries to sleep with most famous RR smirk.😉

Next morning raghav went early for office as of he don't know anything and even farhad don't know about his where about and here ladies thinking humara plan successful raha. Pallavi is on fast with so many though in her mind for her husband as she found her mehndi so much dark maroon with his name as deep marron shade and keerti saying raghav tumse beentehaan pyaar krega pallvi doubt mt krna mera anna pe❤️😛. pallvi is all blushing with all her memories since she first met her ghamandi rao till yesterday they were having coffee pe charcha on kathak and bharatnatyam. She was geeting ready with her all shringar given by her amma remembering her husband yes her husband finally hers.

And we finally have our most gorgeous Mrs.pallavi raghav rao in all royal pink kanjivaram, looking like goddess, all set to go for her first puja, amma and keerti accompany her at bargad ka ped at at their garden where amma had invited pandit ji and other few of her old friends to join her bahu's first vat savitri. Pallavi is so overwelmed with all this gesture and participated with all ladies and the finally completed her all 7 round around the tree for her ghamndi rao's safety and bright life. She is on cloud 9 today.☺️

Pals monologue:

Mujhe yad bhi nhi hai ajse pehle mai kbhi etni khush hue bhi thi kya?..ofcourse nhi, tum jo nhi the. koi baat nhi but ab tum ho na mere sath toh mai janti hu meri khushiyon ko koi mujhse nhi chhin payega, tum kisi ko aisa krne hi nhi doge. Majal hai kisi ki jo raghav rao ki biwi ko dukh pohchaye..na na bilkul nhi.😆 Pehle jb mendi lgi thi aur hath phike pade the mere us din laga tha ye rang mere hathon ki lakeeron me nhi hai but aaj tumhare nam se es rang ne bhi apni gehrayi bichha di mere lakeeron me aur mai janti hu ab ye jindagi bhar mere sath rahega tumhara sath. Tum hmesha chahate the na mujhe patni hone ke sare haq dena, aaj mai tumhe pati hone ka har o haq dungi raghav jiske tum haqdar ho ,aaj ke bad humari khushiyon ko koi najar nahi laga payenga, mai lagane nhi dungi, o amma ka laal mirch waala tadka hai na usase najar utarenge lg bhi gyi toh. 😉She is happily crying seeing everything so colourful around her and thanks bappa for her happiness. Ab aa bhi jao ghamandi rao kl se nhi dekha hai tumhe aur ab ek pal wait nhi ho rha hai, kaise se hona tum meri jindagi me tufaan bnke aaye the but khushiyon ke saudagar kb ban gye pata hi nhi chala. Bs ab jao tumse bhot kuch kehna hai she was all waiting for him at fully decked up RR mansion.

While here at some place Mr. RR has opened his SM ac with smirk again post her wife's photo from their wedding day with sindoordaan capture and post it with caption " He is exclusively taken, thank you soulmate!" changed his status as married and looking at a gift bag in front of him with broad loverboy smile on his face.☺️ At evening it's started raining hard with all heavy thundering and winds suddenly and he took the gift bag, a well designed bouquet for his wife and left for his home in his car. While here at mansion pallavi is eagerly waiting for him but suddenly gets disturbed with dangerous raining and thundering and soon bad thoughts started occupying her mind as farhad wad not aware about his anna, his call is not reachable, his car's GPS is also not showing his exact location due to worst weather, everyone start panicking now. The city is under power cut, threat is getting deepen with each passing min. But now pallavi is ready to fight this battle for her husband, her happiness. She holds amma's hand tightly, looks at her with strong determined face and said amma mai apni khushiya lane ja rhi hu, jindahi ne second chance mujhe diya hai aur es bar mai kisi ko apni khushiya le jane nhi dungi, mai aati hu apni aur hum sbki khushiya sath lekar aaungi, mera entjar kriyega, with her last line, farhad gadi nikalo, apke anna ko lena jana hai. Amma give her strong go ahead nod with best hug and says i will wait for my happiness to back soon, jao beta, jaldi aana.❤️

Pallavi and farhad in car while condition is worsening with every passing second and every bad though started to trouble her but she hold herself strong and said, ghamandi rao mujhse aise jindagi bhar ka vada kr ke tum kahi nahi ja skte mai aa rhi hu mera wait krna. She was all remembering her first widowhood past, mandar's death all events flowing through her eyes, her wedding with RR, their banters, extreme zagde, outburst with bgm

do pal ruka khwabon ka karwa aur fir chal diye tum kaha hum kaha...

their car stopped with sudden break and farhad informed her about anna's car at front, they come out immediately and her world stopped at that moment.The famous white RR car with all smoky damaged condition lies in-front of big tree. The world freezed for her no emotion, no breath nothing she just stand fixed there at scene and only one face comes to her view that is HER HUSBAND HER GHAMANDI RAO asking sorry to her...plz pallavi mujhe maaf krdo!


Farhad's extremely scary call annaaaaaaa... brought her in sense, while the all wet RR comes in front with wet gift bag and that designer bouquet in his hand and without second pallavi runs towards him in PT usha's speed and just strikes on him extremely hard that he lost the control of both gift bag and bouquet and she hugged him hard and it gets harder and harder in next few seconds. He is totally shocked and didn't get anything like what happens and just hugged her back, hold her softly in his embrace and utter saree ka dukan, mai thik hai!

She regain her lost sense and utters thik toh tumhe rehna hi tha na ghamandi rao, tumhe 7 jananmo ke liye aaj hi final kraya hai bappa se, kuch ho kaise skta hai tumhe? ab tumhari zindagi na sirf tumhari nhi hai " humari hai"! tumhari saanse sirf tumhari nhi hai "humari hai" unpe sirf tumhara haq nhi hai" mera bhi haq hai " aur jo mera hai use mujhse chhinane ka haq maine kisi ko nhi diya hai na dungi! smjhe tum ghamandi rao. Tumpr sirf aur sirf mera haq hai kyu ki tum mere pati ho and ha agle 7 janam tak ki booking kar li hai maine o bhi delux me☺️, esliye Hyderabad ki kitni bhi hot ladki aaye na ab koi fayda nhi hai the deal is sealed Mr. husband rao! 😛

You are only my husband and will be mine forever! So aaj se dahi chawal till you die and she hugged him harder and harder❤️ . The rains is getting heavier and they stand in eo's hold and RR had extreme hard tears flowing through his eyes while looking up at universe and thanking his stars for finally making him HER HUSBAND for which he was craved since his MU got cleared. Finally the day arrived for Mr. husband and he just softly broke the hug in heavy rain took gift bag from floor fully drenched and took away the wet velvet long box just opened it while sitting on his one knee bow down in-front of his lady and sky stated its dance in tones of thundering. Pallavi is all amused with all these happening as he has not utter a word after her confession and he opened the box with sparkling anklet pair inside of all exclusive platinum shines in thundering light, with unique design of small flower entangled in pair with tinny ghumgaroo at end and of-course the hook stamp with RR logo. He took in hand, looks up and asked Mrs Rao kya tum meri life ka favourite music bnega to ferever be my music? This is my first design I made when I started my business very long back and that day I promised my amma I'll gift this to my soulmate. I designed this specially for my amma's bahu years ago, will you accept it? with all heavy tears continuously flowing through his eyes and pallavi immediately nods him yes! the bgm plays

Jhuk gaya aasmaan

Mil gaye do jahaan

Har taraf hai milan ka sama

Doliya hain saji

Khushbuein har kaheen

Padhne aaya Khuda khud yahaan

❤️❤️

With her nod he put both the anklets in her foot pair and stands in-front of her in SRK pose for the most passionate rain hug of Mr.and Mrs Rao dil se 🤗😛with bgm


Ehsas ki jo zubaan ban gaye

Ehsas ki jo zubaan ban gaye

Dil mein mere mehman ban gaye

Aap ki tareef mein kya kahein

Aap humari jaan ban gaye

Aap humari jaan ban gaye

Aap hi rabb aap imaan ban gaye

Aap humari jaan ban gaye

❤️❤️❤️❤️


All this while farhad witnessing his most wanted prayer gets fulfilled and overwhelmingly thanking his allah for making his anna and bhabhi happily ever after !! thu thu thu ...


PS: Sorry thoda jyada lamba ho gya but hopefully you'll like it ...post your thought for my progress ahead🤗

Mihu and kavi girls aapki encouragement ke liye special thanks to both of you lovely girls❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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What a beautiful end 😭😭😭sachme emotional ho gy hm😭😭😭and that initial part of amma with rao ladies ❤️very beautifully presented ❤️lesson of life indeed❤️thnks 🙏🏻lots of love frm my side😍

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kavita99

What a beautiful end 😭😭😭sachme emotional ho gy hm😭😭😭and that initial part of amma with rao ladies ❤️very beautifully presented ❤️lesson of life indeed❤️thnks 🙏🏻lots of love frm my side😍

Thank you so much, love back to you❤️🤗. Yes I personally think that ladies part is very special for every girl when she is about to enter in her new life, that guide is required so try to put it little here.❤️
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Posted: 4 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: rinku95

Amazing

Continue soon please

hey dear it's updated on pg 3, hv a look, looking for your feedback Thanks alot❤️
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ImHemangi

Thank you so much, love back to you❤️🤗. Yes I personally think that ladies part is very special for every girl when she is about to enter in her new life, that guide is required so try to put it little here.❤️

yaa every girl should have a person like amma by her side 😭😍
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mihika

Pakana......oh hello I loved it ....ab jaldi kal update chahiye🤗

Chaliye sweetheart apke liye past 4 add kr diye, thoda lengthy, waiting for your review
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kavita99

yaa every girl should have a person like amma by her side 😭😍

indeed 👍🏼❤️

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