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Posted: 4 years ago
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Where were you dear all these days ?👍🏼👍🏼. I don't have any words to describe your writing. This is such a beautiful and deep story ❤️❤️.

Sending you virtual hugs for this wonderful piece 🤗🤗.


P.S. Please write more Raghvi stories or else I am gonna spam your pm till you write one 😉


And why can't I tag you @Evarasha 💔💔

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Lovely story of Raghav and Pallavi, loved the gradually developed emotions in them. Please do write more stories of them.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amnnaa

Where were you dear all these days ?👍🏼👍🏼. I don't have any words to describe your writing. This is such a beautiful and deep story ❤️❤️.

Sending you virtual hugs for this wonderful piece 🤗🤗.


P.S. Please write more Raghvi stories or else I am gonna spam your pm till you write one 😉


And why can't I tag you @Evarasha 💔💔

@ bold: this million dollar question i too had as i posted her part but not able to tagged her bcz IF ki nautanki....is this bcz newbie?? no clear idea
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Everasha.....first of all I love your name 😛

Welcome to the forum and please make more topics😛

Coming to the story.....

It was one emotional ride for me...

The feelings and raw emotions in these two are something I want to witness Onscreen being explored in every way possible.


Loved it❤️


May I request you to add just one more chapter to show Raghav confiding in Pallavi about the incident and she going to D'House as Raghav Rao's to give her first and last warning to BWA Chipku and Rambo stating clearly that he is not to be made to cry at all. If ever he is in pain because of them....then they would surely meet Mrs. Pallavi Raghav Rao's wrath.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 5

It was morning and sun start to enter RR mansion. Raghav was sleeping peacefully on the bed and was disturbed by ray of the sun that fall on his face. He wake up and found that he was sleeping on a pillow not Pallavi's lap


Raghav: Aishh, morning morning you missed your chance Raghav Rao to impress your wife.


Raghav saw a paper on the sleeping table beside and gets scared. A million of thoughts running in his mind.


Raghav: Is this Pallavi's last letter before she leaving me? How she got to know all this? Please dont be. I cant imagine a life with Saree ka dukaan. Please god


Raghav open the paper and a relieve was felt in his body. It written;


'Good morning Ghamandi Rao. I will gone to shopping with Amma and be back soon. Get freshen up and I put some of wardrobe on the table there. Reddy have done breakfast and please have it before you go on your RR adventure. Not to forget pray and go. Your day will start well. See you for lunch today!!!

With lotsa of love,

Mrs Raghav Rao


A smile creep in Raghav mouth reading the letter from his wife and a sense of afraid and insecurity still engulfing him. He thought he tell Pallavi itself regarding yesterday incident and avoid misunderstanding before anyone else twisted the story especially the Desmukh's.


Farhad: Good morning Anna. How are you now? Anna we have an important in morning today and you feel up for it?


Raghav: Good morning Farhad. Yeah I am fine and yes lets attend the meeting today itself


Farhad: okay Anna. You get ready and I will wait down there


Raghav: Farhad


Farhad: Ji Anna


Raghav: Thanks for yesterday. And did you tell Pallavi anything about it?


Farhad: Anna I am always there for you and regarding thatt.....Anna amma calling me I need to go


Raghav: Farhad answer me before you run idiot and I know Amma is not at home! Ehats happening?


Raghav gets ready and went to office with Farhad. It was almost 1 pm now and Pallavi is again waiting for Raghav to have lunch together. Amma eat early because she wants to visit her friend at evening and Keerti took her lunchmade at home at office since she is busy today. Farhad drops Qnna at the entrance and excuses because he have a work to do and he know he will be dead if his Anna got to know about yesterday incident. Raghav enter the hall and saw it was empty. There, at the end of corner of the hall, Raghav saw Pallavi was doing some saree sketching and thinking very hard.


Raghav: Saree design achaa hai


Pallavi: Raghav you back? Lets have lunch now I am so hungry


Raghav: Arey Saree ka dukan I told you to take lumch and no newd to waitttt.....


Pallavi puts her hand on his mouth to silent.


Pallavi: Save your speech for another time. Now lets go and eat.


Raghav and Pallavi had their lunch. In between they talked about their saree and jewels design and how their working life going and all. Post lunch, Raghav found that it is the right time for him to her about yesterday incidence.


Raghav: Pallavi, mere baat sunno. I want to tell you something regarding yesterday and I want to hear it first from myside.


Pallavi who was looking at phone and messaging Krishna regarding DSE stops and knows what gonna happen next. She put down her phone and make Raghav sit opposite of her while holding hands. Raghav was surprise by this gesture and looked at Pallavi.


Pallavi: Ab bola Ghamandi Rao


Then Raghav started to narrate the whole incident starts from property tax office till he leave the Desmukh's Niwas. He scrapped out his panic attack part and lie it with him going weak and faintwd due to skipping meals. He dont want Pallavi to know his pain journey throughout that process. Pallavi on the other hand who know the truth, just listening to her Ghamandi Rao and think how precious is he and how people always misunderstood him that including herself. Raghav was wxpecting like some kind of reaction from Pallavi like a slap or kick or atleast a angry bird face but all he got was a calm soothing face and a very peaceful eye expression.


Raghav: Pallavi you are listening nah to what I was saying?


Pallavi: I was Raghav and I believe and trust you that you will never do anything that gonna hurt me or my family. So never worry about it again okay?


Saying that Pallavi sealed a kiss to their holding hand and look at each others eyes. Pallavi felt awkward at the moment but Raghav was on cloud nine because today he earmed one of thing that he lost in Pallavi on the day of marriage, TRUST.


Raghav:Pallavi.....wohhh main...


Pallavi: Arey...arey...areyyyy I remember a work at Krishna place there. I need to go as soon as possible and correct some things over there.


Pallavi try to cover it with a lot of excuses and Raghav was watching her in amusement.


Raghav: Only you can remember about work all the time right? Chalo, let me drop you at Krishna's place.

Pallavi: Its okay Raghav you go first I have another thing to STRAIGHTEN UP TODAY


Pallavi said that in very determined voice and went to room to took her stuffs. Raghav was mesmerized with her spirit and said;


Raghav: Thats the spirit. I LIKE HER.


Saying that he went back to office for work but Pallavi had a different AGENDA




Ps: there will be a Part 6 guys . Sorry for yesterday IF post thingy since I am newbie I send my message to Hemangi di to post it. Hope you guys like it and coming soon today woth last part ever Part 6.

Mihika di this was for you. Btw a fan of yor analysis and OS too

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Posted: 4 years ago
#36

I am first

Everasha....thank you so so so much for this.

I am waiting for the next already😆

Aww now I am fan of yours too🤗

Thank You so much dear. Means a lot❤️

Edited by Mihika - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#37

Loved reading all 5 parts

Amazing story

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Posted: 4 years ago
#38

I just loved it....Pallavi from show should definitely take inspiration from this Pallavi...because Pallavi is the show bharak jati hai whenever anyone says a word against D-family...

You spun the story so beautifully around RaghVi and great use of the bts

I can't wait to read the next part

and when this SS gets over--do keep writing more

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Posted: 4 years ago
#39

Looking forward to this one! Your writing is amazing👏

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Posted: 4 years ago
#40

hi sweetheart kya likha hai yr just wow...super cute and beautiful amazing plot and explained in simple no dramatic way..baby you ll be on long run...update update we are here for next part..just loved it alot❤️🤗


And yes thanks alot for trusting me i did your work and janata ne apko khub sara pyar bheja bhi hai...so no worries ..just take our love for you❤️❤️

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