Originally posted by: ReemShah
"Pallavi allowed herself to be separated, but as Farhad led her away, she stole a look back and met Raghav’s eyes.
His eyes were on her."
This line right here- looked coming straight out of a movie. That eye lock and the awkward introduction- this RaghVi here always manages to steal my heart. Their interactions and Raghav asking- "You'll provide blood" and Pallavi rushing to the hospital and the condition in which she reached there was described so perfectly.
I loved how Kirti relied upon her Annaya and how she sobbed out infront of him and how Raghav stood as a support pillar for his family.
Good thing, Pallavi is not a mahanatma here who would anonymously give blood..good thing everyone knows she is the donor.
Raghav using Kirti's fear as a leverage for their Amma to shift into their house. It's done in a good intention--I hope this is not taken in a bad way.
and Maya, you are a flawless writer.
Thank you, Sister. I'm pleased you are enjoying the tale.
On tv-serials it is visually effective to have plot points where the hero/heroine have near misses or anonymously come to each other's aid. In written text, it is less effective---so I have Raghav know that Pallavi came to their aid. I'm also sensing as I write these recent episodes that Raghav is no longer seeking his mother's love. In MHRW he holds a lot of guilt for the past. I've rewritten that past slightly---which will be laid out later in this tale. As you point out above, the closeness between him and Kirti is more a focus here.
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