Meet OS: Unexplained Feelings

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hi, I’ve been a silent reader for a while. I’m new to writing fanfiction or anything of that sort. Please ignore any mistakes I might have made hope all of you will enjoy this.

This is what happens post whatever happened on the paper dance night. No he didn’t say anything about Manushi but still he made things awkward for MH.


Unexplained Feelings



It’s early morning when MA’s eyes pop open after the sunlight hit his face, he looked around and found her side of bed empty. Where was she it was too early for her to be awake at this time. Before he could think any further a gush of headache hit him, his head felt heavy from the previous night. As MA had gotten a deal with a client he was perusing for a long time, last night the whole Ahlawat family had stayed awake till late partying. Papa and him decided to have a few drinks.


While trying to remember what had happened his eyes trailed to the sofa in his room. His eye saw a small figure sleeping peacefully on it, it was none other than his wife but why was she sleeping on the sofa and not next to him. One of her hands was hanging from the sofa so MA got up to help her, he’d inquire later about why she was on the sofa. Ever since the accident a part of him can’t keep his eyes of her. No things were not normal between them and as much as he told himself it’s just his thankfulness for her helping him to recovery these last few weeks, apart of him knew this was something else maybe attraction or just attachment.


Trying to fix her position she caught hold of one of his arms bring him closer to her face. He couldn’t help but fix the messed up hair from her forehead she looked nothing like the gundi she acts like all day she looked like a cute little angel. His finger trailed far too long on her forehead causing MH to wake up. Upon waking up they shared an eye lock but MH was quick to move away and straighten up.


She asked “Tumhai kuch chahiye tha?” without looking at him. He just nodded no

“Tum yahan kyun sooyi thi?” Asked MA trying to make eye contact but she looked away and said “mmm… mer.. meri marzi” and before he could inquire any further she went to the washroom.


Something didn’t feel right about her behavior why was she so distant. It didn’t help that he didn’t have any recollection of last night. She was taking longer than usual in the washroom, waiting for her to come out so he could ask her directly what happened. He started using his phone on which everyone had sent photos and videos from last night. There was a video of MA dancing with his wife as he saw the videos he remembered how awfully close he had gotten her. And this was not in a platonic way, in the video he could see that at one point she had tried to let go and moved away but only to me pulled right back into his embrace by him.


He was embarrassed by the thought of what happened last night and now understood MH’s behavior. But a part of him was telling him so what it is his wife after all and he has all the right in world to get close to her. Did he want to take this relationship to the next step? is what asked himself.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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MH calling him Tum and being awkward.. Kya kia MA ne.. 🌚🤭



Very nice OS.. ❤️

Keep writing.. 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is awesome @Missoverthinker. Do keep throwing more of these at us ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Lovely piece of writing.❤️..I wish to read more of such works😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
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tagging you here Anamika since you have not read this one too I guess

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikkiGarg

tagging you here Anamika since you have not read this one too I guess

Thank you Nikki.

Loved it dear writer 💕. Iska matlab yaha Manushi kaand nahi hua na?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Physics_girl

Thank you Nikki.

Loved it dear writer 💕. Iska matlab yaha Manushi kaand nahi hua na?

ye purane OS h anamika… I think the time when Meet Ahlawat drunk confessed love for Manushi..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikkiGarg

ye purane OS h anamika… I think the time when Meet Ahlawat drunk confessed love for Manushi..

I know it is old and realised that he was drunk and confessed love for Manushi . But here did MH dress up like Manushi or took away his Nasha by something else. That is what I am confused about.

Since I don't know the exact time this was written so I asked to get clear?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Physics_girl

I know it is old and realised that he was drunk and confessed love for Manushi . But here did MH dress up like Manushi or took away his Nasha by something else. That is what I am confused about.

Since I don't know the exact time this was written so I asked to get clear?

no I guess here no Manushi confession happened… its about the paper dance closeness.. so he slept after that but since in paper dance he has pulled her too close .. it described the awkwardness she might have felt and he is having a change of heart and may be some attraction towards her..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikkiGarg

no I guess here no Manushi confession happened… its about the paper dance closeness.. so he slept after that but since in paper dance he has pulled her too close .. it described the awkwardness she might have felt and he is having a change of heart and may be some attraction towards her..

Oo like that. Ab itne din baad parhi hu na so I got confused.😁

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