Krishna-Satyabhama drabbles updated on pg 9 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ltelidevara

Very nice story. I always liked Satyabhama. That is why she along with lord Krisna whom I worship play prominent roles in my story The Fateful Evening. Nice to see another Satya admirer like me. Enjoyed your writing style.Waiting for the next part. Good luck.

Thanks :)
I've read it :P
Just not commented :P
i love Bhama 😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Reswa..😎
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This is so enchanting Tha.. I totally loved this! And I love you for writing this out! 🤗
Gosh! I m so falling short of words. Their banter, Krishna's thoughts, Bhama's feelings, everything is so mesmerizing. I could imagine SRJ and Debina together finally.😆 Thanks to this splendid OS of yours. 👏 Keep writing more. And don't forget the one we discussed. :P
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramya06

The os is brilliantly beautiful srutha! I loved the characterization of both krishna and satyabhama. 😳 ❤️ Satya's feelings were beautifully explored and brought out. There first meeting was perfect and lovely in the garden. Loved the entire thing. Do continue soon.
You write amazingly! 👏

Thank you Ramyaa :)
I hope to do so. The future will have your Arya also in it 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ---Anu---

Reswa..😎

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This is so enchanting Tha.. I totally loved this! And I love you for writing this out! 🤗
Gosh! I m so falling short of words. Their banter, Krishna's thoughts, Bhama's feelings, everything is so mesmerizing. I could imagine SRJ and Debina together finally.😆 Thanks to this splendid OS of yours. 👏 Keep writing more. And don't forget the one we discussed. :P

Anuu 🤗
Thank you :)
Haha 😆😆
I will :) I won't forget what we discussed :P I already have plans for it :P
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aiyoo! I totally loved this!⭐️ I have always been a Radha-Krishna fan but I am loving Satyabhama.😳 I only watch Krishna related episodes of MB.😆 Anything written on Him is beautiful!But the Krishna-Bhama angle is completely different and you have begun well.😃
I loved the naga part!Normal mortals would be afraid of a snake,but Krishna being God has love for everyone and everything.😳 I loved Satyabhama and Krishna's conversation alot!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: EternalStars.

Aiyoo! I totally loved this!⭐️ I have always been a Radha-Krishna fan but I am loving Satyabhama.😳 I only watch Krishna related episodes of MB.😆 Anything written on Him is beautiful!But the Krishna-Bhama angle is completely different and you have begun well.😃

I loved the naga part!Normal mortals would be afraid of a snake,but Krishna being God has love for everyone and everything.😳 I loved Satyabhama and Krishna's conversation alot!😳

Thanks Lakshmi 😊
I explored the Krishna-Bhama angle as no has done it before, and people portray her as a quintessential vamp, which she is not. She is swayam Bhudevi, how can she have grey shades? This is how I imagined Bhama would be, and I wrote her as such. Writing Krishna? Writing Him is the easiest thing I could have ever done He is the best ❤️
Thank you :) I purposely brought the naga part to show Krishna's love for all animals, and Bhama's love for nature and her courage as well.
I hope you will like the other stuff I update as well 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was so, so good! Beautiful, serene, poignant, calming, and sensuous and I can probably go on and on. I adore Satyabhama for she can be both patient as a ruthless empress and innocent like a young toddler and not to forget her witty answers for every damn questions that is thrown her way!! I so loved the whole conversation, both complimented each other so beautifully...one a mischievous, errant apache and the other smart and shrewd enchantress and above that all, a pushp-vatika scene.

Have I ever told you I have a thing for unfolding in lap of nature, I believe that adds a surreal beauty and ambiance perfect for lovers who need but a light to turn their embers into spark! I love the subtlety in Satya and added to that impertinence of Krishna...continue it already you tease!

P.S. I loved Krishna's vocal confession about Rukmini and Satyabhama being His Shakti, his core, his encore of life!

P.P.S. Thank you for putting up a dedication to me especially when this beautiful work is through and through you idea!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Meself

This was so, so good! Beautiful, serene, poignant, calming, and sensuous and I can probably go on and on. I adore Satyabhama for she can be both patient as a ruthless empress and innocent like a young toddler and not to forget her witty answers for every damn questions that is thrown her way!! I so loved the whole conversation, both complimented each other so beautifully...one a mischievous, errant apache and the other smart and shrewd enchantress and above that all, a pushp-vatika scene.

Have I ever told you I have a thing for unfolding in lap of nature, I believe that adds a surreal beauty and ambiance perfect for lovers who need but a light to turn their embers into spark! I love the subtlety in Satya and added to that impertinence of Krishna...continue it already you tease!

P.S. I loved Krishna's vocal confession about Rukmini and Satyabhama being His Shakti, his core, his encore of life!

P.P.S. Thank you for putting up a dedication to me especially when this beautiful work is through and through you idea!

Thanks Shivi :D
I loved writing this, and considering the discussions we have had about them, you bet I will be writing a lot more about them :P
I know Their romance is divine ❤️
P.S. You did encourage me to write it :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautifully written! loved how u potrayed satya's feelings towards kanha!
update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Saishree-

beautifully written! loved how u potrayed satya's feelings towards kanha!

update soon!

Thanks Sayu :)

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