Krishna-Satyabhama drabbles updated on pg 9 - Page 5

Originally posted by: radianteyes.

Hey krishna , you brought the characters alive di

I coupd see them , i could feel them , i could sense them

For a while i had to ask myself wait dont enter the screen and then parvathi mata enters , wow , now i really qualify as his sister as i love to be tge kabab me haddi .

Beautiful di , the dialouges everythig ...

Originally posted by: LakshMila

How beautiful it was darling!

Such a beautiful writer you are Tha sweetie

Such beautiful are Govind and Bhama

Such beautiful is the nature❤️

Such beautiful is the presentation

Such beautiful is the magical play of words!Seems that you've asked the reality from Govind himself 😆

Sorry I'll end up giving a pravachan,but thats Rii's work...

The last trigger tho,☺️

I absolutely loved Bhama's ranting and Maa Parvati's coming!

Govind,haye,could imagine his eyes speaking 😳

Sorry for being such late *holds ears*

Love you loadsss

Keep writing...❤️

😎

Originally posted by: sugunmanas

Tha *hugs*
its fab dear
nice piece of work 👏
Krisha and Satya 😳😳😳
U compared Satya with beautiful peacocks
loved that part the most when their eyes meet😃
sry ya i am late to reply
but i will read this when ever i get some free time
do pm when u update dear😳😳

Originally posted by: Astoria

OMG!!!!!!! I offer my heartiest apologies for being so late to give a review but I just could not stop myself from reading it again and again.

First of all,I really like your style of writing.It made me feel as if I am there watching everything with my own eyes.

Bhama's restlessness and urge to meet her Lord was beautifully described.And our Kanha is the mischievous one here.He knows about Bhama's imapatience.

And I was blushing through the entire part in which Krishna was watching Bhama and she sensed his presence.

So,Mata Parvati joins them too???Loved how the tiger symbolises Maa Shakti (and you were telling me last night that you don't have any good ideas.Dear,you have brilliant ideas!!)

Loved it when Krishna was pulling Bhama's leg.The kitten cum tigress Bhama was sooo cute.

And the kiss.You know,kisses are something with which our mythology is not at all comfortable.A kiss is usually associated with physical love and sensuality.

But the way in which you described the kiss,it was all pure and divine.The reader can sense KrishMa's unconditional love for each other.

So,I have got nothing more to say apart from the fact that I am craving for more now.👏

Originally posted by: gmgi

Shrutha just finished reading this. Loved it completely. I am going to hunt everything you have written so far.😳