Krishna-Satyabhama drabbles updated on pg 9 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Meself

Mera!😆

Un-Mera!


Srutha...Srutha...if it indeed is possible then I am more in love with Krishna!!! Gosh you have such a way with words, I would not term them as beautiful for that'd be a gross understatement. This was beyond that. I have always loved Bhama but she has rarely been presented the way you have done here. She is either a possessive hag or a psychotic woman not the nature loving, fierce priestess that she was! I don't think I'll ever be able to thank you enough bringing out this narrative of Krishna-Satyabhama.

The other thing I simply loved was that there was nothing too dramatic or tad romantic here...it went with the flow and that was simply marvelous. I vehemently detest those scenarios where you have a dramatic entrance and confrontation planned...love never happens that way. You don't have the added taam-jhaam while experiencing this remotely strange yet familiar feeling and I loved, loved it to the core that you kept it that way.

Aww and Adi-Shakti came to meet her brother's would be wife! How adorable, I can wager that Vishnu-Parvati are the best siblings you can quote and you just proved my point. Then the spark that turned into a flame...what more can I say? Moi loves it and you are to write more now!

P.S. My favorite line:



"That's okay. I am pretty sure you of all people should know about pranks and adventures, and how to get out of getting scolded", said Satyabhama, a teasing look on her face.



Krishna looked a little dazed for a second, and then said, "Well well! The little kitten has claws", while simultaneously thinking, This is fun'

Shivi 🤗🤗
Thank you so much :) I know how much you love Bhama, and Krishna-Bhama, so I was hoping you would like it :)
She is Mother Earth. Technically, our Mother. People never seem to understand that point. Ever 🤢
Their love is like that. It all happened with the flow; or at least, that's how I imagined it did.
I know. Adi-Shakti and Vishnu sibling bond is simply ❤️
I can envision a scene of Parvati Ma at their wedding too 😆😆
I hope to write a lot more in the future :)
Thank you, for helping me start this up.
P.S. I am going to keep bugging you for ideas. Never doubt that.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Very nicely written. The whole update is interesting.Eagerly waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: ltelidevara

Very nicely written. The whole update is interesting.Eagerly waiting for the next update.

Thank you Lakshmi :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: daydreamers

Bookmark!!!

Will be back srutha...

Okay. Soon :P
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Bhamaney...satya bhamaney..
Love the pure divine love of krishna
Love his naughtiness
Love his ask encompassing nature.
Beautifully written shrutha.
❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: jayvenk

Bhamaney...satya bhamaney..

Love the pure divine love of krishna
Love his naughtiness
Love his ask encompassing nature.
Beautifully written shrutha.
❤️

Thank you Jaya 😃
His love is the most wonderful thing in the Universe 😳❤️☺️
And it is the most amazing thing to write as well :)
Btw, you have the full lyrics with meaning of Bhamaney.. Satyabhamaney?
Edited by TwinMadness - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Wonderful OS
Loved it
You are a fantastic writer
Do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: trina134

Wonderful OS

Loved it
You are a fantastic writer
Do write more

Thank you Trina :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Hey krishna , you brought the characters alive di
I coupd see them , i could feel them , i could sense them
For a while i had to ask myself wait dont enter the screen and then parvathi mata enters , wow , now i really qualify as his sister as i love to be tge kabab me haddi .
Beautiful di , the dialouges everythig ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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How beautiful it was darling!
Such a beautiful writer you are Tha sweetie
Such beautiful are Govind and Bhama
Such beautiful is the nature❤️
Such beautiful is the presentation
Such beautiful is the magical play of words!Seems that you've asked the reality from Govind himself 😆
Sorry I'll end up giving a pravachan,but thats Rii's work...

The last trigger tho,☺️
I absolutely loved Bhama's ranting and Maa Parvati's coming!
Govind,haye,could imagine his eyes speaking 😳


Sorry for being such late *holds ears*
Love you loadsss
Keep writing...❤️

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