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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweetka.

Mast update di...my arjun is a true warrior in all aspect...he always followed kshatriya dharma path...hats off 2 him

True Sweetika. Pandu's wish is to get a real Kshatriya as his son. Arjun symbolised Kshatria splendour.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: bubulswt

Superb update

One more important incident of ardi life
Father and son fight
Loved it
Waiting for next part

Yes. It really is exciting to watch father son fight. May be tomorrow.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nitayuvani

Itelidevara di u r so awesome, I had been reading ur ff for past one month and I completed 152 pages and these 89 pages

I love ardi so much
Where are u sister... I feel like coming to u and discuss with u about ardi, abhi and mb...they r my favourite discussion

Thanks for reading with such enthusiasm. Welcome to this ARDI land of love. You can discuss anything through PM. Let us do it. Right?
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Posted: 8 years ago
Di, want is meant by pm
Actually I am very new to this forum
And this is the first ever comment I am doing
😊😊
Do, I actually have many doubts reagrding, mb, I hope ur wiseness can cure them.
Why do people admire karna though he is the villain of mb, after reading ur ff I clearly understood he is reason for the misfortune of pandavas,but still why do people love him blindly
What mistake had arjun done for he is not admired that much in present world. I have loads of gratitude for arjun
And why is draupadi criticised by many/ my blood boils when I hear a word against her in this world , di sry i don't know about ur opinion about sita, but I don't like her, since she so much follow her husband without any protest, she is not a femisnist like draupadi...draupadi is my favorite icon and satyabhama, radha and rukmini too..they just honour woman and open up their heart and wish
I m in tenth do, so I have much to prepare for and I quietly relax reading mb, my most favourite and I m mad of it.which class ur di??
I must be blessed to get good marks in tenth with ardi and Krishna's blessings
I am much devotee of Krishna...I love him so much from my birth and ardi I like them since I saw star mb
I don't even like ram, because he never stood that much for woman and I don't know why people consider him god, I never see any description of him as god in valmiki ramayan and I believe he is not Krishna's incarnation too. Am I right in such considerations. Skr just showed ram very good but i never believe ...I feel ram like yudhi ram never was so kind with lakshman or sita, parav combo was unlike ramlakshamn, raha Krishna or rukmini Krishna are not aita ram, but I think ram as a good son only, but parav they r so endearing, sry for my long comment. Love ardi..
Jai sri Krishna
Jai dhanajaya
Jai maa panchali
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Posted: 8 years ago
Do learned pm. Can we become friends????
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Posted: 8 years ago
Arjun smiled at Babhruvahan who stood before him on his chariot waiting to fulfill his desire. He raised his hand in blessing. He then turned his head sideways and saw his horse Pawan seized by Manipur soldiers.He then took his Gandiv and stood on the ground and signalled his soldiers to move backwards.
The celestials,Siddhas and Rishis got excited to watch the fight between the father and son. Indra stood in space with a tensed up face as he knew his son has to endure the curse of Vasus. He then looked at Ulupi who stood away from the battlefield unseen by her husband.Indra felt relieved Ulupi is there to revive his son. Nothing to worry.

The battle started with Babhruvahan showering arrows continuously with great precision. Arjun got elated and received those arrows without resisting . Babhru again showered whetted shafts that struck Arjun on his shoulders and one keen shaft pierced Arjun on his left shoulder came out and struck in the earth.It caused severe pain to Arjun.

Arjun praised Babhru " Well done my son. Now you proved your worth." He then shot Babhru with great speed. Next moment Babhru's chariot broke and his horses got killed. Babiru stood on the ground chariot less.
Ulupi is waiting with bated breath.Let the moment arrive and pass by. She prayed to Mahadev Sankar.

After a fierce encounter,Babhru shot a deadly arrow on Arjun's chest and next moment Arjun lost. Consciousness and fell on the ground. Babhru also got struck by Arjun's arrow and fell down unconscious.
There was huge uproar among the people around. The Rishis raised their voices and chanted Santi mantras.Mahadev and Uma Parvati stood together looking down and raised their hands in blessing.

Suddenly a royal chariot halted there and Chitrangada descended from that.She ran towards Arjun and stood stupified. Next moment she glanced at Upupi who placed an assuring hand on her shoulder.

Chitra removed her hand and touched Arjun's feet. Tears started rolling down her eyes blurting her vision. She then sat down and placed Arjun's feet on her lap.She sobbed continuously and addressed Arjun." Get up Arya, Why are you lying down here? Take your horse Pawan and go to your Eldest. He must be waiting for you.

Chitra touched his curly hair and lamented." Is this the way I want to meet you after many years? Are you angry with me for making my son disregard you and hurt you? If you want I will punish him. But please get up and look at your Chitra."

Chitra wept bitterly and then suddenly addressed Ulupi" Naga Princess! I always treated you with respect. I considered you my sister. I heard from my people that you instigated Babhru to fight with his father.Why did you do that?

Are you angry with him because he neglected you and cared more for me? Or You are miffed with his flirty nature? Isn't polygamy acceptable for Kshatriyas?

Ulupi Because of you this grave incident happened. Now you only have to revive him. If you don't do so I will sit here and die with Prayopavesh." Chitra looked at Ulupi with annoyance and became silent.

Babhru recovered from his stupor and saw his mother with his father's feet on her lap. Chitra did not even look at him. Babhru had tears in his eyes. How could he do such sinful act. He can not forgive himself.He then saw Ulupi who approached him to tell something. Babhru did not let her speak. He accused her with harsh words.

" Jyesht Mata Be happy now. You made me do the most wretched thing on this earth. There is no redemption for me.I have to forego my life breaths and follow my father. I am the worst son of my valourous father. Here I sit along with my mother. We both will end our lives."

Babhru sat on the ground beside his mother. Ulupi desparately tried to console him." Babhru. Why are you acting like a fool? Who will be there that are capable to defeat your father? Even if all the gods with Indra come together it won't happen. This is an illusion created by me."

Babhru stared at her confused and shocked.

Princess get up please. What happened to you? Malini shook Draupadi who is unconscious . Arya is in meditation. They just finished the worship of Katyayani with thousand flowers. Arya is in deep meditation. Her face shone with splendour and her posture indicated she would not come back from her Dhyan that soon.
Subhadra is staring at the Goddess with a strange expression on her face. She is silent. She did not respond to Kunti who is agitated as Subhadra is never seen like that before. She looked as if she is communicating with Katyayani.

And Draupadi fell unconscious as soon as the puja got finished. Before falling back she murmured" Govind... Arjun."

Kunti shouted and called Krishna there." Kanha Kanha save us." Kunti felt a strange pain in her heart. Is her Phalgun safe? She looked at Krishna questioningly.

Krishna nodded his head. He walked towards Subhadra and Subhadra looked up." Yog Maya understood Narayan's message and again turned towards Katyayani.

Krishna looked at Panchali who is unconscious. He then sat down in Padmasan and closed his eyes.
Narayan contacted Nara's soul.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update
Amazing description of war
Between father and son
Loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
Parth Get back at once. " Krishna's voice reached Arjun who is in deep slumber like state.
" Madhav Let us go back to our eternity." Parth murmured.

Krishna reminded him." How could we? Still time is there. Get back dear Parth. This is not the time for inactivity. See how Your wives are wailing for you. Chitra is shattered. Arya won't come out of her Dhyan till you go back.
Subhadra is demanding Katyayani how could her husband fall like that.l
And your Krishnaa...

She is with me Madhav. Her soul reached mine. We are inseparable." Arjun 's voice choked with emotion.
Krishna stated firmly." Go back Parth. Don't think of anything. Till Parikshit sits on the throne we are bound to this earth. However get back with your Krishnaa.
Arjun replied." Your word is my command."

Ulupi explained Babhru. " Son I have to make you fight only for the benefit of your father.Believe me.
Vasus said that Arya Arjun should endure this in your hands.Then he will be free from the sin of overthrowing Santanav Bheeshm.

Your father is invincible even to Indra.How could anyone vanquish him?
Now take this Nag Mani the life reviving gem and place it on his heart.Your father will get up unscratched."

Ulupi gave the mani and directed Babhru towards Arjun. Chitra for got her grief and waited with bated breath.Babhru touched Arjun's chest with the mani.

Arjun got up as if from sleep.His hazel eyes reddish at the corners questioned Babhru. When he doesn't get a reply he looked at Ulupi and raised his eyebrows.He addressed her thus.

" Naga princess! What made you come here? I see Chitra here. Why did she come to the battle field
and sitting on the ground?
Tell me if Babhru did anything wrong. Or you are hurt by the Manipur Princess? Or Did I commit anything wrong towards you? "

Arjun's words melted Ulupi's heart.She touched Arjun's feet with tear filled eyes and admitted." Chitra is my friend . How could she hurt me And Babhru is like my son. He always obeyed me.And you? My lord you never hurt me in anyway."
Then what happened here? Arjun questioned.

Krishnaa get up" Panchali heard the familiar voice bringing her out from her unconciousness.
Arya smiled at her and Subhadra touched her hand and admitted." He is safe."
Panchali got up and prostrated before the goddess.Katyayani got back her life. Her Arjun.

As Ulupi finished her story Chitra ran to her and hugged making her breathless." Forgive my imprudence You always treated me like your younger sister. And I doubted your intention.More than me you deserve to be his wife. Forgive me."

Ulupi wiped her tears and consoled." Don't be guilty. It won't suit you.Now go and welcome our husband who is waiting to be greeted by you."

Arjun smiled at Chitra and turned to Ulupi." Forgive me. Even I am at fault. I never acknowledged your selfless love for me. Now I want to make amends by inviting you to stay with me forever."

Arjun turned to Babhru and said," come to Hastinapur with your mothers. After the sacrifice they will stay back.
And I am proud of you my son" Arjun embraced Babhru tightly making Babhru shiver with ecastacy .





Edited by ltelidevara - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Brilliant update di...now finally arjun came back
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Posted: 8 years ago
Our mahanyak arjun is back...
For his Krishna and krishnaaa

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