Saga of two burned hearts.....An ArDi SS(Chapter 26 up!)

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ltelidevaralak

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Posted: 9 years ago

#211

Beautiful Update Anvi. Finally love is in the air. God bless ArDi.

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aanvi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: Mahiima16

oh bichchu!? i'm scared of you! lol 😆
btw i'm a very bad girl i'll take time to update 😈 but don't worry if u want i'll become a good girl And if i'll become a good girl i'll complete the entire story within a week!! so do u want me to be a good girl? 😈

NEHIII!!! Arre yaar aise blackmail kyun karti hain!!! Ek toh hamare navu di pata nehi kahan gayab ho gaye!! Aur sam, woh update karne se rahi!! Aur agar tune bhi FF one week mein khatam kar dia toh main kya padhungi!!😆 Lekin haan, jab laxmi di jaise good girl hain, toh teri kya jaroorat!!! Ek hi kaafi hain!!!😆

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aanvi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: PanchaliKaArjun
A res ! 🤣
Still Laughing and having fun . Wait I gotta come back . 🤣

So this was too good . Loved the feelings of Drau and Arjun . Haha one last god . 😆
I love Drau so much na . 😆 And then Arjun Is confused . Aree baba tis ain't lust but love . 🤓 Unconditional love for someone special in your life .
You know the part where Krishna describes himself or should I say praises himself is jus 🤣 true but then too cool .😎 And yippee ! Drau has seen Arjun 's pic and recognised him . And I love the way you expressed Arjun 's feeling . You know please keep making him feel like that . 😆
And please keep a dream sequence where Drau dreams about Arjun and Arjun dreams about her ☺️ that would be awesome re. 😆 Jus a suggestion . 😎
Anyways update soon and wanna read what's next . Continue soon .
Love
Sam

Why were u laughing re??😕 arre tu bhi samjha kar!! Jab tak Madhav ke no entry, tab tak only confused!!😆 Arre kya blockbuster idea dia!! Never had in mind!!!😆 now i'll steal it...😈😆

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aanvi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: PanchaliKaArjun
@ Mahi and avni . Thanks IKR ! I too love my UN 😉 akhir Parth Panchali k alawa kiss ka hai ?😆 He solely belongs to her . 😉
@ Mahi I want to be the good girl . Update soon . Otherwise we will be the bad girls

haan,haan, you'll say so na! why would u want any other sautan!!! 7 hi enough hain!!😆

and company ke lie dhanyavaad... now we will pinch together!!😈

@all anyone is there who wants to give reminder pinch for mahi?? then join us now!!!😆

arre yaar, mere pure naam ko hi ulat kar rakh dia!! It's AANVI!! Not avni!!😆chal chor, i know my name is complicted, call me anu from now!!😆

Edited by naturelover33 - 9 years ago

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aanvi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: A13256WE
are waah!!!! aag to dono taraf se lagi hui hai 😉
loved how u gave description of Arjun!!!
aur ha aise hi good gal banake roj update deti rehna otherwise even I m bad gal 😉

thanks!! Lekin agar dhamki issi ko deni hain, toh mahi ko do!! She needs it!!!😆

@mahi, kaha tha na, i am bichchu!! Ab lag gayi na piche updates ke liye!!!😈

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mahima

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Posted: 9 years ago

#216

@Aanvi: only for you i started writing the new part and i have even written the half of it but still you wanna pinch me?and want others to pinch me? 😭 😆

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aanvi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: Mahiima16

yes Parth Panchali ke Alawa kisi ka nahi
And i'll be a good girl very soon but sam when r u gonna be a good girl,huh? ;) when r u gonna update your FF? 😉

Really... Savyasachi only for yagyaseni... Sam ke lie mera koi hope nehi bacha, jaise SB ke 2 feet rule breaking ke lie hope nehi tha...🤔 But hopeless hain tu toh phir bhi thodhi hope hain...

@ sam dekh, first tune 2 months update nehi kia, uske baad kia to kia, suspense hi nehi toda. Mere pet mein abhi bhi khujli ho rehi hain yaar, update kar na!!*puppy eyes**pouting*( dekh, mein kuch mangti hun, toh pout karti hun. Aur mere cuteness to dekh kar koi deny nehi karta hain. Mere cute se face ke liye hi sahi, update kar na!!😃) Dekh, u need to revive my hope. SB ne toh nehi kia, tu hi kar de!!!😃

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aanvi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: Mahiima16
@Aanvi: only for you i started writing the new part and i have even written the half of it but still you wanna pinch me?and want others to pinch me? 😭 😆

Arre you only started writing it... didn't updated it na!! so okay, i'll not pinch you...😆 chal maaf kia... see i am an advantage! if i hadn't pinched u, then u would hv forgotten that FF!!! And people would miss such a story!!!😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: ltelidevaralak
Beautiful Update Anvi. Finally love is in the air. God bless ArDi.

ArDi ki jai di!!!😃 love is in the air and will be in air!!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#220

CHAPTER EIGHTEEN

DIWALI FAIR, OR DILWALE FAIR?😉-PART 1

"Uffo, Nilanjana!"

" What i said, huh! lagta hain kumkum ke rang tumhare hriday mein bhi lag gayi, Krishnaa!"

"What??" Draupadi rolled her eyes. She was blushing profusely.

" Yes! And maybe some in cheeks, also!" Krishna teased.

" What is this, goving, here i am expressing something to you, and you are here teasing me!"
" Krishnaa, prem mein yeh sab thoda bohot chalta hain! and winked.

" I am miffed withboth of you! Jaao, I won't talk to you!"

" Arre, why are you angry, Putri?"
" See, how these both are teasing me about my marriage!!"

" Everyone gets teased in this matter, putri! Now leave it! and get ready!"
" For what?"
" To go to outside!"
" Really?" Dhrisht exclaimed and came excitedly.

" What's brewing here without telling me? Even I want to go!"
" Why will you go! I got the gist from Pitashri, I will go!"
" No i will go!"
" I said i will go!"
" No me!"

" Tumhe pata hain Dhrisht, mujhe iss ke lie kitne paapad belna pade! Why will you go then!"
" Arre! I came after so long, can't i go!"
" You got to go many times, now my turn!"

" No!"
" I said no!" and they both showed their tongue and stood not facing their face. They both quarreled like little children. When time came, they were partners of crime, but they didn't miss any opportunity to quarrel.

" Uff, you both again started! now you both get ready quickly!"
" But what will we wear?"
" Normal clothes!"
"Why?"
" Because we go in normal citizen's attire!"
" Oh! " draupadi exclaimed very cutely.

" So get ready!"

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Draupadi wore a light pink lehenga of cotton cloth with a off white choli. Her lehanga had a zigzag form of off white and light pink. All were highlighted by pink and silver strings. And there was mirrors on the dupatta. Dupatta was of off white color with different patterns skillfully created by pink and silver strings. Though it was simple, that dress was looking extraordinary on her. She wore a silver jhumka with colorful stones and a silver neck piece of same color. she was looking gorgeous. Maybe gorgeous for someone!!

" Ohho! Sakhi! You are looking like an angel! But you have another aura, right! Krishna came. He wore as usual pitambar dhoti. And this time he had a big pagdi on his head.

" What govind! Again started!"

" Bachche log! Come quickly! Yes, pitashri!

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" So diwali will be coming, Bhai!"
" Yup!"
" So we should buy something!"
"What? we don't hv any money, Nakul!" Bheem said.

" So we can earn na!"
" How?"
" See, there is a mela now?"
" Yup" arjun said.

" And we all know that there are many types of challanges in mela for reward! we can surely complete them!"
" Yes! Iss prakar toh hum sab dhani ho jaenge!" Bheem said excitedly.

" Kahan, Bhrata! Yahan aapko ek kaarya purn karne ke liye lakhon mudraen nehi milenege!" said sahadev.

" Then?"
" Bhratashri, you may get mere five or ten- highest fifty mudras..."
" So if we will at least win five to six challenges of at least ten mudras, then we may get 55 to 65 mudras! And we can buy so many things!" said arjun.

" Exactly!! But at first need to go there na! Let's go!"

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" So we all are ready!" said Dhrisht excitedly. All except Shrikhandini was in normal attire. Seeing her not ready, Draupadi said,

" But Jiji, aren't u going?"
" Krishnaa, if all securities of Palace goes away, then the security will be weak. I will go next time, okay?"
" But...but i don't know whether second time will come or not..."
" Surely it will come. But as of now, you should go. Don't be sad, okay?"
" You aren't going, then how can i be happy?" Draupadi's red cheeks were puffed with disappointment.

" Now don't be miffed! If something happenes to Panchal, will you feel good?"
" Yes, Putri. Let her stay. Someone needs to stay here. Shrikhandi, take care and keep alert. Now let's go.

TBC...

Hope that you all liked it!!😃

Edited by naturelover33 - 9 years ago