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Posted: 9 years ago
CHAPTER SEVENTEEN
GOVIND!!! WHAT HAPPENED TO ME!!


She quickly went to her palkey. Satyajit observed and went to Dhrisht and exclaimed,
" Dhrisht, Krishnaa didn't went to chariot!"
" What?! Krishnaa didn't demand to go in chariot? Amazing change!" exclaimed Dhrisht. She wanted only one more time to see that man; just once."Just once Mahadev, just once!" she prayed. And she gently pulled the curtain of palkey praying. And her dimmed face turned bright. She gave the most dazzling smile in her life; divine; with a pink hue on her cheecks. She had a satisfaction in her eyes; a lovelorn expression in her lotus eyes; as expressive as oceans.

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Arjun thought, " is it wrong, Mahadev? Is it lust? Did I lusted? I am on the peak; just push me Mahadev; just push me..." and the bells jingled together; maybe to convey that, no Purushottam, your thought is wrong. He couldn't understand what to do. And at the time, the palkey was going in front of him. With a hope to look at the face again, he thought to look at the Palkey. As he saw, he controlled himself from going on knees. He saw the face; as dazzling as star. His heart pounded with this new emotion which he never experienced before. His heart convinced, no it is love; only love. He thought to stare at the face; he prayed that the moment stops there. Surroundings vanished for him; for him there was only she... But the Palkey went on breaking his thoughts. He stared at the going palkey." Will I see her again?" he had only this thought... And Madhav gave a dazzling smile and said,
" Who knows, Parth? Maybe your life is only she!!"

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Draupadi ran to her chamber. She collapsed the door and stood against the locked door. Her heart beating against her chest; beating so fast that she thought it would jump out from her chest. She couldn't know what to do. Her legs were not allowing her to stand anymore. She only thought," Govind!!" And maybe he also listened to her immediately.
" Sakhi! Sakhi! Open the door! What happened! Anything wrong? Krishna had sheer tension in is voice.
" N..N..No, Govind! Nothing! I..I am opening!" she took a deep breath and said," calm, krishnaa!" She had a hard time to compose herself to reality. She calmed herself and opened the door with a dazzling smile. Winds came from every directions; curtains were dancing with the breeze. they flew very divinely. Krishnaa thought someday she may again need to encounter like this. She felt herself free; free from anything; she thought her soul completed with this man's entry. And her thread of thought broke down. She felt a divine hand on her right shoulder.
" Krishnaa! What happened? Why are you all red??"
" Nothing , Govind. Just an accident."
" But what were you thinking?"
" Nothing. Just thinking that someday we may meet like this!"
" Maybe, Sakhi! Who knows future! But at first see what i brought for you!"
" I'll see it later. But now i have some questions."
" But see it na!"
" No ifs and buts, first listen to me!"
" Okay! Let's keep it here for sometime! And let's sit there." He made her sit on a couch and said,
" Hmm. Now tell me, what happened?"
" I have a question, Govind. Can a ksatriya fall in love with a Brahmin?" she said with curious eyes.
" I'll answer it later, but at first tell me, why are you asking it, haan? Let me see, if love is in the air!" and acted to smell in the air.
" Uff, Govind. Actually i don't know it! Whenever i go in front of him, I just can't control myself. My heart beats so fast, that it may get out any moment! Whenever I see his face, I wish to stare at it all time. Satisfaction surrounds me."
" Hmm... Sakhi. It's indeed love! But I don't think Brahmins have such charm to impress rajkumaris. But haan, a kshatriya can fall for Brahmi, if in Brahmin's attire is a Ksatriya! Who knows! But i knew that there is only one person who can charm you! But he is dead! Then who must be? Matter to think!"
" What? Only one man can charm me? Really?"
" Of course! Such handsome persons came in front of you, but you never fell for them. Even me, Vrij Vihari called by Radha, there was line of girls behind me! Even Princess of Vidarbha, my wife, Rukmini had sent me letter to marry her without seeing me never! Such irresistible is my charm! But you never fell for ME! So that means there is only one person!"
" Now who is he?"
" He is my cousin, just like me, like my duplicate but can't beat me. I am the architect, he is the builder. His charm is so much irresistible, that even apsaras can't hold themselves. He is Savyasachi, the most perplexed archer of the world; my soul mate; Hastinapur's prince; RAJKUMAR ARJUN."
" Arjun! How can anyone's name be so irresistible!"
" What Sakhi! Thinking that how can anyone's name be so irresistible, haan?"
" Ye..yes! How can be!"
" Maybe it was fate!"
"But you said,only his charm can impress me?"
" Yes, see it yourself!" And a breeze passed through; maybe as an indication! And the curtain of the picture moved a little.
" See him, Krishnaa. I bet, you will fall in love with the person at the first sight!" and winked with a mischievous knowing smile.
" Okay! Let's see! As she removed the curtain, the same feeling came when she removed curtain of the chariot to see him. She was astonished that how can anyone be so same!
" Govind, this is the same person!"
" Have you gone mad in love so much Sakhi!"
" No, no, govind, i am saying this Rajkumar is the Brahmin!"
" How can ne be? He is dead na?"
" How Govind! You are the one who said that he must be alive to pitashri and now you are telling that he is dead!"
' How did you know?"
" Because my instinct says that he is the only person!"
" Are you sure, Sakhi?"
" Pakka!"
" Hmm.. Then the forecast was right! Maharaj drupad begotten you only to be father in law of parth."
" But who is Parth?"
" Parth is Rajkumar Arjun, priye!" Nilanjana was standing near the door with one hand in hip and other hand rolling her plait.
" Shit!" Draupadi cursed internally.
" Now you should remember all his name, Krishnaa, kiriti, parth, savyasachi, gudakesha, krishna, all, priye, all his name..."
TBC...
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Posted: 9 years ago
i read it even before you could send me the PM! ;)
Now coming to the update,Aanvi you write really well and i loved how you described Arjuna's feelings after he saw draupadi!! :D And btw you are such a good girl you are giving updates regularly nowadays... 😉 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: naturelover33


Thanks!!😃and yeah sam, i also love ur name!!😳aur tu meri ArDi ko chor, Piyali aur Arjun ka meetup kara!!! jaldi!!!😆


Arjun-piyali will meet soon! i'll post the new part either today or tomorrow morning but till then please bear with me ;) 😃
Edited by Mahiima16 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahiima16

i read it even before you could send me the PM! ;)
Now coming to the update,Aanvi you write really well and i loved how you described Arjuna's feelings after he saw draupadi!! :D And btw you are such a good girl you are giving updates regularly nowadays... 😉 😛


arre competition laga dia kya mere saath!!😆 thank you so much for ur lovely comments!!😳 You know, in mahabharat, the most unexplored emotions are of parth... many are confusing!!😕 I thought make him expressive!!! Arre good girl issi liye hun kyunki updates ready hain!! Jab mere update bank se updates khatam ho jaenge, toh main lazy girl bun jaungi!!😆 Agar iss wajah se main good girl hun, toh tu bhi bun jaa na!!! Update quickly!!!( main ek aisi bichchu hun, jo lazy writers hote hain, unko main sirf pinch karti rehti, kahin bhi!!! toh jab tak no update, tab tak only pinching u!!!😆)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahiima16


Arjun-piyali will meet soon! i'll post the new part either today or tomorrow morning but till then please bear with me ;) 😃

Arre dil khush kar dia! muah!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: naturelover33



arre competition laga dia kya mere saath!!😆thank you so much for ur lovely comments!!😳You know, in mahabharat, the most unexplored emotions are of parth... many are confusing!!😕I thought make him expressive!!! Arre good girl issi liye hun kyunki updates ready hain!! Jab mere update bank se updates khatam ho jaenge, toh main lazy girl bun jaungi!!😆Agar iss wajah se main good girl hun, toh tu bhi bun jaa na!!! Update quickly!!!( main ek aisi bichchu hun, jo lazy writers hote hain, unko main sirf pinch karti rehti, kahin bhi!!! toh jab tak no update, tab tak only pinching u!!!😆)


oh bichchu!? i'm scared of you! lol 😆
btw i'm a very bad girl i'll take time to update 😈 but don't worry if u want i'll become a good girl And if i'll become a good girl i'll complete the entire story within a week!! so do u want me to be a good girl? 😈
Edited by Mahiima16 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
A res ! 🤣
Still Laughing and having fun . Wait I gotta come back . 🤣

So this was too good . Loved the feelings of Drau and Arjun . Haha one last god . 😆
I love Drau so much na . 😆 And then Arjun Is confused . Aree baba tis ain't lust but love . 🤓 Unconditional love for someone special in your life .
You know the part where Krishna describes himself or should I say praises himself is jus 🤣 true but then too cool .😎 And yippee ! Drau has seen Arjun 's pic and recognised him . And I love the way you expressed Arjun 's feeling . You know please keep making him feel like that . 😆
And please keep a dream sequence where Drau dreams about Arjun and Arjun dreams about her ☺️ that would be awesome re. 😆 Jus a suggestion . 😎
Anyways update soon and wanna read what's next . Continue soon .
Love
Sam


Edited by PanchaliKaArjun - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
@ Mahi and avni . Thanks IKR ! I too love my UN 😉 akhir Parth Panchali k alawa kiss ka hai ?😆 He solely belongs to her . 😉
@ Mahi I want to be the good girl . Update soon . Otherwise we will be the bad girls
Edited by PanchaliKaArjun - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
are waah!!!! aag to dono taraf se lagi hui hai 😉
loved how u gave description of Arjun!!!
aur ha aise hi good gal banake roj update deti rehna otherwise even I m bad gal 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: PanchaliKaArjun

@ Mahi and avni . Thanks IKR ! I too love my UN😉akhir Parth Panchali k alawa kiss ka hai ?😆He solely belongs to her .😉

@ Mahi I want to be the good girl . Update soon . Otherwise we will be the bad girls


yes Parth Panchali ke Alawa kisi ka nahi
And i'll be a good girl very soon but sam when r u gonna be a good girl,huh? ;) when r u gonna update your FF? 😉
Edited by Mahiima16 - 9 years ago

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