Saga of two burned hearts.....An ArDi SS(Chapter 26 up!) - Page 24

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: PanchaliKaArjun

Res 😳

Unres ! What's ths I thought Kya Kya hoga looking at the title but 😆
Hey Bhagwan ! But loved the update .
Aur Drupad is also going ! Aree itne kabab meh Haddi 😆 oh no . Sneak them out in a secret place and then ahem ahem ☺️
I love the way you showed Drau in her family . How happy she is . Please keep her like this even after the marriage . 😳
Update soon .
Ps I Know how it feels when someone leaves it in res . I too have felt It so many times, 😆
Love
Sam

arre kabab mein haddi yun furr ho jayenge dekhna!!😉 arre part one likkha hain, iska matlab bohot se parts hain...😉😆 keep waiting!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
hmm... toh ab aai akal thikane mein... meri daant kha kar!!😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Waiting for the update Anvi. Let ArDi meet soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ltelidevaralak

Waiting for the update Anvi. Let ArDi meet soon.

sorry di!! forgot abt the updates!!🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
CHAPTER EIGHTEEN
DIWALI FAIR, OR DILWALE FAIR?😉-PART 2 :THE BUMP!
THOUGHTS IN ITALIC...
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"Oh my god!!! Such a crowd!" the foursome landed in fair. Yudhishtira couldn't come because he needed to take of kunti. in that fair there was huge crowd.
" Now let's start in search of some work!"
" Bhrata, see, there is an astronomer! Let's go!"
" What Sahadev!" the three said in chorus.
" Please?" and they couldn't deny their youngest's request.
" trim brim krim! Aao! Aao, Aryavrat ke sabse gyani jyotishi ke samaksh! aao!" the companion of that astronomer invited
" Huh! Makkhan lagane ki bhi seema hoti hai! the best astronomer!! huh!" the four laughed out. There was a big crowd.
" What's my future, Mahashaya!" a girly voice told.

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King drupad and his companions arrived at the mela.
" Wow!" both draupadi and dhrisht said in chorus.
" This is so beautiful!!"
" Yes, putron. Now let's go!"
" Krishnaa, see, there is an astronomer! Let's go there!" dhrisht saw they going
" Pitashri, they are..."
" Let them go, putr. Why worry when nilanjana is with her! she knows everything about here!" they vanished in the crowd. nilanjana then asked,
" what's my future, Jyotishi?"
" Hmm.. Balike, let me see your hand!"
" Here it is!"
"Hmm... Trik Brim krim mayavi darpan, dekha do tum mujhe apna khel!" Draupadi curiously observed that man's action.
" Balike, you'll lose something."
" No! That's not true!" Sahadev said. He observed Nilanjana. And said, she is not going to lose something, she'll go away!"
" Go away!" Draupadi didn't understood, but Nilanjana had.
" Why did you interrepted me!"
" Because you were wrong!"
" Who are you to tell me that!"
" Because I am also an Astrologer!"
" Why should we believe you!" the followers said.
" If you don't believe, then let me say, you, the one, got a daughter, right?"
" YE..yes!"
" See!"
" Wow! Let's know from him!" and Sahadev got many mudras by foretelling. On the other hand, Bheem wrestled with a wrestler, and completed a challenge. Nakul got many coins by judging a horse correctly. Arjun was roaming around the fair. And suddenly someone bumped with him.
" Ouch!
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"Nilanjana! Let's go there na!" she talked to Nilanjana while walking backwards. And suddenly someone bumped and draupadi lost her control. She thought that her whole body might now break down if she falls.Her eyes were closed in fear. But suddenly two protective arms stopped her from falling. And as she opened her eyes, she again saw him. And a crimson hue formed in her face. Arjun was so lost that even he lost his grip. His hand left her and she fell down; but very softly. As leaf falling from tree. But Nilanjana's yelling broke both their thoughts.
" Hey! Why do you always bump!" His romantic mode turned to irritating mode. He found the face familiar. But suddenly struck in his mind," How did she knew that i bumped before?" And asked,
" always? Did i bumped with you before?"
" Oh ho!Now you don't remember!What happened in the Mandir? I remember everything!"
" Now how she knew WHERE i bumped?"
" Uff! Nilanjana! Stop quarreling! And pull me! If Dhrisht sees me like this, he will kill raa... no no, this person."
" Oh! Yes! Come on Krishnaa!"
" One...one minute... devi...Arjun was trying to talk with Nilanjana
" So what, Haan? Did you take a tutorial of how to bump! Bump with everybody!"
" One second, one second!First of all, I didn't bump with your friend, your friend bumped with me. And second of all, how did you know that i bumped with somebody else?"
" Because... Because..." Nilanjana stammered. She didn't do got any valid reason to tell. and they couldn't tell their identities.
" Because there you bumped and I fell." Krishnaa said shyly; this line had two different meaning; now depends on what should the listener think. So nilanjana and arjun got two different meanings.
" Oh! so you are the one!I am so sorry! for both the bumps! that first one was because of cow dung! but i don't think you fell?"
" Bu..But the kumkum fell!"
" Oh yes!I think you are the maid of rajkumari. please tell her sorry on behalf of me!" and thought about the gorgeous Princess.
" Su..sure, no problem!" Nilanjana was having a hard time to keep her laugh inside her.
" So, pranipaat!"
" Pranipaat!"
" Wow, Krishnaa! Your choice is not bad!He knows how to talk swiftly! But i didn't got one thing, you, you bumped with that guy, and...and fell in love, because...because of cow dung!" and now nilanjana couldn't hold herself. She laughed out loud.
" What is this, Nila! He didn't got the other meaning!How could he know that!"
" Yeah, yeah, but the humor doesn't match na!"
" So What! Now leave that, and say, do you now agree that only he is Rajkumar Arjun?"
" Haan, Krishnaa! So much resemblance! How couldn't the messengers knew!"
" We don't need to worry about that!"
" Yup! See, there is an archer competition maybe! let's go there!!
TBC,,,,
Edited by naturelover33 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very funny Anvi,Enjoyed a lot.But why didn't Arjun recognise Drau? He is smart enough to know both are same I feel. And Drau will look gorgeous even without ornaments and silk clothes.Let him recognise her.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice 😃 it was such a sweet n nice chapter 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ltelidevara

Very funny Anvi,Enjoyed a lot.But why didn't Arjun recognise Drau? He is smart enough to know both are same I feel. And Drau will look gorgeous even without ornaments and silk clothes.Let him recognise her.

He'll recognize!!! he was so lost in her beauty, that he forgot to recognize her!!!😆 after all his love is so pure na!!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahiima16

Nice 😃 it was such a sweet n nice chapter 😳

thanks mahi!!😃 now be a good girl and update soon!!😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: naturelover33

thanks mahi!!😃 now be a good girl and update soon!!😆

Where can I find Mahima's story ? Missed it somehow.

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