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CHAPTER-FIFTEEN

YOUR WISH, MY COMMAND!
" Krishnaa! The food is served!! Daasi! Call Mahara..."
"No, Nilanjana! Today I will call Pitashri. You go and call Govind." She said in a sweet voice. But some other mischief was going on her mind...
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She tiptoed to the room, and quietly opened the door."Uffo! Why does this doors sound!!" She murmered under breath. And quietly went behind her father who was going towards the cupboard; and kept her hands on his eyes.
" krishnaa! What happened?"
" Uffo! Why do you all always catch me! I always try to give surprise but you all understand it!"
" Because there is no one in the mahal who will do such things!" Drupad smiled victoriously.
" Uff, forget that. I wanted to say that the lunch is ready. And you have a surprise there!"
" What surprise? Any prank, huh?" he questioned with his eyebrows.
" No! No! First come na! You will be happy!"
" Okay, Maharani, let's go!" sighed Drupad while saying.
" Yes!"
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They went to dining hall. That was a big hall with many tables and seats. And in the middle of the hall, there was a big royal table in which only kings used to eat. and on other tables, Daasis and soldiers and other habitants used to eat. King Drupad used to give same rights to eat in table to all people. And at the middle of the hall, there was a big diamond jhumar with exclusive jewels. The roof of the hall was round shaped. And there was many designs in the wall. The table had extraordinary works. Daughter-father went to the table. and Drupad said,
" So, what's surprise here now! Trying to fool me!"
" No, fdather! Can you guess who made this delicious looking kheer?" and fingered to the kheer.
" Hmm... You made it!
" No... Someone else..."
' Then who must be?"
" Pitashri, it's Jiji!"
" What! Are you joking! I don't believe it!" Drupad said in a disbelief voice.
" No, ask Jiji. She made it... At my insistence and efforts!" and gave a proud look.
" Really?" He eyed and enquired his elder daughter. She gave a smile and nodded yes.
" Wow! Then I must taste it!" Drupad rubbed his hand and began to eat.
" Umm... It's really tasty! I didn't know my daughter could cook so well!"
" And it was my discovery!"
" So, let's eat!"
" Pitashri, can you remember anything related to me?"
'Yes, Putri. I remember. Today is the sixth month of your and Drisht's birth. Rishi Upayaaj had told me told me to do a puja. Shrikhandini, start arranging for puja. Satyajit, count the account tally and give alms to Brahmins."
" Yes, Maharaj."
" UFF!! Again these state discussion! Leave it na!"
" So won't you learn to handle state?"
" Will learn later. I am still an infant considering my birth time. So, it has time."
" Uff, no one can beat you in debating!"
" But Pitashri, Won't you give me something?"
' Beware, Pitashri! She fooled me saying this and made me make all these!"
" Now see, Jiji. It had many advantages; Pitashri liked it, govind liked it, I liked it, and you had a new adventure and a new knowledge!"
"Yes, Jiji! An unique adventure is always interesting! Like see me, it was an unique adventure to tame Krishnaa!" and winked govind saying it.
" Govind!"
" But now my time of adventure has finished; now I should go."
" From where?"
" From Panchal or what!"
" No, no, please govind! Otherwise how will my time go!"
" Come on, I stayed here for more than two months!"
" So what?"
" Listen, even I have a little sister like you. And now she is waiting for me. Now I promise, I will visit here frequently, and your in- laws also!" he winked and tried to cheer Krishnaa. But these words had no effects on her.
" For this month, please please please!!!! she pleaded and tried to signal something. Then Krishna understood that she has something in mind for which he is needed.
" Umm... Okay! I will stay."
" Yay!"
" But... but only for this month!"
" Okay! Now father, what about my gift?"
" So what do you want?"
" A tour!!"
" Again that!"
" Let her go , Maharaj. She needs to explore and know the world."
" Yes, yes!" she nodded and looked at her father helplessly with hope.
" Hmm... Okay. But Dhrisht and you both will go together."
" Really! Is Dhrisht coming!" she became elated at her brother's mention.
" Yes, And he will arrive within some moments."
" Yay!" she clapped excitedly. And after sometime, arrival trumpet were blown.
" Yay! He is coming!" and ran to the main door.
" Arre! Finish your meal na!"
" Later, Jiji!"
" Pagli!" Shrikhandini shook her head.
she excitedly went to the main door curiously looking at the chariot. And a big toned figure with a sword was seen. And with him, was Ashwatthama. And Satyajit also left the lunch and came hurriedly. After arati was finished, Panchali gave him bone crashing hug.
" I missed you!"
" Even I missed you re! My little sis!"
" I am not your little sis! Just some minutes younger!"
" Okay, okay, my queen! Now don't quarrel! Otherwise I will go away!"
" NO! Never!"
" OKay! okay! Pagli!"
" And now I have some arrival gift arranged for you"
" What!!" he gave the same expression as Draupadi.
" Food made by Jiji and a tour!!!"
" What!" and they both jumped like little child.
" Again they started! Enough of your pranks. First of all you both need to go to Kuldevi mandir for a Puja. First let's go there.
" Okay! Jiji! They said in chorus and left for their respective rooms.
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" Mahashaya, you have given a place to stay. Now please accept our service."
" But it's our brother's birthday, na!"
" So what, Mahashaya! Work doesn't stop for such occation. PLese take our service." said Arjun.
" You are very understanding person, putr. The one who will get you will be the luckiest! Now at the work, I need some soil from Kuldevi Mandir near crop field. So, keep this cart and axes."
" Yes, Mahashaya."
" Now who will go among you all?"
" Umm... Let's me and Nakul go, Bhrata!"
" But..."
" No it's and buts. I can't live without working. And if he stays here, then will stay admiring himself without doing any work. So let me take him.
" Okay, Phalgun. As your wish...
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Draupadi wore a red Dhoti and saree. Her hair was side plaited. And hair had an extra ordinary hair jewellery. She was looking divine in red color; just like her creator. On the other, Arjun was looking like any woman's fantasy even in normal attire.
" Nakul! Will you come out of your mirror world?"
" Yes, yes! Coming! Then the brothers advanced towards the Mandir; maybe life changing for one...
TBC...
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Finally you came to the famous ArDi moment. Anvi, Thank God. wait is over.
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Originally posted by: ltelidevaralak

Finally you came to the famous ArDi moment. Anvi, Thank God. wait is over.

yeah, just was trying to find an excuse for not their, only arjun's meetup...😆 becuz at first only his stomach had butterflies na!!! and now they need to fly!!!!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice 😊
you are a good writer

you have portrayed draupadi so cutely 👏
loving your ss and eagerly waiting for ArDi to meet... 😳
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Originally posted by: Mahiima16

nice 😊
you are a good writer

you have portrayed draupadi so cutely 👏
loving your ss and eagerly waiting for ArDi to meet... 😳

thank u!!Embarrassed arjun's turn will also come in cuteness!!! yes, they will meet soon!!!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Nice chapter Aanvi😊

Thanks di!!!😃
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Originally posted by: Sonatia

Res! Ton8 or tomorrow!! Lemme read 1'st haha..

Jaldi karna haan...
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CHAPTER-SIXTEEN

BUTTERFLIES IN STOMACH!!!!😉-PART 1
Thoughts in Italic
WARNING: VERRYY LONG UPDATE... READ ON YOUR OWN WILL...
They advanced towards the Mandir. His heart was pounding for a not known reason.
" I never felt like this before. Even the toughest time and excited thing couldn't gave me such beating. Then wat's the reason!" He was emerged in his thoughts.
" Bhai? BHAI!? Nakul screamed near his ears. He almost had a shock and jumped.
" What is this, Nakul! Does anyone scream like this!"
" Then what can I do when you were emerged in someone's thought? Why scolding me? Nothing happened with me, but something happened with you surely!"
" Really, what happened to me?" He knew that he was behaving quite weird these days.
" No..No..Nothing happened to me! Can't I be quite for sometime? I am not talkholic like you!!"
" But I need someone who can listen to me na! You know, I am badly missing my horse."
" Why?"
" Because at least it could listen to me na! No one listens to me!!"
"Reall Nakul, I think sometime, how did that horse used to bear you and your talks! Porr thing!! Got saved!!"
'What! Here I am mourning over my horse, and you are mocking!! Oh my Pawan! That bloody Dushashan always lusted for my horse. Now he got it! How he must be treating!" Nakul sighed looking at the sky.
" Now forget it and leave from here quickly."
" Why?"
" Can't you see the girls staring at us! Let's go!"
" Ohho, Bhai! See, how many girls are drooling over you! Come on, Bhai, can't you flirt? Even the princesses couldn't resist themselves! Then they are poor girls! Huh" and winked.
" Shut up!" and rolled his eyes.
" You know Bhai, sometime I get scared; what if rajkumai of Panchal sees you! Then she'll drool over you pakka! And will take you away from us!"
" Will you do the pleasure of shutting your mouth and sparing me! Here I am in trouble already and you are teasing and calculating about the rajkumari" he said anxiously when he saw a girl advancing towards them. He had drops of water on his forehead.
Nakul whistled and said,
" Woho, Bhai! I think she is one degree higher, Gonna propose at first sight!!
" Then run from here!"
" Why! But.."
" Run!" and arjun walked so fast that he wouldn't have done in his entire life.
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"Uff, Bhai! What made you run so fast!" they both were panting behind the mandir.
" I lost all my energy!"
" Then gear up! We need to work!"
' I wonder how do you that much!" Nakul shook his head while leaving his breath.
" Now start work!" But Nakul's face had been pale with tension...
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" Dhrisht! Dhrisht! Where have you gone now!"
" What happened?"
" Are you coming or not? If we are late, then Jiji is gonna scold ME! Let's go quickly!" They both went to their respective chariots.
" Uff, it's so boring to go in covered chariot! I wish I could be in Dhrisht's chariot!" Thought Draupadi and sighed. But abruptly the chariot stopped.
" What happened sarathye?"
" Nothing rajkumari. Someone left their cart in the road.
"Now who are fool to keep their carts in roads! Don't they know where to keep carts?" Draupadi thought. " WHO MUST BE THESE FOOLS!!"
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"Bhai! Bhai! What did we do!"
" What?"
" We left the cart!"
" What!! Hey Bhagwan!!! run!!"
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" Phew! The cart is okay!" ARrjun looked at the cart which is safe and sound.
" Banauti thi who ladkian!!! Because of them we had almost lost it! What would we tell to Mata?"
" Bhai..." Nakul tapped arjun's shoulders. His mouths were opened.
" What happened?"
" Bhai, we landed in trouble..."
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" Rajkumari, maybe the owner of the cart have come to take the cart."
"Good for them. wait, we got late because of this for drama. And we will get so much scolding for them! Ruko tum, now I will teach them lesson. Manner less people!" She was about to get out of the chariot, they satyjit voice was heard.
" Brahmin, don't you know, this act of inconvenience could cause great trouble for you?"
" We are sorry, Maharathi. We landed in some trouble; that's why we left it in hurry."
" Which type of trouble?" Dhrisht asked sternly. In his mind he was very excited to listen their story."
' Girls..."
" Wha... what!!! Girls!" Dhrisht could not hold himself. He said while laughing, grasping for breath." Gi, girls were trouble! Sorry, Brahmins, are you joking this us! Were they coming with knife!" he was laughing so hard that next moment he would fall in the floor.
" What! Girls are troubles, haan! Let me take a lesson of them that how much troublesome girls can be!"
" Wha.. What did they do?" Dhrisht saying while breathing
" The... the thing is, that girl wanted to... wanted to..."
" Wanted to what? Kill you?"
" No, that girl wanted to propose me..."
' What?"
" Yes, and I was afraid that that can approach for marriage."
" What a fool you are! Declined a proposal! Man, learn to be man!"
" What kind of fool is he! he was afraid of a proposing girl!"But a kind of insecurity was brewing inside her. " Let's see who must be this fool!" And displaced the curtain to see the man's face. he was divine... Draupadi was awestruck seeing that face... Those eyes, luscious hair, even his beard seem to be interesting to her. She had an amazing feeling in her... She thought of dancing, jumping, screaming, don't know what to do... She just wanted to get out of the chariot and embrace that man and take him somewhere away. her feet were not in the ground; her stomach was tickling; her body had an other heat; her soul in tendency only to get that person near her.
" Control, control yourself, Krishnaa! What happened to you!! Need counseling of Govind! Result of not seeing any man's face for long time!!!" But did she knew what her soul wanted!!!
TBC
Edited by naturelover33 - 10 years ago
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Made my Arjun run that much? Hilarious Anvi. But the Ending is superb.

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