Saga of two burned hearts.....An ArDi SS(Chapter 26 up!) - Page 15

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Posted: 10 years ago
Sry for not ommenting before for the prvious chapters but mine exams are on and don't have even a little time to relax..
coming to the updates...all were awesome!!!! the story of Kansa vadh till today' is just awesome😃
waiting for for more of GoLi parts they are very cute and enjoyable
And the teasing was really cute😉
And my ArDi...whenever their part comes i go totally☺️☺️
jab unka sach me meet hoga tab jane kya mera hoga????


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Aww! I love sunsets! Especially the ones where the whole family gathers and talks! Tell ArDi that they'll meet each other very soon!

I love sunsets too! and I wrote the same thing for which I watch it!!!😳 yes, yes re! keep patience! We all know abt that pic thingy!!!😉 They can't know it! Becuz they r not govind!!!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Nice chapters Aanvi😃

thanks di!!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful Update. Waiting for ArDi moments. Make it fast.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: A13256WE

Sry for not ommenting before for the prvious chapters but mine exams are on and don't have even a little time to relax..

coming to the updates...all were awesome!!!! the story of Kansa vadh till today' is just awesome😃
waiting for for more of GoLi parts they are very cute and enjoyable
And the teasing was really cute😉
And my ArDi...whenever their part comes i go totally☺️☺️
jab unka sach me meet hoga tab jane kya mera hoga????


Tnx! was waiting for your comments!! Yes, till now we can get GoLI, but agar madhav ka first and last pyaar aa gaya, toh shayad who drauz ko bhool hi jaeynge!!!😆 Ya, ya, more teasing will come! and I will make them red like tomato!!! Arjun ka part isse bhi hilarious hoga! WHat! This was nothing! And you were blushing!!!😆 must be joking!! Main yeh soch raha hun, agar tumhara haalat iss nothing ArDi chappy mein bhi aisa halat ho raha hai, toh agar full of ArDi chappy aaenge toh kya hoga! faint!!!😆
P.S WAIT! MORE UPDATES R COMING TODAY!!
Edited by naturelover33 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ltelidevaralak

Beautiful Update. Waiting for ArDi moments. Make it fast.

YES,YES, WILL COME SOON!😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
really nice update
waiting for ardi moments
update soon next prt
waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: naturelover33

Tnx! was waiting for your comments!! Yes, till now we can get GoLI, but agar madhav ka first and last pyaar aa gaya, toh shayad who drauz ko bhool hi jaeynge!!!😆 Ya, ya, more teasing will come! and I will make them red like tomato!!! Arjun ka part isse bhi hilarious hoga! WHat! This was nothing! And you were blushing!!!😆 must be joking!! Main yeh soch raha hun, agar tumhara haalat iss nothing ArDi chappy mein bhi aisa halat ho raha hai, toh agar full of ArDi chappy aaenge toh kya hoga! faint!!!😆
P.S WAIT! MORE UPDATES R COMING TODAY!!

corrrect!!! there was nothing about ArDi😆😆 and about the full ArDI chap surely i will faint😆😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

CHAPTER TWELEVE

A NEW CITY, A NEW LIFE
They were walking for a few days. They rested many times. The rishis told them the path and they walked like blinds. And at last they entered the city. The city had it's own aura. It was Phalgun month; so there were sun kissed lights falling every where. There were two big mirrors at the entrance kept in such way that sun light fell on that mirror. And it had it's own beauty. But thses mirrors only remembered them that nasty conspiracy. Nakul saw all of them deeply in thinking. To cheer them up, he exclaimed," Wow! The city has increased much it's grandeur!"
" Yes! And I can also smell tasty foods! Maybe their foods are also tasty! Last time we didn't get the chance to taste food because arjun caught Drupad too quickly! He didn't let me taste! People of Panchal would have been more blessed if I had tasted the food!"
" Yes, Maharaj Vrikodar, we know that you are "lucky charm" for food! And the kitchen of Panchal would have been more blessed if you, the god of food, had kept his foot!!" said Arjun laughing.
" Yes, yes,. Keep enjoying, keep enjoying. You both always get happy mocking my appetite, enjoy.But remember, you will not get food cooked by me!"
" We don't need it Bhrata! Hamare mata ke haat ka khana is enough, Bhratashi! Beside we also now need of another 'mother' who can cook food with Mata. Isn't it, Jyeshth!" Arjun and Nakul winked.
" Bhratashri, maybe you can get one here! See, there are so beautiful girls! Bhrata, listen to me, if any girl proposes you na, then don't reject. Because..."
" Because we badly need a 'Bhabi'! Arjun and Nakul said and high fived. Yudhishtira's face had turned red like tomato till this time.
" Baas, baas. Enough teasing him! He is composed and intelligent! He will get one himself! Putr Nakul, if you want any Bhabi, then ask from you partner of crime. Now he is get more desperate and out of control! Parth, now I need someone who can take weight of you from my mind; then I will be happy! Besides, I also need a Guni Bahu, Parth. Mind it!" This time even Kunti had a mischievous smirk seeing her Laadla.
" Yeah, yeah, Bhrata! I totally forgot about you, huh! Was getting away from me! Bagal mein chora, aur piche bajaaye dandora! Yes, Bhrata, maybe we can get another Bhabi! Bhai, see, how many girls are staring at you! don't you remember Padmini! How she used to be like your shadow! Come on bhai, use your charm! Learn to be a flirt! Besides, Mata is also desperate to get a Bahu from you, Bhai! Come on come on, be a man! Nakul hit his biceps with Arjun teasingly. Till this time arjun turned a red tomato, but a baked one kept at burning coal. His entire body was red with embarrassment first of all because of those staring girls, and second those comments from Nakul and Mata.
" Okay, now enough of you two's blabbers, let's search a place to stay."
" Yes, Mata. See, there is a potter's house. Maybe we should ask there. Let's go"
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" Respected sir, is there any Dhramashala to stay?"
" Why? Are you all foreighners?"
" Yes, Mahodaya."
" No, youths. All are full now."
" Why?"
" King Drupad have arranged a Bhavya Mahotsava and Mela for Coming new year. Tha't why many businessmen have come here with their servants. That's why, all are full now."
" Then where we can stay?" The potter observed them.
"Are you Bhrahmins?"
" You can see us!"
" Yes, but you are telling half truth."
" The situation is that type that we can't say the truth."
" Hmm.. Understood your dilemma. You all are looking like good pesons. You all must be hungry, kyun? Come I will arrange a place to stay.
TBC
P.S: hope that I am not boring you all. actually I am not getting the right track for their meet up. but made it. I think it will take like 6 or 7 days. till then, plz wait. plz understand my situation!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Phew...have read so many chapters, all at once!
But really, I love the way the story is proceeding, sometimes it reminds me of my Dwaparyug SS.
I really liked how you explained the whole story of Krishna's birth and then Kansa-Vadha, and how you incorporated in the track if the FF.
Also, the Govind-Krishnaa bond is as it is so beautiful, and the little moments between the friends are so lovely and cute.
The pittu part was wonderful, Aanvi.
And really liked this part, where the brothers are teasing each other, glad that they entered Panchal.
How you explain the bonding between the two families is just awesome, it is so refreshing to read it.
Update soon Aanvi, waiting to read about more and about ArDi's first meeting.😳

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