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Posted: 9 years ago

CHAPTER: THIRTEEN

PAST HAUNTS AND PRESENT TAUNTS...
FLASKBACK IN BOLD
But Mahashay, we will not take any Bhiksha from you. We've come here in intention to take bhiksha only from Maharaj Drupad. We can't take anything from anyone else. Please take our service"
" Sure, youths. I will tell what you have to do later. first take rest eat, gain energy, then take about work."
" Sure, Mahashay. Let's go."
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Arjun was very elated seeing the home. That home had a sweet smell in it. That home only remembered him their sweet and small home at satasringa mountain...
flashback
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" Mata! Mata! a sweet childish voice was heard. That boy was hardly 7 or 8 years old. He was running to his mother towards the kitchen.
" Mata! Mata! See what we've got! Berries!" that little being said panting.
" Good! Putr!. And now go and divide it between your brother. And also keep some for Pitashri and choti Mata."
" Won't you eat, Mata?" The mother pecked his cheeks and said," A mother's stomach is filled with his children's appetite, Putr." she caressed his cheeks and ruffled his hairs.
" But mata, where is my gift?"
" You'l get it, putr Now go and give some to your Pitashri and Choti Mata."
" But I don't know where they are!
" Don't know?"she had a strange feeling of fear In her. because she knew only a woman can cause her husband's death. Till now she learnt to keep patience. But she had a fear for her co-wife.
" Okay, you go. I will give them."
"Her fear was only increasing. That boy also got scared seeing his mother tensed. He didn't know why she was tensed. Suddenly another boy's voice came.
" Mata! Mata! I am having some bad intutions! PLease come with me!"Her fear only increased with it. But that boy, that boy was panicked inside, maybe got to know what will happen next. She called " Arya! Arya! Where are you?"
Seeing his mother calling, he thought of searching and screamed," Pitashri! Pitashri!" He searched the entire forest, but couldn't find. Suddenly he stopped hearing his mother's heart wrenching scream. she was shivering. And suddenly screamed, " Arya!!"
flashback end
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" Arya!!" That scream still haunts him in his dreams. Which boy would want that tragedy on his birthday! Maybe that was the most dreadful experience. " Bhrata!" Sahadev came. He saw his brother crying. " What happened, Bhrata?"
" Nothing, Sahadev. Don't this house looks like the house we lived in Satasringa?"
" Maybe, Bhrata shri. I don't remember."
" But I know. It has the same smell."
" Are you thinking about that incident? Bhratashri?"
" No, Sahadev. Just remembering the past."
" Past is past, Bhrata. Forget it. Now let's go. Mata is calling us to eat.
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" Wow! such a delicious smell, Nilanjana! I can't stop myself! Let's go! What, Krishnaa! Why are you acting like a child? What if anyone sees you?" she looked around to see if anyone is there or not.
" Wait for some moment's Krishnaa. The food will be ready."
" What! some more minutes! This smell is only increasing my hunger! Nilanja, do you have any clip?"
" Why?"
" Because I will now clip my nose so that no smell comes!"
" Hahaha, Sakhi, good idea. But it will not help. Let's do something."
" What?"
" um... Go and pester your sister for something."
" What? Govind you are unbelievable, Govind!"
" No, no, Sakhi. Try it. It's fun to pester your elder ones. first pester your sister, then your father. Pester your sister for something she didn't do, and your father for something you want!"
" UMM.. I will tell Jiji to cook and Pitashri to take me for a tour!"
"Yes, Sakhi. And this tour will be life changing for you!" and smirked.
" Govind,You are too good! You gave me a idea for which I always thought!"
" Now go quickly!"
" Yes, yes!"
TBC...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: 8520NK

Phew...have read so many chapters, all at once!

But really, I love the way the story is proceeding, sometimes it reminds me of my Dwaparyug SS.
I really liked how you explained the whole story of Krishna's birth and then Kansa-Vadha, and how you incorporated in the track if the FF.
Also, the Govind-Krishnaa bond is as it is so beautiful, and the little moments between the friends are so lovely and cute.
The pittu part was wonderful, Aanvi.
And really liked this part, where the brothers are teasing each other, glad that they entered Panchal.
How you explain the bonding between the two families is just awesome, it is so refreshing to read it.
Update soon Aanvi, waiting to read about more and about ArDi's first meeting.😳

Glad that you came back! But at first you update your ff!! waiting for it!!!Embarrassed yes, your SS was all dreamy... that snaan, holi, romantic moments... Uff, di , tumne toh mujhe maar hi daala tha uss SS se!!!😆 yah, I had and have to think a lot for how to go on with the track...🥱 Don't worry, soon ParAv will come in competition!!😆 Yes , at last they entered... But I am thinking that I am boring u all with these tracks.. kya kare, track hai hi aisi! Dimaag mein idead aa rahe hain, aur Balaji ki tarah khichta hi jaa raha hai...😆 Ya, ya, it's come soon... come soon... keep patience! Maybe you'll get a surprise like That ShaJa HUG!!!😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing updates! Loved the flashback and the naughtiness! Do update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome chapters Aanvi😃
Loved the bonding of brothers❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome updates Anu😃
Loved the bonding and naughtiness of the Brothers😃
Great going dear!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Amazing updates! Loved the flashback and the naughtiness! Do update soon!

Thanks!😳 Glad to know that u liked it!! Will update soon!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Awesome chapters Aanvi😃

Loved the bonding of brothers❤️

Thnaks nonie di!!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: A13256WE

Awesome updates Anu😃

Loved the bonding and naughtiness of the Brothers😃
Great going dear!!!

Thanks dear!!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

CHAPTER FOURTEEN

A PRANK!!!
She ran towards the training quarter. It was the resting time for senapati. So, the best time to pester her. Suddenly, Shrikhandini felt two slender hands enveloping her neck. She immediately understood that this is none other than her sister.
" What happened?"
" Nothing, Jiji. But I think you forgot something!"
" What! I forgot something! Hey Bhagwan! Now what did I forgot! Did I forgot to consult with vedji for Pitashri's medicines?" she looked at her.
" Uffo! No! Try to remember..."
" Then.. Was any messenger coming?"
" Uhhuuu!"
" Oh, haan, I remember, Pitashri had told me to send guptchar to the south with picture Then maybe..."
" No! Nothing related to state! It's related to me!"
" What?" she gave her an ignorant look.
" Uffo, Jiji! It's my sixth month of birth!"
" Oh, yes! I totally forgot it! Yes, I have to do tilak and arati, go to mandir, call raaj pandit, gurumata, send messege to Guru drona's ashram, so many work to do! Hey ram!"
" Jiji, jiji, jiji, forget them, but what will you give to me?
" What should I give you? Infact why should I give you?"
" Because... because it's sixth month of my birth!"
" Come on, it's its not your birthday! When will your birthday come, I promise I will give you a gift."
"NO! You need to give me a gift now now now! " she acted like a stubborn child.
" Why!" her hand were on her hips.
" Oh, come on! Mnay get many gifts for silly occasions! And it's big day for me! Can't you take my request!" she puppy eyed pouting.
" Okay! Okay! What do you want?"
" Yay! Come I will tell."
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It was month of phalgun;that means Janmtithi of Phalgun. And it was his birthday! At first Bheem came and gave him such a tight hug that arjun was not able to breath.
" Happy birthday, my little notorious brother!!!"
" Okay, okay Bhrata! Now leave me! give others also a chance to greet!"
" Oh yes!" Arjun coughed, took a deep breath and sighed. One by one everyone greeted him. Yudhishthira gave him a book of arjun's choice. Bheem gave him ladoos and achars made by him. Nakul gifted him a very cute rabbit and an extarodinary feather of a bird which can't be found anywhere and which he recently discovered. Sahadeva gave him a tithi of whole year ahead for arjun written in a big leaf. And at last his mother gifted him a Rudraksh mala written om with rudraksh. That was extraordinary piece.
" Wow! Mata! From where did you get it?"
" Your father gave me this pendant after the first expansion after our marriage. And now I am giving it to you. And you must give it to either my Bahu or my poutras!"
" What mata! You again started! I told you na I will marry after my elder marry!"
" So do I look unmarried to you, Arjun!"
" No, but eldest!"
" Now don't argue. The main thing is you need to marry within this year."
" Yes, bhratashri, it's written in your tithi that you will marry this year!" Sahadev stated.
" What!" Arjun opened the tithi."
" But..."
" Now no ifs and buts! Now go and eat.
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" Where are you taking me, Krishnaa!" Shrikhandini was blind folded and walking through the corridors.
" Wait! Wait! Hmm.. now see!" She lightly blindfolded her eyes. Her face was a sight to see. As if her eyes were popping out and her mouth was opened.
" Wha...What! Kitchen. Now what prank is it krishnaa!" She was totally aware of her siblings' naughtiness. One day they also stole Drupad's sword and kept it and the back of Satyajit's seat! That poor guy was about to execute! Such dangerous were there pranks!
" Nothing much , jiji1 But you had promised me that you'll do whatever I want!
" Yes, but..."
" Now what but, haan? Learn something and make it for me! I want to taste your food! Please! Pretty please!" she pouted like a small child and puppy eyed. Shrikhandini couldn't deny her seeing such cute face of her sister.
" Okay! Okay! I will do it. is that okay?" and took a deep breath.
" Yes!"
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Draupadi was excitedly looking at her sister and Nilanjana. who were cooking. She was seeing her sister who was struggling to cook nicely. " how nice my family is! My sister is so caring! Will my life partner be the same?" But suddenly she came out of her thought hearing something's sound.
" When will you both finish?"
" It'll take time, naa!" Soon the kheer was ready.
" Uff! It is so tough to work at kitchen! How do you all manage!"
" So do we also ever went to any battle! We don't even know how to hold sword which you do with ease!"
" Krishnaa, battle is not only fought with weapons. We also need to battle in our mind; with our emotions.. As a boat opposite the current struggles with the current to go on. our emotions is like that current; the boat are our souls, and the shore is our destination on our life. That current only slow us down to go towards our destination of our life."
" Really! Do we need to fight in our minds?"
" Yes, Krishnaa. Even with yourself. Many situations come in which emotions come in path; that time we need to suppress our anger and emotions. That's toughest battle that anyone can fight. And those who emerge victorious in this battle, are the true warriors; Fighting with ownself; alone... You know, bow and arrorws are not the best weapons; a person's determination is the best weapon. Those who keep this weapon intact, only they are victorious in battle of life."
" That means, weapons are not needed!"
" Yes. physical war is only a part of this life's battle."
" Even I can be a warrior!"
" Yes! Just keep yourself united; don't let yourself break down, You'll be a warrior; a greatest warrior of all time."All these words had great effect on her. Maybe this training moulded her to a determined person; passionate to be a warrior; greatest of all time... Maybe this words were making her ready; ready to face a battle... Maybe many...
TBC...
Edited by naturelover33 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Excellent! How beautifully did you merge Shikhandini's battle in the kitchen with Draupadi's upcoming battles in life! Their pranks were hilarious as well!

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