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JazzyM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Lovely. Heart wrenching too... The ending...Arjuna come back to your Krishnna...ouch...the yearning of the heart...you have penned it beautifully

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: JazzyM
Lovely. Heart wrenching too... The ending...Arjuna come back to your Krishnna...ouch...the yearning of the heart...you have penned it beautifully

. Thank you. Beauty lies in the passionate love of ArDi. I just expressed it in words.

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

How can you be so heartless, Why do you turn away from me? My Krishnaa can not be like this Need I say it in words? The moment I won you in the swayamwar,I enthroned you in my heart. It was the prestine. moment, I felt proud of myself. Krishnaa is mine.Forever and ever as long as the stars shine. Little did I know that my dreams will crash down,my love is to be shared I can not inhale your fragrance I can not listen to your heart beat That makes my name sound so special Still I Waited for you. I know krishnaa's love, I know krishnaa's heart.

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JazzyM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Well written...Arjun's torment that his wife is to be shared but he could not stop the sharing...his anguish...so well written. We rarely read about Arjun's POV on the sharing issue. Arjun's character is always focused on what needs to be done...the Dharam needs...his love for Abhimanyu, his devotion to Subadhra...his utmost soul connection to Krishna but never about his anguish on Draupadi...

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ltelidevaralak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Your lotus eyes haunted me wherever I go I can't answer them why did I enter your chamber. Why did I break the vow,why did I prefer pilgrimage. Season of love consoled me ,Mother Nature caressed me. Your Krishnaa not yours Arjun your Eldest claimed her Arjun. My heart broke into pieces I can not see your face I can not bear your anguish I swear I wished to Run away into oblivion ,disappear into eternity. move away from Krishnaa, As far as I can Mother Nature held me in her lap Season of love assured me. Krishnaa is yours Arjun Come back to her Arjun. No one can claim her soul Arjun Krishnaa is yours Arjun.

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

I roamed through forests,I wandered in valleys. I took solace under waters I climbed up snowy peaks. I visited sacred places I met revered sages Ulupi 's scintillating beauty ,Chitra's royal demenear. Subhadra's soothing presence Arjun survived Arjun sailed through the pain of separation. Only to see your face,to feel your love

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ltelidevaralak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

My pet birds flew into his palms,He caressed them lovingly. Krishnaa Arjun loves you he misses you he longs for you. Don't turn him away you know he is truthful my pet birds sang in chorus. Arjun smiled his disarming smile .I lost myself in his beauty.

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Draupadi walked up to the garden Arjun followed her there... The season of love followed them too,Rohini smiled at Chandrama. Krishna smiled at Rukmini,Satya raised her eyebrows.. Krishnaa closed her eyes Her love stood behind her waiting for her to say. Krishnaa loves you Arjun forever and ever.

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Will this moonlight wait for my sake ? Will this cool breeze blow over forever? Could the season of love bring my joy back? I still can't decide I am in trance.

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

The season of love pleaded with me, Krishnaa , Don't be so harsh. Look at your luscious locks, They yearn for Phalgun's touch, Look at your lotus eyes They long to see Phalgun's beauty, Seems like your tender lips ,parted as if to sing the truth of your life. I love you Arjun,Don't leave me again Arjun,,come back to me Arjun.

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