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Sirisha Nandini Jala

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Itelidevara, this is simply amazing. I love the ArDi romance. So beautiful. I loved every line of this wonderful poem. Have you written any Mahabharat fanfictions? Keep up the great work! Good luck in all your future endeavors.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: NandiniJala27
Itelidevara, this is simply amazing. I love the ArDi romance. So beautiful. I loved every line of this wonderful poem. Have you written any Mahabharat fanfictions? Keep up the great work! Good luck in all your future endeavors.

Nice to meet another ArDi admirer. Thank you for your good words. In the forum, 'The FateFul Evening " is my FF based on Mahabharata, dealing with Arjun and Draupadi's love ,suffering etc. It is their journey since they first met each other. Another is the discussion,Did Draupadi Loved Arjun More? Based on the Epic.exploring the facts that lead to say Yes. She did love him more. Hope you go through them and enjoy.

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Why am I not able to protect my wife? Why did'nt I raise my voice against her being staked? How can I look into her eyes ,the mirrors of her love for me? Who would redeem me from my sin that started with Sharing her with my brothers and now Allowing her to be the victim of my silence

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Krishna came and said forgive him Krishnaa If you don't forgive him you won't forgive yourself. You should seek solace in each other. You should help your Arjun redeem himself.

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I looked at my Arjun who came to the lake. Where I sit reminiscing the beautiful moments. Fighting with the dreadful memories, He sat staring into the water. He clasped my hand as tight as he can silence spoke his mind.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

I bent ny head on to his shoulder. I forgave him for his silence. I knew only he could pull me out From the dreadful memory of my insult. He could pave the way to punish the culprits. He pulled me closer assured me again. Season of love will soothen our hearts. Let us fight our destiny Together always together.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Nonie12345
Wonderful 😊

Thank you.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

The forest life is serene The forest life is gruesome. Arjun looked like a volcano that may unleash fire At any time, the fire should be directed to that who. Deserve to be burnt who will turn him the deadliest. Who will show the path to redemption ? I prayed for him. Vedvyas came with the answer he want,He lead my Arjun. Towards the silvery Kailas to get the grace of shiv Sankar Krishnaa again has to bid farewell to her soulmate with a. Fervent prayer,May you get success May your path be victorious. But come back to me Arjun,Krishnaa can't live without you.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

The Kamyaka forest looked lustreless where did the beauty go. Why is it so silent around The gandiv tankar that offers solace. Not greeted me today.The hazel eyes that smile at me. When I go to the lake not seen anywhere I came back. To the hermitage to my loneliness to my heartbreak.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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I lied down by the lake my tresses falling into the water. The dark blue clouds passed above,they reminded my. Arjun's complexion,his curly locks and hazel eyes haunted me. Day and night I remembered my Phalgun meditating on shiva His Gandiv by his side in the snowy Himalayas chanting. Om Namah Sivaya om Namah Sivaya om Namah Sivaya.

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