The huge termoil of Karna's inner feelings is so beautifully depicted through ur wonderful language. Frankly I never admired Karna, just respected him for the good things he did in his life inspite of all disparities. Well I liked this last part a lot. How he tries to understand hi brother Yudi ! How he is trying to leave all anger n anguish...nd beautifully thought, he is loving nd hating nd loving Kunti!!!
This is really going to be very interesting. Hopefully we will be reading something really different. Though i m late but this works all d time.
All the best!