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Love how you portray feelings of Yudi! Appreciate you writing on him as few can understand him..

Originally posted by: varaali

...True to his word, Yudhishthira never broke down -

not when Bhima went missing...

not when they were trudging through forests, escaping the lac palace...

not even when they were made to lose everything...

not when they were reduced to being servants...

Not until...he saw ...his own sons ...dead.

The amount he cried shows how much grief he had accumulated in his heart over the years...

Brilliantly portrayed, Sema.

Feeling so blessed didi that you liked it 😊 I really feel his heart in this way. Keep reading.

Originally posted by: Angela_Grokes

Beautiful ! Beautiful dear.

The way you expressed the emotions it really was felt by heart.

So true so pious and so beautiful. I love the way you right.

Yudhishtir's emotions were expressed so well that I felt as of he himself wrote it. Just beautiful!👏

Thank you very much Angela 😊 yes I do feel his heart 😳 glad that you felt like he himself is writing 😳 this is the best praise I got so far 😊 keep reading 😊

Originally posted by: KHUSHI-99

This was so touching Urmila di,for me this was your best update so far,It was just exactly how I think Yudhishthir would have ever felt...so high on emotions,beautiful..wonderful...! you have a long way to go...btw will he write diaries even at gurukul..I mean I asked out of curiosity😊

Thank you very much Muskan 😊 glad that a true fan of him liked it so much 😊 he will write diary at the end of Gurukul, he was very poor in archery so would not get enough time to write diaries while practicing overtime 😛

Originally posted by: Yagyaseni

Beautiful, devika!!!! Truly marvelous and poignant!!! It was beyond words!!! The way you showed that having patience is dharm and also the very difficult thing is truly commendable!!! Awesome!!

Thank you so much Jiji, glad that you liked it 😊 yes Aaryaputra's patience is a part of his Dharma as well 😊 keep reading 😊

Originally posted by: Pamalo

Wow di I have no words to express how I'm feeling after reading this part it shows how much yudhi had to endure being the first born he took care of his mother and younger brothers never once thinking of his own. Thank you for the pm and I'm waiting more eagerly than before to know what will happen in hastinapur plz do continue soon di ⭐️

Thank you very much dear 😊 if a true lover of him like you is saying so then it's really a blessing for me 😊 I will update the Hastinapur chap very soon, keep reading 😊

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream

OUTSTANDING!!
This piece of writing is truly one of the best i have come across
Apart from the writing itself you have captured the underlying emotion so well...truly amazing
I especially loved " Death is nothing but an illusion, a mere change of garment which is called body"...what a metaphor!!!!

Thank you very much dear, glad that you loved it so much 😊 & that line is just the same thing which is told in Geeta by Lord Krishna 😊 so main credit goes to Him only 😃 keep reading 😊

Originally posted by: shiningstar77

This update is simply MARVELLOUS.👏👏👏...am truely searching for the words to praise U,Urmiladi...Yudithisthir's situation was very poor...i could feel his feelings...well depicted...hats off..👏👏.his thoughts about the future...his mother...his brothers...oh...fate is really cruel...explanation about the Death ...are wah...u r awesome😛...what a piece of writing...then this one especially"Dharma itself is the greatest reward one can obtain in one's life! After getting this any other reward should not be expected! Dharma does not hurt, Maa, rather it's the root of all happiness! It's our own Karma which hurts us!"...perfect lines.👏...Arjun N Nakul...poor boys...but they could visualize their father's image n character in their elder bro's one...but for Yudhistir.?...hmm...really a iron man he was..
thanks for the pm...cont soon😊

Thank you so so so much dear brother 😊 feeling blessed that you liked it so much 😊 yes he faced such anguish from his childhood only & that's why his life was so miserable 😭 glad that you liked that line, I really feel that it's very true 😊 yes Arjun & Nakul already got their father in Yudhishthir but our poor Dharmaraj had no way to get a father's love 😭
will continue soon, keep reading! Jai Shri Krishna!

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

You Simply Made Me Cry Di With Your Heart-wrenching Rendition !! In This part You Not Only Portrayed Yudhishthir's Pain, But Also Kunti's And The Other Four Brothers.

Feeling blessed to know that you became so emotional after reading this, dear 😊 I really could feel his heart so my words became painful. keep reading 😊 Jai Shri Krishna!