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Beautiful, Devika!! Poignant and intriguing!! I am left speechless by this!!! Adarsh Putra ka dharm nibhaya hai arya ne!!! Aur un aashru on ke pich ki bhavanaye tho shabdho se parya hai!!! You made a perfect balance of everything which surely awestruck me!! Little bit of teasin by Aryaputra Arjun, fun by Aryaputra Bheem and seriousness and enigma of Aryaputra Yudhishtir!!! Hats off!!

Originally posted by: Yagyaseni

Beautiful, Devika!! Poignant and intriguing!! I am left speechless by this!!! Adarsh Putra ka dharm nibhaya hai arya ne!!! Aur un aashru on ke pich ki bhavanaye tho shabdho se parya hai!!! You made a perfect balance of everything which surely awestruck me!! Little bit of teasin by Aryaputra Arjun, fun by Aryaputra Bheem and seriousness and enigma of Aryaputra Yudhishtir!!! Hats off!!

@ Angela...Tujhe to mai!! Mera first place hai!!

Thank you very much Jiji 😊 yes our Aarya is adarsh putra always 😃 I wanted to keep both funny & emotional taste in this chapter & I am glad that you noticed the both sides of it 😊

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Wow Di, Bheem Is Always The First To Obey His Mother When It Comes To Eating ! And You Truly Won Over My Heart By The Part Where He Realizes His Duty, And Decides To Sacrifice His Own Will, For His Father's Will !

Thank you very much Proteeti 😊 yes Bheem is very obedient when it comes to eating 😆 & yes Yudhishthir has a basic sacrificing nature & he uses to think of others before himself 😊

Originally posted by: Angela_Grokes

It was really beautiful dear.

This work really compels me to think again on my thoughts on Yudhishtir.

Really, this chappy too, was beautifully penned. With great care and love that Yudhishtir's feelings are expressed, I feel blessed to be a reader of this work. Loved this update. It was really sweet and brought the father-son bond between Yudhishtir and Pandu out really well.😳⭐️👏

Thank you very much Angela 😊 actually I found that very few think about Yudhishthir so I started this FF 😊 & I really have a deep love towards him 😊
Actually we can't see a proper father-son relationship in most of the serials & novels so this scene came into my mind to fill in that void 😊 glad that you liked it! Keep reading! 😊

i read both chapters together. loved the shlokas & yudishtir's confusion over how it is possible. Even when we all read it we find it so beautiful for a moment we think this is so right & we try to feel love towards all but we dwell into it more we think if it is really possible(with the so bad world we live in).

Wow...very impressive...UrmilaDi...u simply rocking...Hats Off.👏👏..
Bheem...hahaha...loved his hilarious attitude...he was right,first preference should be given to Food rather than other discussions during eating time.😆..
Nakul N Sahadev asusal behaving as cute darlings of kuntima...
Arjun...he was very sweet...
Yudhistir...wow...what a man he was...full of patience,truthfulness,dedication.😳..respecting his father's words without uttering a single word...loved his nature...
its somewhat worrying me when finish reading the updates becoz its not a long one...better give long updates from next time if possible.. waiting
thanks for the pm😊

Really loved this! It is true that Yudi was always a reluctant emperor, but you have put the thoughts behind why that is so. Wonderful imagery and writing skills.
You have also brought out the natures of Arjun and Bheem also so well with so few words. Great going.

This was really awesome Di,please continue and thanks for the PM😊