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alina.b

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Sorry like button is not working! Very nice and funny! Please continue soon and thanks for the PM.

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: shweta2728
Sorry like button is not working! Very nice and funny! Please continue soon and thanks for the PM.

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Yagya

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Duryodhan!!!! Very cute and a emotional ride, I must say!!! But continue the OS or please start a new one!!!lovely update!!! Thanks for the PM!!

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Yagyaseni
Duryodhan!!!! Very cute and a emotional ride, I must say!!!
Thanks...I like his Positive side😊
But continue the OS or please start a new one!!!lovely update!!! Thanks for the PM!!

Hey thanks for commenting first dear🤗

I planned this os in three parts only and I would have continued it if I could write all Happy things but you know I cannot😭 I am sorry for that

I will write something else too but don't know when?

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Yagya

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sanskrutiii

Hey thanks for commenting first dear🤗
I planned this os in three parts only and I would have continued it if I could write all Happy things but you know I cannot😭 I am sorry for that
I will write something else too but don't know when?

I understand!!! But do write soon!! Though i love Gandivdhaari i respect vijaydhaari a lot!!

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Yagyaseni

I understand!!! But do write soon!! Though i love Gandivdhaari i respect vijaydhaari a lot!!

Sure dear as something strike me I will pen it down😊

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...Hemangi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Wow what an amazing update on Karna-Duryodhan 😊

You have beautifully captured the true essence of their friendship in your words.

Dury was so concerned for Karna... his anger and emotions flowed in his entire convo with Karna that his dearest friend is not looking at the other side of his good deed. He fears that some greedy & politically shrewd people will take advantage of Karna's good deeds. 😔

And Karna knew that no matter how its vows side effects may effect him & his family, his dear friend will be always be by his side.

And Supriya again acting naughty & innocent 😆 Karna came for his meal on time shocking Vrushali. He decided to be punctual and complete the list of Supriya successfully before she hands out another long list in front of him. See his Vows ke Side Effects has some positivity too atleast for his family. 😆

This was ur last part in this OS, but still I would like you to add more chapters on it. I love reading ur updates... 😛

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Brahmaputra

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Posted: 10 years ago

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What did you do with my Jyeshth Bhrata?🤣

This is amazing. I really loved the way you portrayed the epic friendship. Had this been shown in the star mb too!

don't stop this here. I wanna read more. I love reading stories on Karna as a family man. That part is completely missing from the epic.

Waise what were the 5th and 37th from the list of Supriya?

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.Vaikartana.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Wonderful. Dear I read the second and third parts in A go and totally loved them Supriya is so naughty.Her list had me rofling Bechara mera Angraj..he must have realised the consequences of such a vow.And his romance...☺️I envy Supriya..

And a special thanks for the third part.KaDu..the best ever buddies.Thankyou for writing it so cutely and beautifully.Loved their bond and Dury's concern for his friend.And please dont make it end.Continue..😳

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panchaali

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Looking up at the inky blackness of the night sky Karna saw it was deep and pristine, ice cold, and the sense of eternity that took over his mind was spiritual in nature, like a rare rapture that few people experience. Of all sizes they were, some were faint yellows, a few dull red, and the whites were like perfect diamonds worth thousands or maybe millions. Then westward, his eye caught one of true blue, and it twinkled at him, just for him it seemed, and He bid it hello with a slow wave of my hand. "But that's just me, connected with the universe where all life is one it makes me feel that No one is ever alone", He whispered to himself with a smile

this part is lovely, very well written..love the thoughts beneath it...love Duryadhan's concern for his bestest Mitra...

What if someone asks you your throne would you give away that too?",

"No one would ask me this...you can trust people for not being so greedy", Karna replied

"Mitra...", Karna tried to say something but Duryodhan broke out and asked him angrily "What if someone asks you your Kavach and Kundals you would shed off that too? Won't it make you vulnerable??"

Karna first went white and then slowly his face gained colour "What would anyone get from them? I still couldn't understand what good they are going to do to me? And how can these accessories make me vulnerable I fight with my might and power now I think they are taking away credit of my bravery", he said softly but in sharp voice..." But if such condition arrises What do you think... how will I remove it Should I just peel it off or use a knife?", he added with his usual dry humour trying to make light of his worry

So nicely written👏

If I come to you tomorrow morning and beg you would you reconsider your vow?", he asked as he was left with no ray of hope

"well umm...but I doubt would you be able to get up at such a early hour Mitra?", Karna asked with a giggle but he couldn't quite catch Duryodhans expressions so he though that he had made a big mistake

Duryodhan stared at Karna for some time and then burst out laughing, "Oh Mitra you caught my laziness very correctly dear", he said trying to stop laughing

OMG so cute and funny😆 love Kadu moment

his Mitras love was as pure as his family's love for him and this incidence was a proof of his innocent and childish heart

so truly said about Duryadhan

Karna took his hand tenderly, "Mitra I can do anything for you I want you to be my strength not weakness...I want you to stand by me as you did that day in the arena"

There were tears flowing from Duryodhanas eyes and he didn't wish to stop them, he hugged Karna tightly and said "Even if the world goes against me I will always be there for you Mitra"Karna too hugged him back and replied, "You are my biggest strength Mitra...Thankyou", The light of friendship that was reflected from their hug was intense and luminous than even the light of full moon!

awwwn sooo nice just can't stop myslef from quoting it..

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