As The Arrow Moves- The Voice of Dhananjaya Arjuna Chap 19 on PG 46 - Page 3

I so loved the first part Brish. Please continue.

Thank u so much guys... please keep reading!!!! I will update evryday if possible!! Thank you so much for the love!

brishti..!!! its brilliant dear..please pm me the next update..😊 😊 and really...choosing such a complicated character...it takes guts!!! kudos to u love

B... my honey!!!! 🤗
u are super se uper!! this is like wow!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏
i feel like reading a pov book!! this is standard high class stuff dear!! you need to find a publisher!! 😳

n continue soon!! 😳

This is awesome! Love your writing. Can you please pm me

Brish my love how come I dint realise???

I can pm all but u will have to send me a buddy request please :):)

Originally posted by: frappie

Brish my how come I dint realise???

Brish this is very beautiful ...firstly I loved the way you described naive Arjuna secondly the line which says your hands are made for qoods was just awesome indeed as a wanderer he spent his entire life in forests ...And his first encounter with the weapon called bow which later became his life was very well described ..,And lastly I loved the way you subtly described the reason for him being referred Paarth ...The paarth pritha dynamics were well described ...Now I,am looking forward for Arjuns journey from Paarth to Parantapa / Jishnu ...Great start B...