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Brish this is very beautiful ...firstly I loved the way you described naive Arjuna secondly the line which says your hands are made for qoods was just awesome indeed as a wanderer he spent his entire life in forests ...And his first encounter with the weapon called bow which later became his life was very well described ..,And lastly I loved the way you subtly described the reason for him being referred Paarth ...The paarth pritha dynamics were well described ...Now I,am looking forward for Arjuns journey from Paarth to Parantapa / Jishnu ...Great start B...
I won't say thank you to you.. 😆 but before being Paarth I think Kaunteya will be opt. I did not refer to him as Maheshwasha right now because I want to describe his journey first.. Keep reading baby 😳
