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hai my dears this is my first piece of writing i cud not stop myself 4m writing so its arjun's pov when abhimanyu was killed so here it goes.
Karna left his first arrow on abhimanyu

Arjun's pov
i was fighting with the kaurava sena it was more like one man show coz the soldiers were no match to me.I was not feeling too well not in physical state but mentally my mind was screaming to me go find others something is wrong it was just a constant thought that was in the back of my head until suddenly Madhav jerked back a little i could not see his face but i felt more than see that something was not right.My instincts which were screaming to me from the beginning reached a very high point now it was telling go to your brothers & Abhimanyu go now but before this thought was over he flinched again & i felt scared i didnt know what to do but i was sure of one thing that something terrible is happening & i could not do anything.Then not heeding to my instincts of jumping from the chariot & to go search my brothers & Abhimanyu i started to shower my arrows once more.This time Madhav flinched so violently that i could not help but ask myself if he was in pain,he replied yes he was in pain no one can escape from time even God can't & that was exactly the moment that i knew today will be the day when my life will change forever that too in a bad way.I felt a sharp pain in my chest like someone had pulled my heart out beat it with a mace then pierced it with a knife that too not only pierced but twisting it for so long that the pain was unbearable.My hands started shaking i could not even lift them my whole body was like it was in fire my father instincts were shouting at me that my son needed me i have to be there for him.I felt more than know that i was crying i didnt realise when the tears came why they came nothing it was like seeing the whole world crumbling in front of you but you can do nothing except see it crumble taking with it everything everyone you cherish & love leaving you alone to get tortured in the memories.It was the worst pain being left behind & right now i knew that one of the most prized precious possession of mine is leaving me & i cant do anything to stop it because it was the cruel destiny's decision.





hai i dont noe whether arjun knew that smething was happening particuarly to Abhimanyu or not but i made this with the assumption that arjun knew tht abhimanyu is dieing.I know this is stupid but just wanted to write my feelings if you want i'll continue but only if i get any response plz do like & comment.

yours,
Anya.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its Awesome anu..!!!!❤️👏liked it alot😊
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Originally posted by: anshikashaheer

Its Awesome anu..!!!!❤️👏liked it alot😊


thank u so much dear😃 it means alot
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank u dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice Os .
Thanks for Sharing.
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Originally posted by: -SHAIVI-

Nice Os .
Thanks for Sharing.


welcome & thank u
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Such An Emotional Piece Of Writing !
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beautiful update anya wish it was lil longer pls continue soon!

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