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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: riti4u

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">@simu - sure dear.. I will be sending PMs for this one too... just was busy so could not send... will definately send for 4th part...😊</font>

Okie :)

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panchaali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: ...Diala...
Panchu.. you dont have a chance.. Karna is our baby more than Radha's 😉

No way, you two fake mommies

My Aarya's luck was not that bad he got a good mom i.e. Radha Maa

now get lost fake mommies 😡

Edited by panchaali - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Awww Karna knows your name

Huh Riti u must log in n inform us on AT that u are interviewing Karna n he happily replying .. we all have so many thing to ask n I cud profess my love for him😆

just kidding .. wonderful update RITI .. loved it .. eager to read more

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riti4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: SayaneeH.Lecter
Awww Karna knows your name

Huh Riti u must log in n inform us on AT that u are interviewing Karna n he happily replying .. we all have so many thing to ask n I cud profess my love for him😆

just kidding .. wonderful update RITI .. loved it .. eager to read more

😳 yeah he knows my name😉

thanks a lot for liking and commenting dear🤗...😃..will soon update 😊

Well about professing love..there is lot of competition😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: panchaali

No way, you two fake mommies

My Aarya's luck was not that bad he got a good mom i.e. Radha Maa

now get lost fake mommies 😡

😆😆 you are too cute😛

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panchaali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: riti4u

😆😆 you are too cute😛

yaap that I am 😳

but you should not look at ur son in that way right!!!

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panchaali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

waiting for the next update 😃

plzz Karna should talk more than you in this update.. 😃

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riti4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Part 4
As time stood still ..
As birds going their home sang their melody along
...He looked at me melting my heart ..
Those unspoken words were on his lips it seems at last...
"I was born as a mistake of a pious woman... a mistake which became my destiny forever.. She chose to abandon me ...When mothers take their children and feed them milk...She gave me up at the mercy of Ganga River.. I wanted to blame her for all my misfortunes in life...but it was never her..it was me ... Only Me..."

He paused for a moment...he turned his back...and was lost in thoughts...I could see the anger he still had for his mother..somewhere subdued due to his generous heart ...but still there in his words .. He called her that woman...not mother.. I sighed looking at him ...How it must have felt when your own mother had abandoned you ..refused to accept you..

"I was lucky enough to have Radha Ma in my life... God was too kind with me ...She was my savior..my guardian angel... sent to give me shield in this harsh world... She raised me...loved me more than her children...She gave me my identity .. I could only give her back tears in return... She never asked me anything..If she would have just once...I would have given up anything...But she never did.. She always wanted to see me happy..Something that I could not give her... My pain and struggle in life caused her more agony...I wish I could have slept more often in her lap but ..."

He stopped again... his voice trembling a bit..I moved towards him...He looked back at me..and finally said...

"You know Riti... How one feels when society finds you a misfit... Its just burns you inside when your skills and your worth is acknowledged with your caste..and birth.. My father served as charioteer..He was an honorable man.. a man of his principles..His devotion to his duty was unquestionable...Still when his son went out with a bow in his hand.. they called him names... they question his authority to take a bow in hand when his father is only allowed to hold those reins... It broke my father's heart.. and not only his... Another father cried above... which I sensed in his heat... in those burning rays firing those who were crushing his son's soul..."

I was numbed ..my voice choked as I asked him...

"Are you okay.."

He smiled..

"I am fine... Just some memories keep haunting...Some questions coming back in mind...What if she would have accepted me...What if society had accepted me...Look around Riti...You will find so many Karnas around... trying to make place in this society where influential and powerful just crush those innocent dreams brutally.. Thats why I say..nothing changed much..."

He got me into thinking... I was in my thoughts... when I heard his voice again...

"I did some grave mistakes in my life ...I wish I could turn them back...but I cant... I know I will never be forgiven for them..."

I knew what was coming next... And I was eager to know his side..for I have seen many blames on him for those choices...for those words..for those deeds...but I wanted to see those marks engraved on his heart for the same...

Right or wrong...whatever he was...He was just a human..We all make mistakes in our life..But that guilt...that feeling ..I wish I would not have done that.. this feeling itself is killing...

To be continued...

(Last Part coming after this...soon😳 One more thing I know i kind of turned the story a bit serious... So let me know if you want to keep uplifting mood here.. sometimes i just go back to my original writing style😆)

Edited by riti4u - 11 years ago

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Justitia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Great update Riti!!

Please continue - OS just got interesting!!

Can't wait for next update!! 😊

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panchaali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#80

wonderful update 👏

this things are needed...

I loved these lines specially 😃

You will find so many Karnas around... trying to make place in this society where influential and powerful just crush those innocent dreams brutally.. Thats why I say..nothing changed much..."

but I thought he might have found peace, coz now those struggling men and women are the brick of this society...they make India..😃

Rick people want to be richer so their souls are sold...

even if he had done mistakes (which even most righteous people of that era also did), lost war..he wins our heart remains with those struggling souls who build the society...

History rarely remembers people who lose wars, they mostly remain as villains or just losers..

see the aura of Karna even after losing he was portrayed so great

why in the clan of Chandravansis he was described as the son of Surya!!!

Surya is the just a star...it is the aura of the person...who enlightened all, asking for nothing in return...

even moon gets its light from Sun

Karna belonging from the losers side also described as son of Surya this is no coincidence...

when History speak so greatly about a hero from the losers side, then he is more than a Hero...

So don't keep my Mritunjaya in pain anymore...give him reasons to be glad..😃

but you write masterpieces I should not interfere 😛

and sorry if all these sounds like a lecture actually its night, I am drowsy and in a romantic mood😳

so Many Karna avis in day is the reason behind it 😳

Edited by panchaali - 11 years ago