An Encounter with Karna (OS)Last Part on Pg23 - Page 9

Originally posted by: -Shani-

Great update Riti!!

Please continue - OS just got interesting!!

Can't wait for next update!! 😊

Originally posted by: panchaali

wonderful update 👏

Thank you dear😳

this things are needed...

I loved these lines specially 😃

You will find so many Karnas around... trying to make place in this society where influential and powerful just crush those innocent dreams brutally.. Thats why I say..nothing changed much..."

but I thought he might have found peace, coz now those struggling men and women are the brick of this society...they make India..😃

Rick people want to be richer so their souls are sold...

even if he had done mistakes (which even most righteous people of that era also did), lost war..he wins our heart remains with those struggling souls who build the society...

History rarely remembers people who lose wars, they mostly remain as villains or just losers..

see the aura of Karna even after losing he was portrayed so great

why in the clan of Chandravansis he was described as the son of Surya!!!

Surya is the just a star...it is the aura of the person...who enlightened all, asking for nothing in return...

even moon gets its light from Sun

Karna belonging from the losers side also described as son of Surya this is no coincidence...

when History speak so greatly about a hero from the losers side, then he is more than a Hero...

So don't keep my Mritunjaya in pain anymore...give him reasons to be glad..😃

I dont like to see him sad too.....but just trying to bring out his inner feelings on events that happened in his life... ofcourse he will smile...just wait and watch...😳...I mean read..😆

but you write masterpieces I should not interfere 😛

and sorry if all these sounds like a lecture actually its night, I am drowsy and in a romantic mood

😳hmmm...

so Many Karna avis in day is the reason behind it

Yeah i know..they were awesome...

Originally posted by: ...Diala...

Ritima.. great update and as us said it is serious.. why dont you make it lovely and a little flirty 😉 😆

Originally posted by: Raghuji

Riti,

Nice one, keep going , don't change the mood or tone. It's good this way

Originally posted by: riti4u

how about me consoling him with a hug...😳( sorry panchu)..what say sauten ji😉

yeah i know...its just that my mood while writing this one was lil gloomy...so it just came out this way😳

Have to say also lot of things...but dont want to make it too serious as well...uff... some of you liked it this way...and u n panchu want light ones... Me conphused...🤔...Only Karna can tell me story forward now😉😳

Originally posted by: darklight

😛 Very nice and elegant riti,you may keep it this way or make it jolly even but as long as you are writing I am sure it will be good.👏